FF:Mehrbaan saayein(chapter15,,the end,,,page37)

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tamannA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#201

hey rubal mere bhi exam 27 june ko finish honge

Edited by rrs1391 - 14 years ago

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mnx12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#202

Good update,👏 thanks, let your exams get over first & then update.😊

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Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 14 years ago

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ah lovely update dear
me know that dutta done all that
poor nakku but still decide to stay with him think becoz of dutta's condition at that time and love the daayi maa and her mother give to her after her marriage.
like that dutta tell truth to her to start their relationship with truth and love
dutta's parents yuck bahut pakaya .
thanks for pm

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rubal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv
ah lovely update dear
me know that dutta done all that
poor nakku but still decide to stay with him think becoz of dutta's condition at that time and love the daayi maa and her mother give to her after her marriage.
like that dutta tell truth to her to start their relationship with truth and love
dutta's parents yuck bahut pakaya .
thanks for pm

i kew that you know about the story

thanks for reading

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suhana19

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Posted: 14 years ago

#205

Hey dear Rubal🤗

Thanx alot for the wonderful update and Pm🤗Loved it as always..

Wow the truth and suspense is out in open😳 Dutta was involved in kidnapping plan ...But sonali didn"t knew about the other plan that was going to happen ...Haila he married her coz of the land...But iam sure he is going to fall in love with her soon😍 Omg OmG that "wapas toh aaogi na" that is enough to send me to tashaland😆loved it ..thanx yaar ...will wait for the nxt part eagerly ...pls jaldi update karna ...u take care and see ya around

Love and hugs

suhana🤗

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tamannA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#206

when will you update rubal tell me please

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rubal

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: rrs1391
when will you update rubal tell me please

this weekend sat or sun day

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rubal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#208

hi girls there is nothing much in this chapter agar skip karna chaho to kar sakte ho

chapter12

Patil niwas

Nakku:madhu madhu darwaza kholo

Madhu:ji bhabhi,aapne bulaya

Nakku:tum theek toh ho na

Madhu:ji bhabhi main theek hoon mujhe kya huya hai

Nakku:tume dukh ho raha hai

Madhu:aise baatein sun kar khush kaun ho sakta

Nakku:tum,,,,,,,,,,,,wo sahil ,,,,,,,,meri madad karogi mujhe nahi pata sahil kya khata hai,,,,,,,,,,wo bhuka hoga

Madhu:are haan,,,, main is sab mein bhool hi gayi sahil ke baare mein

Nakku:to chalo kitchen mein chalte hai

Madhu:ji chaliye

Madhu and nakku in the kicthen.

Nakku:(making chapatis )madhu,tumhare saath itna kuch ho gaya,tumhare bhaiya gussa karte hai,,,,,,,,,,par tumhe kabhi gussa mein nahi dekha,tumhe doosron se koi shakayat nahi ki.tumhari jagah koi aur hota to shayad apni kismat ko kosta,tum yeh sab kaise sahti ho ,main hoti kab ka chod ke chali gayi hoti

Madhu:bhabhi aisa nahi ke mujhe koi farak nahi padta,main bhi insaan hoon ,mujhe bhi dard hota hai,aap bhi hai,aur yahan hi,,,,,,,,main akele apne baare mein sochungi tu sawarthi kehlaungi.Aap bhi to yahan sab dekh rahi hai

Nakku:madhu mujhe maaf kardo maine apna sara gussa tumpe nikala

Madhu:aapne bhaiya se baat ki,ab sab kuch theek hai na

Nakku:haan,sab theek hai.madhu,,,,,,,,,,wo tumhare bhaiya bol rahe the ke kal tum shopping ke liye chale jana,agar mujhe waqt mila to main bhi chalungi

Madhu:accha bahana hai ,mujhe yahan se bhejne ka

Nakku:ye tumhe yahan se bhejna nahi chahte,ye bas chahte hai ke tum khush raho,ye khud bahot pareshan hai aur ye bas chahte hia ke tum unki maa ke samne na aao kyunkki ye nahi chahte tumhe phir kuch sunna pade

Madhu:bhabhi,,,,,,,aaj tak main sunti hi aayi hoon ,,,,,,,mujhe to ab adat ho chuki hai,par mujhe pata hai agar is duniye main mujhe koi samajhta hia to wo sirf bhaiya hain,main bhaiya ko kabhi bhi galat nahi samajh sakti ,main jaanti hoon bhaiya meri khushi ke liye ye shopping plan bana rahe hai

Nakku:tum bilkul inke jaisi ho,baatein bhi inke jaisi karti ho sirf ek farak hai

Madhu:kya

Nakku:tumhare bhaiya ko gussa bahut aata hai

Madhu:aisa nahi hai bhaiya gussa sirf galat baat par karte hai

Nakku:khana ban gaya,ab ,,,,,kis kis ko dena hai

Madhu:mujhe nahi lagta papa ya aayi sahib khayen gi wo toh dinner kar ke aayen honge.Main sahil ko khana deti hoon,bhaiya aur daayi maa ne toh hospital mein hi kha liya tha aur baaji bhi apne doston ke saath gaya tha ,khana kha kar hi aaya hoga

Nakku:theek hai,,,,,,suno madhu main bhi saath chaloon

Madhu:ji chaliye

They both goes to Sahil's room.

