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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana19

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Hey dear hamiee 🤗 hi suhana
Sorry really very late this time .. 😳 but here finally 😉 I know you are very busy
Thanx a million for the brillant UD and Pm as always ...Loved it to the core ❤️
So love birds back to there nest for Diwali but with KMH ...well love the welcome ..Omg poor major everyone pulling his leg 😆 Poor him ...But still he took it ..awww indeed a sweet munno ...
Baaji and dutta bar scenes are always fab ⭐️ And Naku tapkokfying in btwn was indeed good ..and Naku"s hint was great ...well samAjdhar ko Ishaara Kafi Hota hai ...baaji is happy to see them back ... yes you are right ,but then Dutta was smart in some areas of in life ,thank heavens's for that..other wise ,how frustarating for Naku ,but then she knows her Saab well
Hain mein marjawaa what was that ? Bechari baachi ki jaan Le ga kya 😆 But loved his style ..ek dum hatke hai major Ka pyar karne Ka style ..he wanted her to squeeze in his arms ..loved the dress... filmiy dailouge suhana..haaa
Yeah naku jealous and possessive about her man ..and dnt like anyone eye her men ...pyar hai usko Saab se ..barosa hai ..but it's natural to be jealous .. 😳 gosh this soundss soo filmy ,sorry but haan ,you are right she does trust him ,and her feelings about sharing him are quite natural
So dutta"s morning tea is here ..and she see"s chunni and that to so close ... 😉
Hain mein mar gayi what a style ? Major swept Naku off her feet "dreamy muah" loved loved loved the payal wearing scene and there momen...glad you enjoyed the tasha scenes
The breakfast scene is always a pleasure to read a family time ..once again dutta center of attraction ...and look who is back with sandwiches ..the men was starved without them ..waise bhi he eats spoonful mentioned by Khan ...and he gave her back
Wow he ate pooha for naku and she passed with flying Colours .. yes Naku ke sandwiches us ke jaan hain,I guess some thing dont change with him.like his fav foods and small appetite
Omg Naku and dutta"s last scene and what did I read it right 😲 He said let's get married "me in heaven " SOOO YOU ARE ANOTHER ONE WHO WANTS TO SEE THEM MARRIED..well hummm.soochna para ga...
Well Khan passed in the test az well good ...will wait for the nxt part ..thanx alot once Again ...

this was my favourite scene out of the complete UD,I have a certain fondness towards Khan...her beauty ,innocence and hopeless pining for some she knows she'll never get...
Lots of love and hugs
SUHANA,hammie apprecaites your lovely comments and the sparkly style of saying thank you for my efforts...with thanks xhammie
Suhana.

