keh ke na keh saku tujhe part8 pg23 updt nov 1 - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

as well as daya's short term memory loss... 😆😆 dnt 4gt 2 mention ur stuff yaar!!!😆😆..chal m off 2 bed nw...its nearly 1am... need my beauty sleep

yes my memory loss...hello i have memory loss how can i remember to mention my own problems 😆😉

alright take care yuvi ...talk to you later...goodnight ...sweet dreams 🤗
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blast to come off guys
tasha meeting
so wait wait wait thats all u can do
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Ho gaya bus update jaldi kar dungi
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Part 2


Dutta holding gun and aimed

Baji rao enters in room ' he saw dutta like this n said "kya bhao subha log kisi acchi chiz ko dekhkar apna din shuru karte hai par aap toh "

Dutta turned to Baji in same posture

Baji "bhao baat acchi nahi lagi toh mat sunn par'. iss liye bacche ki jaan lega kya "

Dutta downs the gun "tu our baccha '. Our ye kya bak-bak kar raha hai "

Baji smiled and jumped on bed "bhao meh toh bus yahi keh raha tha ''.. Kabhi toh hassa kar '.. Ye kya jawani meh buddhe logo ki tarha shakal banayi hai "

Dutta "Baji tu janta hai meh ye nahi kar sakta '

Tera gyaan khatam huwa ho toh kaam ki baat kare'.. Nana ka phone aya tha who kuch our din waha honge .hume alert rehne KO kaha hai

Rajan kuch locha karne wala hai '..Security tight rakhna hogi samaja"

Baji" thik hai bhao par pehle nashta kar le aai saheb rah dekh rahi hongi "

Dutta "haan chal"

Both go down

It was regular pn day. Maids are doing their work' kala making anay ready any for school'. Anay running here there ''. Kishore reading news paper

Anay bhagte bhagte dutta ke paas ata hai

Anay "mama "

Dutta pick him up "hey champ, kya ho raha hai"

Anay" school JA raha hu ''. "

Dutta "ok toh ab school ja badme tere liye khilone laenge "

Anay "yehhh bye ' mama "

Kala "isse itna sar par mat chadha bhao '.. Bigad chyega"

Dutta smiled to her "tai aisa kuch nahi hoga '.

Our haan bacche KO SAR nahi chadhayenge toh

Kya iss ghadhe Baji KO chadhayenge "and hit Baji on his back

Baji "aahh bhao mene kya kiya '.."

Everyone laughs

Kala 'chalo sab nashta karte hai"

Dutta node his head and everyone got sited on dining table

Aai saheb "dutta aaj ekadashi hai iss liye meh our kal mandir jaa rahe '..Kuch der meh wapas ayenge'Thik hai '.. "

Dutta "ji aai apna khayal rakhna "

Kishore "bhao chinta mat karo mandir mere office ke raste meh hai toh meh inhe chodunga

Mujhe office meh chodne ke baad gadi inhe lene ko bheg dunga"

Dutta "thik hai jijaji'.. Baji tera ho Gaya ho toh office meh aja mere KO kaam ki baat karni hai "

Baji "ji bhao"

Dutta's office

Dutta sitting on his royal red chair'..

Baji was giving instruction to guards

Baji "kale tu idher pn meh rahega baki tum log

Patil wadi meh Har jaga rahoge, har nake par, har gali meh, har sadak par ' samje"

Dutta got up from his chair

Move up to them ''.. Place his hand on one of guard "ye patil wadi mera illka hai log bharosa karte hai mujh par our meh tum par ''.. Chahe kuch bhi ho patil wadi meh masoom khoon nahi bahega, meh khud har intzaam dekhega "

Guard "ji bhao hum apni jaan laga denge "

Baji "chalo lag jao kaam par"

Everyone goes on work

Baji n dutta look at each other with confidence

At mandir

Aai saheb n kala enters in mandir

As it was ekadashi'. mandir was bit crowdie

Kala "aai saheb aaj har suhagan yaha matha tekne our apne pati ke liye pati, war ke liye

Sukh mangti hai Na aai saheb? "

Aai saheb "haan''' hum bhi aise manga karte the tere baba ke liye ''. Par shayad meri puja meh koi kami reh gayi '.. Chhin liya Bhagwan ne mujhe mera suhag'."