Madhu:sahil toh yahan nahi hai

Nakku:idhar hi hoga main baaji ke kamre mein dekh ke aati hoon

Daayi maa(comes)nakku koi zaroorat nahi jane gi wo sahil malkin ke kamre mein hai

Madhu:daayi maa bhaiya ne sahil ko unse door rakhne ke liye bola tha

Nakku:agar inko pata chale ga to ye bahut gussa honge

Daayi maa:main jaanti hoon nakku,par malkin sahil ke saath kuch samay bitana chahti thi,isiliye maine unhe nahi roka,mujhe laga main theek kar rahi hoon

Madhu:aapne bilkul theek kiya hai daayi maa ,bhabhi aap lpese bhaiya ko mat batana

Nakku:par agar inhe kisi aur se pata chal gaya to

Daayi maa:kaun bataye gaya hamare ilawa jaanta hi kaun hai ,tum dono ab so jao kaafi raat ho chuki hai

Madhu:ji,,bhabhi chaliye

Nakku and madhu going upstairs.

Nakku:madhu mujhe neend nahi aa rahi

Madhu:mujhe bhi nahi aa rahi,,,,,,ek kaam kare bahar terrace pe chalte hai,,,jhule pe baith kar baat karte hai

Nakku:hm,chalo

They both went to terrace.Baaji was already there.

Madhu:arey ,baaji tum yahan kya kar rahe ho

Baaji:aap dono yahan kya kar rahen hai,main to yunhi kuch soch raha tha

Nakku:baaji bhaiya,,itni raat ko kya soch rahen the

Baaji:arey nahi vahini ,,,,,,,ap dono baitho phir batata hoon,,,,,woh main bhau ke baare main soch raha tha

Madhu:baaji kal ham bahar ghumne chale

Baaji:chalenge ,kahan jana hai tujhe

Madhu:kahin bhi,jahan shaanti mile

Dutta(coming toward them):kyun,yahan shaanti nahi mil rahi tujhe

Madhu:arey bhaiya aap kab aaye

Dutta:abhi sahil ke room mein jaa raha tum logon ki awaaz suni to yahan aa gaya,Sahil kahan hai

Madhu:bhaiya wo so gaya,subah dekh lena

Dutta:tum log kya batein kar rahe ho

Baaji:bhao agar tereko baat karni hai to bhi baith sakta hai,itni der tak seedha khada rahega to thak jayega,doctor ne rest karne ko bola hai

Dutta:(took place near to madhu)madhu kahan jana hai tujhe kal,,,,,,, shopping ke liye jao ,nakku kko bhi saath le jana

Baaji:haan madhu shopping ke liye chalte hai main bhi naye kapre kharide ga

Madhu:bhaiya ,,,,,,,wo ,,,,main ,,,main soch rahi london wapas chali jaun

Dutta:maine is baare mein socha hai aur main yehi chahta hoon ke tu yahan ruk,sarita aunty bhi yehi chahti hai

Baaji:mereko neend aa rahi hai ,mujhe lagta kaafi raat ho chuki hai,sabko so jana chahiye

Dutta:baaji tujhe neend a rahi hai to tu jaa sakta hai par mujhe abhi madhu se baat karni hai.Madhu main tumhe nahi jaane de sakta,tum maa aurSRP ki chinnta mat karo wo bas kuch hi dino mein wapas chale jayenge.

Madhu:bhaiya baaji sahi bol raha ,kaafi raat ho chuki hai subah uth kar baat karenge

Everyone when left the terrace.

Nakku and dutta in their room.The phone rings.

Dutta:ji,main bilkul theek hoon,...aap nakku se baat karengi...

Dutta:(giving the phone to nakku)nakku ye le baat kar

Nakku:kaun hai

Dutta:sonali

to be continued...

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Swapna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#209

Hey rubal,

Thanks for the pm . Nice simple update. Madhu, naku freindship is awesome . They got along with each other . Madhu is so sweet girl .

Terrace meeting nice .

Waiting for the next update .