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Posted: 13 years ago
aur mein ,bhi 😆😆
oyeee paapi raju...good to hear from you mate!
Edited.Hammie srrie i was alte for last part cmmnt but this time i decided will not go to the forum till i have commented else ,it gets delayed ,,,,😆😆
thanks for your love sweetheart!
ok 1st n foremeost i read all ur updates the momet isaw them,,so even if i am late in commenting i am proud to say i amm always ahead in reading 😆😆😆 thankyou thankyou!! kisseyyy
loved part1 ,, dutta 's traingin clsses also gave me sme knowledge ,,and the group is gud ,,, aww he didnt like the fact tht khan will be cmng and he iwll not get any privacy aww how nakku was jealous and was nt talkign to him thru out the ride and hiw dutta was waitingto get to her 😆😆
yeah well ,he had certain up to no good things planned with his girl..aur ab stopper lag giya tu yess sulk tu kare ga ,didn't help though ke woh bhi mood mein ah gaye..
i lvoed part as much ,,i loved the way u described the rangoli ,,--i love making rangoli ,,with flowers ,coloured rice and colors ,,,
wowo and lso loved the way u described each ana d every person dress and the house nad diwas and all were so beautifuly described i could visualise them ,,thanks 👏👏
Oh how can i not mention , all the lovely food items listed and trust me my mouth was watering just thinkign of al these being ready 😆😆😆
thanks you enjoyed the celebrations,,tried to get the essence of the festival...pressies,decoration food,funand of course family get together...
and i dnt miss the mention of name rajoo reminded me of me 😆😆😆
hailaaa...how romantic...but sorry tu nehi hai woh .. you are my raju!!! and raju for Major Dutta as welll!
loved the way the gifts were given,,, all sang so sportng li ,,awww loved the way Duta geve her payals OMG he actully lifted her on his shoulders and tied the payals on her ankels awww 😍
yesss ..romance and a bit of cheese ka massala dela hai mein ne ,lagta hai mazza ayea hai thujhe
absolutely fell in love agian with MAjor dutta ,,how can he do this 😍 make us fal in love all over agian ,,, and the kiss oh my ☺️
oyeee wake up come back to the real world ... yes he does things in his on way ,and what's more the woman responds very well I have to say ..so the lion will carry on with his onslaughts!
and wht was the the last part ,,loved the way officer khan and dutta took charge and loved the way khan rescued the children ,,but wht was the assement .,ok she did well so wht does it mean, wil she be moved to counter terrosirm traingin ? waiting for next part soonn,,,,,like tommorrow 😳😳😳 well whether she will or will nt we'll have to see in the next UD..
Oh Thank u hammie ,, the wirter in u is blossoming and i am loving ,wanting to kwn wht next
LISTEN THANKS ,but have to say it has to be your comments that brings out the words and imagination in me..without which Iwould be nothing raju!
luv u loads hammie ,god bless 🤗
thanks sooo very much Raj,for reading the UD whch was lonnng and for giving lovely comments
with much love xxxhammie
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update love it so tasha clear the diffrences for khan and so dutta make nakku wear payal wow love it and the gift condition is good and nakku sing song oh good and the diwali scene when dutta thjis nakku as bomb was mast so khan is for assessment and khan has some feelings for dutta oops bechari and dutta like sandviches
hi dear.rrs1391.glad you enjoyed the Diwali UD,it was meant to be a family festival ,but then in an army guy's life any thing can happen ,any time..he just has to be prepared ,and she as well the junior officer!..many thanks and keep reading ... much love xxxhammie
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ok yesss got your message loud and clear this morning!!!1 .oye went for a jolly last nite..thore bheek gaye tu soote reha... haaa.ok me here ab ... having triple vision though!!!!
Perfect! Hammie u have outdone urself👏. ohhh yesss so you liked it ? hummm.

It was a perfect setting of festivities, family, fun and friendship. The game of oneupmanship continues between the two even though they can barely hide their love nd admiration for each other. Khan overwhelmed at the sight nd sounds of PN. Baji nd his penchant for embarassing bhau with his over the board PDA nd his constant hankering for booze, like a moth to fire. haaa,salla bedwaraa.. well put though.brvv

Dutta's strict orders to maintain decorum in front of the guest nd his student Khan has all but fallen on deaf ears, instead he is facing a full frontal attack on his macho image by his own.
loved the phrase frontal attack .hai hai ..kya combat lingo hai.yess hammie turned onnn
'The impressions, the keeping up appearances' all thrown to wind, as khan finds out how luvd nd pampered dutta is😆.