Kala "aai mera ye matlab nahi tha '.. Jo barso pehle huwa USS meh Teri koi galti nahi thi ''.

Woh tere bure karm nahi Kisi ki buri nazar ke wajese huwa ' dhokha diya baba KO unke hi

Dost ne ' "

Aai saheb wipes her tears "tum thik keh rahi kala '. Us parivaar KO meh ne apna mana tha' tum logo meh our UN meh koi farak nahi kiya

Par ye sila diya unhone hamare pyaar ka ''

Tere baba unhe apna dost mante the iss liye meh ne unhe police meh nahi diya par hum unhe par hum unhe maf bhi nahi kar sakte ''"

Kala "aai chod UN purani yaado KO Jin se hum meh sirf Dard mila''.. Aaj baato KO soch chal"

Kala n AS went in main hall of mandir '' kala started puja while AS was talking to pujari ji

Kala closed her eyed n said "aaj ashadi ekadashi hai '' deva vithala tu toh sab janta hai '.. Mere pass sab hai par apna bhao nahi. Woh kuch nahi bolta hai par meh janti hu. Woh apne kandho par boz liye ji raha hai '. Hum sab KO sambhala hai USS ne par in sab meh khud kahi kho Gaya ' tum meh toh sab 'maay baap'

(Maa baap) kehte hai ''. Apne bhakt ke liye

Tu ek eit par hazaro saal se khada hai ''. Mere dutta KO usski manzil de'.. USS ki naav KO ek sahil de ''. Ek sathi Jo jivan ke har tufan diya ban kar usse rah dekha sake "

Bell started ringing by strong wind n

People are singing loudly

"Vithu cha gajar hari naamacha zenda rovila"

loard vithal


(It means lord vithal ka naam lete huye hamne Bhagwan KO pa liya)

Kala ki sacche Mann se ki huyi dua Jo kbul ho gayi '. Dutta ki jivan sangini patil wadi meh pahoch chuki thi '

Patil wadi railway station

Naku take her first step out of train''. Her feet touch the ground '. She found connection

With the land ''. It's weird ''. N starts walking while carrying her bags ''

Dutta n Baji in car

Baji was driving the car while dutta was scanning each part of patil wadi with his sharp eyes ''.

Baji "bhao mero KO lagta hai ab aai saheb tera band bajwa kar hi rahengi ''.. USS KO Jo bulaya hai unhone "

Dutta "kya bol raha hai kise ko bulaya hai aai saheb ne '' dekh mujh se kuch nahi chipa

Jaldi se bata de kya pata hai tujhe iss bare "

Baji "kya re bhao aap toh piche hi pad gaye mera matlab tha ki iss bar aai saheb aap ki shadi ki baat pakki kar dengi '.. Shayad iss liye Minakshi KO bulaya hai ' aap se ''' "

Dutta suddenly become furious "aai saheb kitni bar kaha mujhe shadi nahi karni ' meh Kisi ke sath ghar nahi basa sakta siway USS ke ''.. "

Baji have no idea so he asked "bhao kis ki baat kar rahe ho '.. Kisi se pyaar karte ho aap... aap ne ye chipaya mujh se '."

Dutta try to change the topic "Baji aaj tak meh ne tere se kuch nahi chipaya '' mera matlab tha mera koi bharosa nahi aaj hu kal nahi ... meh Kisi ladki ki jindgi barbard nahi kar sakta '' our ab ye topic yahi band hamesha ke liye "

Baji become quite but somehow he knows something was fishy abt dutta '. He decide find out that

Car stops at one corner as dutta want to check

Security in every small gali ''. Waha gadi nahi jaa sakti so he decided to walked up to it

Focus on Nakusha

Place was beautiful but crowdie ''. It's difficult for her to find right root for her new home '' she hesitated to ask someone the root but then she noticed some kids playing there '' she ask them the address ''. They told her easily ''. She was happy as they were nice to her n thanks them

Suddenly guards came from a black car and starts taking their position ''.

Naku getting more and more nervous '.. Start walking fasting ''. She was shivering in fear'.

So that's why she fumbled drop her bag on ground '. Guard feels bad for that poor girl '..

He walked up her to help her ''. Take his hand forward to pick her up '. At same time she also bend down '' saw gun in his pocket scream so loudly

And start running without taking her bag '' she was so frightened that she ran without looking what was in her way''

Form opposite side dutta was walking and Baji behind him talking on phone

plz play the tone😉


Naku hits dutta hard on his chest ''. In fraction of second dutta was feeling peace at that single moment '' while naku found most safe place in whole world''. His hand around her waist and she tighten her grip on his kurta.

Naku closed her eyes forgotten her fear '. She can smell sweet fragrance form his body '

He was lost in her long silky hairs'' Baji was in total shock as never seen dutta like this ''

But spell seems to be broken '.. Naku came back to present situation form dream fantasy.

She pushed dutta back with force and made her way to escaping from his love prism '

Dutta also regain his mind' he turned to look at her coincidently she also turned while running ''. Her hairs n duptta flowing with wind came across her face '

Dutta can't saw her face but noticed her deep blue eyes filled with tears ' those eyes fixed in his heart forever ..

Baji walked up to dutta placed his hand on shoulder said "bhao ye kya tha? "

Guard also came from behind yelling "ruko ' E ladki meri baat toh suno "

But all his efforts were vain as she was vanished like magic '

Baji "kya re prakash kya huwa?"

He told whole story of that girl '' dutta n Baji amazed by story

Baji "pehli baar aisi ladki dekhi hai Jo sirf gun dekh kar itni darr jaye '. Lagta hai yaha nayi hai "N laughed

Dutta "Baji, kisi ke darr ka mazak nahi udana chahiye ' har kisi ka apna ''. "He stops n noticed red rose which ... she dropped on road.

(Aaji ke words yaad hai Na)

He picks it up. Guard "bhao ye bag woh ladki mere pass gira kar chali gayi iss ka kya karu?"

Baji "ye bag le le baad meh uss ka pata kar ke luata denge "

Baji "ji bhao ghar chale "

Dutta nodded his head in agreement n dropped rose in pocket of his pants

Focus on naku

Naku finally reached her destination '. New home '.. She was tired by those running'.take dip breath '.. Gather her courage ''. Unlocked the house ' it was too messy but still upstairs bedroom was ok for resting '..

Her phone rang. She knew it was none other than babi '.. Naku clears her voice said "haan aai bol "

Babi "bacche ghar pahoch gayi ' thik toh hai na tu?"

Naku "haan aai meh pahoch ' gayi ... ghar se hi baat kar rahi hoon..."

Aai "thik hai tu Aram kar bhuk lagi hogi na tere bag meh meh ne kuch khane ki chize rakhi hai.

Kha Lena... "

Naku "ji aai kha lungi tu bhi soja ' dada KO kehna meh ne yaad kiya tha ' aai ek baat bolu Teri our dada ki bahut yaad AA rahi ' tum log jaldi ajao"

Babi smiled said "mujhe bhi Teri yaad aa rahi hai '. Do din ke baad ajaenge hum chinta mat kar ' soja ' tab tak bappa hai Na waha Tera

Khatal rakhne ke liye "

Both cut the phone

Babi wipes her tears said "pagali hai Bilcul "

Naku put phone down '. She was hungry...