Haye hayee! dutta not amused that naku was being already drawn to her domestic duties nd AS to his rescue, must say mother nd son have a grt mind reading skills yes, only next to the two love birds constantly eyeing each other nd conveying so much with eyes nd eyebrows.😍

mind you he is so typical ,newly husband type bas biwi kuch kaam ne kara merasamna baethi reha..,but mind you he knows hat she will be inundated with kitchen duties but yes ,,apni ma ko haat mein rekha hai ..ankoon ke signals samajhe jata hai..or shall we say he has that effect on all females...period!
Khan needs to learn more about life apart frm her military skills. Someone needs to teach her that not everything we fancy is atttainable.
oh for heaven's sake ab poor Khan is under your butt..yaar kya hai muhje pasand hai Khan...
she is modelled on a very beautiful actress of nepali orgin.hammie loves her.so there you know now...
Her thoughts r disturbing nd borders onimmorality😲
when I first read I thought nothing of the word ..but yess you may be right ...to "covet",any thing that belongs to other ..hummm.so Meera ke admiration,devotion to Kana ?? just a thought I dont have he answer ..perhaps this is debatable...
. "Envy is the art of counting the other fellow's blessings instead of your own" I do understand her background of a less fortunate where she lost her parents nd is maybe devoid of emotional bonding nd craves for some attention. yess but I think she knows where she stands however ,dil tu pagal hai .😉 haaa..

Baji has stole bhau's heart with just this one act, picking a perfect gift for nakku has proved he is no less than big brother at the art of romance. What drama by the major, when he is all the time accusing baji of the same, conveniently left the bar to catch up with naku as soon as he realised he has a chance of meeting her in private. "Major saab, sab jante hain" 😃 in fact the three of them are together in this mohabbat ..AUR waise bhi Baji loves them both..but yes for Baji to look after every thing that Dutta will require .has to be blood brothers in action..how they are missed😭

Wow wow wo!!! what attitude nd what style major saab has, just when u thought here he goes again! we r grounded back to earth. Yes, it is as naku put it, the gremlin attack! hahaha!!!! The interaction between the two is never dull nd this is what endears me, the nok jhok, the constant bickering brings out the best nd the worst of the two. The diwali morning has been very adventurous for naku who finds herself seated on shoulders of major🤣, nd what an innovative way of tying the payal,😆 kya gyan mil raha hai muft ka! except for the likes of 'kamasutra' there r very few instances where one can find such unique ways of impressing luvd ones. Hammie tussi grt ho! oye ssshhh kyon mujhe forum mein se ban kerna hai plzzz ,brvvv have a heart...marwana hai mujhe dev.team se ..haaa loved the in red phrase ...fell off my chair and dented my bum... I need to have a floor cushion near my chair when Iam reading your comments lardki ..this is worst then what Major does to Naku!

Again bowled by the unique distribution of gifts, baji with suds was hilarious nd i was imagining suds with his complete denture display, would be one hell of a sight gyrating his hips nd shaking to baji's tunes🤣. GOSH! khan had to sing a romantic number unmindful of the place nd the people. Naku sensing dutta's discomfort at this. This is turning into a mystery nd a thriller more than a romantic. HAAA LOVED THE PHRASE IN RED yes it had to be suddie ..and Baji at it...kya yaar phir Khan ..gana tu mera fav hai or jis pe picturise hoya hai ..well you know..

What perfect timing for Major to propose to naku, Splendid! it could not get any more romantic, the occasion, the surroundings, the fireworks nd the heady feeling, tooo good! But Wait! drama abhi baki hai mere dost, a well orchestrated one, where khan proves she is no kachi kali. But was the family in the loop or was taken for a ride like us by Hammie err military is my question nd did he have to chose this time to propose her, im wondering now... only Hammie can tell. loved the phrases..was aiming for the wooden floor again ,but liked the appellative for Khan..pasand ah gayi phir good had to raise her... yesss find out he ot come in next UD,BUT GET REAL BRVVV shaadi ho gaye to what ten ..how boring...