Then she remembered that she dropped her bag near the guard '.. So she decide to rest ' lay down on bed ' par USS ajane ki tasveer baar baar USS KO sata rahi thi .. Dil meh lakho sawal par koi jawab nahi '.

Focus on dutta


Sill thinking abt that unknown girl n her strange brevier '.. Dutta to himself "kya hai ye anjana Dard our sukoon '.. Sukoon kuch pane ka our Dard woh pal itni jaldi khatam hone ka "

He takes out the rose from his pocket '.. Cares it with his palm'sit on his chair '.

IMAGINE JUST SLIT SHOT

Dutta takes deep breath n said" Aaj bhi nind nahi AA rahi hai '' naku '"

Naku immediately get up from her bed said "dutta mujhe pukar raha hai '. Mera dil galat nahi ho sakta 'woh yahi kahi aas pass hai"

She gets up from her bed walk up to swing in her balcony sat on it '.

Dutta also get up form CHAIR walk up to window sat on window frame ''.

Dutta "tujhe yaad hai hum dono ko ek poem acchi lagi thi '. Baad meh hum ne usse gana bana diya tha '.. Aaj Mann kar raha usse phir se gungunane KO "

Naku "yaad hai kaise gaate the hum woh gana

Chup kar'.. Kyu ki hum meh darr tha usse koi sunn Na le '. Raat meh gacchi par

(On Terence) '' chand our taro KO dekh kar '

Dekh aaj phir wahi chand wahi tare our WO hi hum ''. "

Play the song here

To feel the passion


Music starts (its form famous Marathi movie ... which got national award for music'. Mean niche likha hai padh Lena)

Dutta start singing

"Rasta nava ha pan sobat asli chuknya chi ata mag bhiti kasli

Je manat laple ahe ya nazare madhu Ni diste

Apluya pashi yeil je apule aste"

(Poem means ye Rasta naya hai par humsafer

Aisa ho toh rah bhulne ka koi darr nahi

Jo dil chupa hai nazro meh dikhta hai

Jo apna hai who khud apne pass ata hai)

Naku takes swing singing

"Rasta chale ha ki chalalo apan

Umle kali hi kay tyache kaaran

Kuthun pakhru undun hatha war baste

Apluya pashi yeil je apule aste"

(Ye rah chal rahi hai ki hum chal rahe hai'' ye kali kyu khil rahi hai ' ye titliya kaha se undkar

Hath par beth rahi hai... Jo apna hai who khud apne pass ata hai)

Flashback

Small Dutta naku on roof of their house'.. Its night both seated side by side watching stars n moon '. Singing song together'. Naku place her head on his shoulder '. His hand around her '

At present

Dono gane meh khud kho dete hai''palke bhari hone lagi '.. And finaly both fallen in deep sleep'.. Shayad chand sitare bhi inka pyaar dekha kar soch rahe the '' koi Kisi KO itna Chahe ki woh hi USS ka Bhagwan ban jata hai''

A new day '.. New morning '. Baji enters dutta's room as always ' yelling "bhao '"

Dutta woke up by his voice asked "kyu re asman gir Gaya kya Jo itna chikh raha hai?"

Baji "woh aap ko niche bulaya hai '. Aai sahib ne ..."

Dutta "chal par ye bata ki huwa kya"

Baji" woh sab meh nahi janta aap chaliye warna aaj mera band baje ga"

Dutta n baji both does down'.. Everyone was gathered in hall '. Someone was hugging kala ' kala" accha kiya Jo tum ayi "

She broke hug n dutta saw her face '. That's making change in his expression as he knows what going to happen' girl was Minakshi nana's daughter '

Aai sahib saw dutta said "aja dutta dekh Minakshi ayi hai "

Dutta just nodded his neck slightly'.

Minakshi "dutta kitne dino baad tum se mil kar accha laga" with fake smile on face

Dutta was getting irritated ' so he back off the situation n said "aai mujhe kaam hai ' meh apne kamre meh hu '"

Before anyone react he was already gone '..

Aai "ye kya huwa hai isse?"

Baji "chinta nako aai meh Na '. Dekhta hai kya huwa usse" n he goes upstairs

Kala "Minakshi tu Aram kar ye sab toh chlta rahega" as she was cooling down whole situation

Upstairs dutta was in his furious mood


Baji "ye kya tha bhao aisa sab ke samne aap yah upar chale aye '.. Kaisa laga hoga unko "

Dutta in super anger "toh kya karta meh waha Jo tamasha ho raha tha USS meh shamil ho jata"

Baji knows that it's not right time to explain him whole thing so try to change topic then saw the which guard have given tham

Baji" bhao ye toh wahi bag hai Na USS ajnabi ladki ka ''.. Khol ke dekhe iss?"

Naku's eyes flashes in front of his eyes ' remembering the incident '

Dutta" kisi ladki ka bag kho le ga tu pagal ho gaya hai "

Baji "bhao waise se bhi uss ladki ke bare meh hum kuch nahi jante iss se kam se kam kuch toh pata chalega"

Dutta finally agreed after baji's long lecture' baji open the bag '. It was cloths in it'. Then he found some law books

Baji laughed n said "bhao lagta hai ye law padh rahi'.. Vakil benegi '. Aisi ladki Jo gun se darr jaye woh kya logo ke samne sach our jhoot ka hisab karegi"

Dutta" bakwas band kar our apna kam kar "

Baji again start searching found beautiful statue of ganpati bappa ''

Baji "bhao ye toh Teri tarha bappa bhakt nikali re "handover him the statue

Dutta takes blessing form bappa ' now baji got

Her Tiffin '.. Baji "lagta hai kisi ne ghar se diya hoga "

Dutta opens it '.. There was some besan ke laddus in it '' he found it same kind of laddu which he loves to eat with his naku''. Dutta again lost in flashback ''. Then baji almost yelled

Baji "mil gaya bhao ...mujhe mil gay uss ka pata" as he found small chit in one of pockets of bag

Dutta read the address n said "ye toh wahi ghar ka pata '.. Jo apne chai ke adde ke samne hai'.. Lagta waha ye rehne ayi hai "

Baji "bhao tu ruk meh isse de ke ata hai"

Dutta" nahi baji meh bhi chalega '. Usse maffi mangni hai mujhe akhir ye meri jimedari hai "

So both went toward that house ''.

Focus on naku

She was arranging house as it was messy' she was cleaning the window frame '' wind started curtains started flowing with it'.. Naku was lost in her own world''

Car stops in front of house '. Both got out of it and started walking up to gate ''. Dutta stopped there for moment '. Told baji that he was going house alone' he has to wait here

Dutta walked in '. Saw that house was still to arrange' then some word hits word hit on his ears '''he turned noticed a female shadow

Behind the curtains singing ''. Voice was full of feeling as it was in deep pain''. Tried found something which have lost... he can't under why he getting attracted to it

Naku was singing

"Rama raghunand Na

Ashrmat ya kadhi re yeshil

Rama raghunand Na

Mi n ahilya shrapit nari

Mi Na janki raj kumari

Din dar hi wedi shabari

Akhand tujhe hee naam pukari "

(Its most touching lines form greate book git Ramayana in which whole story of Rama described in form of poems ''' meaning of this word explain her feeling

Poet means

Ram aap iss mere ghar kab awoge' meh ahilya toh nahi jise koi sharap (curse) se mukti chahiye '.. Na meh sita maa ke jaise ek raj kumari hu ' meh toh USS garib jogan shabari ki tarha hu Jo aap ka naam pukarti hu ''. Sirf apke darshan chahti hoon)