Thank u again Hammie for a brilliant episode nd waiting for the next one, luv u, jhappis nd pappis for giving a cracker of an update🤗, Take care!

lovvved your comments..my eyes search and wait for your comments ,but then you know that don't you ..but still say stand by me... much love xxxhammie
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi hammie loved the diwali celebration from the lightning ,decore , performance ,cuisine & D-N looked like a pathaka themselves ,dutta gift for naku payal great i just love anklet 😊 wish i got one ,
chaal payal nehi tu kuch tu present mila hoogathujhe naku? main ne thuje UD jo diya consider that a pressie from hammie...
khan is eyeing our dutta bad for her already taken ,high point was when dutta proposed naku for marriage lekin ques toh adhura rah gaya ,shaadi ka wait kab se kar rahein hai ,
next part mein lauren ke entry you got me thinking ?
you will get your answers in the next UD naku ..intezzar ker...
like always you are amazing UD SOON tc hammiee😊
Iam amazing Naku ..but not more than Major Dutta himself! thanks for your lovely comments as always love to receive them,Naku... much love xxxhammie
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Amazing 😊😊😊😊

Sona! thanks for reading the UD and enjoying it! much love xxhammie
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi hammie
ranjuuu hellooo

amazing update hammie like always👏

diwali superb 😛
glad you liked it ,was special ,had to be major event ,celebrations

food selection😃
tried to pick common ,celebratory cuisine used in Maharashtra
baaji and suds dance😆
yesss ,that was the comic entertainment..
tasha scene like always very hot 😉
yes have to make it OTT may be sometimes..but so far response has been positive
dutta's breakfast 😆
haan us ke sandwiches aur uska appetite ..tu exclusive Dutta features hain
khan's bravery superb
see! the life of an army pesron is forever on alert ,and changing!
wonderful update 👏
mighty pleased you enjoyed it and commented so positively...
thanks for pm
much love Ranju.xxxhammie
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Posted: 13 years ago

Very nice update👏 Diwali celebration was good. Handling Bomb sacre was well explained, one moment enjoying Diwali & next moment handling imergency, that's Army life. Thanks for the PM, waiting for the next part😊

hellooo meenakshi...great to hear from you mate!
soo you liked the UD YEP YOU GOT THE CRUX OF AN ARMY person's life..THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS
MUCH LOVE XXXHAMMIE
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: noreen

HELOOO..noreen.
fab update, loved the mum son moment when they got home and then baaji
roops with their bickering was so nice to witness then D getting all serious was bound to happen,the surroundings sounded so good!!
yes it was getting home once again..aur bhi diwali ke utsav per..I enjoyed doing this UD
D with the payal and such an unusual way to put it on!!!!!!!🤣 that definitely scored brownie points for N😉 YEAH had a feeling ye scene aur kuch nehi tu hit to ho jayea ga ..payals were he real star though!
It was nice to see N getting on so good with Khan as both are so alike,and how could D resist N cooking!! well Naku is pretty civilized ,wise bhi use pata hai Khan fauji hai tu kio matalaab nehi banata misbehave kerne ka ..but Dutta ko kya keha gi bad mein has yet to be seen..
and what a way to purpose only to be gone again, back to action hey!
the bomb scare had me on edge but thankgod everything worked out
welll this in keeping with the senario that army guys and dols have to be on red alert always!
the precap!! more women coing for D again!!😆
well find out in the next update... thanks for your wonderful comments Noreen ,with much love xxxhammie
thanks for the update, waiting for the next.

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It takes two to tango!! Right? So as long as dutta is after the chuni nd its owner, no worries let the whole female clan clamour for his attention. So ur khan is after the once famous nepali Manisha koirala if im not wrong nd im no fan of shahrukh so dont tell ur major is modelled on him [i can only recollect the two being paired in dilse where it was a luv triangle, Gosh!]. Im so confused now🤔, r u hinting on some storyline based on some bollywood movie? Nahiiin!! plzzz say NO![drama mat samajna] God save Hammie nd her khan, i bet if ever dutta falls for any female it has to be naku again nd none else. Naku bhi kuch kum thodi na hain, eet ka jawab pathar se degi, So carry on Hammie, i dare u to try the infidelity/luv triangle angle, 'purani sandals ki barish ki kwahish hain to poori karle'😆.

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