Shayad naku bhi USS shabari tarha sirf dutta ki jogan thi wahi usske Bhagwan the wahi USS ki aas '.. Na usse iss pyaar ke badle kuch chahiye tha woh toh apne iss mohhbat meh puri jindgi bitane KO tayar thi'. Apne aap KO usse KO sop kar '. Woh USS ki ek jalak chahti thi

Dutta was lost himself in those words ' his hand pushes the vase on table slightly that's why it fell down' naku heard the sound '. N she comes out off behind the curtains '' his eyes saw a girl with white complexion '. Pink rose like lips' n her mesmerizing eyes '

It's enough for her identification as she was same one '. Her duptta around was tied her waist as was cleaning the house''. When she notice dutta gauzing at her '. She untied her duptta ' wrap it around her neck '. Downs her eyes sight'' he also got embarrassed abt his Bevier ' gather courage n says


"Ji woh aap ka bag waha gir Gaya tha '.. Mujhe USS guard ne bataya ''. Usse lotane aya tha'.maffi mangni thi aap se ' USS din aap mujhse takara gayi' par yaha aap ko tang nahi karega ' uss din woh guard bhi aap ki madat karna chahta tha '. Aap darr gayi''. "Dutta was talking to her '. She doesn't up her eye sight for once '. So dutta also finish his words saying "meh chalta hoon "and handover her bag to her

N he walks out of the house ''. When he crossed the gate ''. She run toward the window watches him when both got seated in car'' she was staring at him '.. He felt her eyes on him'. Looked at her '' immediately turned to back avoiding his eyes '..

Episode ends

Naku's back to dutta while '. Dutta staring at her form car ''.. With questioned eyes

Background voice saying

Phir mile dil jaga anjana ehsaas '. Par kya pehchan payenge dutta Nakusha apne sacche pyaar KO?

Next coming soon

Hope u enjoy this one

😃LoveSana😃

Edited by sana141994 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55

thnx for the PM...

so kala is a goody goody in the sense tht she wnts wts best for her bro..bt defo h8s naku n her family...al cos of the misunderstanding...n i no its gna tke time b4 its cleared out...
oh no minakshi... another sups/seema in the makin...? does she care/like dutta or is tht all a natak like her dad 2? who shall we imagine her as...i mean wt actress?
aww tasha met with a hug...wel kinda a hug, aww she gt scared seeing the gun... i was wondering hw she wil cope with dutta's illegal businesses considering she's studying law so obv may l8r find herself in a dif situation...
so they gna b meeting agen in the next update...post it soon...i reali like ur style of writing... the pics make it easy to visualise their expressions... loved the last pic of dutta😳
Edited by Yuvika_15 - 14 years ago
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well
iss baar kuch naya kiya hai
try to show all
mood of mr dutta shriram patil
thodi reseach kar ke kuch marathi stuff dala hai
hope u all like it
sana

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Cute update with D&N meeting but not realising each other's identity. Dutta very eager to meet the girl he bumped, why didnt he find out who she was when he was so curious nd anxious about her? Gadha hain, issliye i guess😆. D&N, one a gangster and the other doing law, what an irony? Thank God! Kala is poitive character or atleast now she is one. The visuals r great, brings back memories of Vintage LTL, Thanx for the effort nd the pm. Waitin anxiously for the next round. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good one sana waiting eagerly for the next,thanks for pm and an awesome update.
Edited by krishaa - 14 years ago
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thnx 4 pm
no words to describe the update ..just awesome
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Posted: 14 years ago
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well done SANA great update...the visuals of Mishal/Dutta very well used for identification..loved the opening scene Duji humour..bhaut mazza aye..I was smiling through out... the collision between him and Nakku was simple but it created the impact. wooh Dutta/Nakku break into song! loved the shttling back and forth in time ...well the other woman seemed to have arrived much to Dutta's dislike! loved the admixture of Marathi..good job..Waise I dont know the language at all ,but welcome the inclusion of the english,romanenglish/hindi/urdu
in the written text..👍🏼
thanks for the pm... please continue [how's you toe?] xxhammie

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