Painful Rapture thread 1 chap-1 ~p 1~ 37 - Page 45

Originally posted by: rrs1391

awsem i really love you yaar you just write the update according to the readers so finally nakku ne sabak sikha hi diya part 1 was fab so nakku was missing hmm and he missed her in bedroom breakfast table and ask aai sahib about her and drive to dera to meet her so ab gadhe ko pata chali nakku ki importance and in the song he take her name ,and screamed nakku love it second part is setisfying me so dutta wanted her to run in his arms but nakku give him a great punishment i really love this part and the conversation nakku's comments and dutta feels guilty and nakku takes roops baaji side and prepare him for that and finally dutta gave in to make nakku his and then their romance starts again😳 lovely hammie .so mama aa gaya and this mama comment on dutta's profession but our dutta is lion he has all the answers and the kitchen kiss was amazing and baaji is the chaukidaar of them👏 yaar ye wait bahut lamba hai

thanks for a complimentary feed back..rrs I try and do what the readers what the reader'sdesire ..its called writers descretion..but remember life mein hr kuch waise nehi hota jaisa hum chataien hain...if that was the case our tears and woes would have kept Mishal/Mahi playing our Dutta and Naku
...thanks for your pm,for being understanding... i was missingyou lot that's why i thought to my self the least I can do is say thanks to you..xxxhammie..

Originally posted by: suhana19

Reserved 🤗 will be back later 😉

Hey Dear Hamiee🤗

First of all yaara iam really very Sorry for being so late😳My bad ...But really what jhakas update 😉 don't know about jhakas? asil mein jhakas tu tab hota jab goli ka ek do round jalte...you know firing shiring...

Thanx alot for the wonderful Update and Pm🤗Loved it to the core❤️ thanks

Starting with Dutta Missing naku and her presence 😳,,,,He wanting to be with her ...Omg the song u choose took my breath away ..Very beautifully written👏⭐️...yes I enjoyed writing it ..still a little savagry..Dutta style was amiss... may be in a fit of passion he shold have banged his jeep ..!

And when they come face to face a slience😉...Really desperate to hold her in arms ...Truly ,madly and deeply in love with naku😉 yes the prude has got him under her thumb..ab tu Naku raj kera gi!

Loved Tasha"s convo the way he said sorry and all the misunderstandings are cleared

well let's hope he keeps his brains switched on for times to come..i think he's happy as long as he getswhat he wants ..which ever way..even if it means bowing to a gadhi😆

Hai mein marjawaa☺️😍Romance is back 😉...Loved it ,,,,,,☺️... it seems is forum pe kakiyaan ..merna ko har waqt tayaar hoti hain..Majja Dutta pe...

Hai mere sher ne toh mamma ki bolti bandh kar di ...👍🏼No one can bring him down expect naku ...They truly are made for each other ,,,, loved that remark su😉...yes naku knows his weak points...the biggest one no brain!

Omg the last part was great ...Baaji played a awesome role😆...Major is getting naughty ...But love it 😉... naughty like there's no tommorrow...poor naku..

Thanx a million for the Fab update👏...will wait for the nxt part ... xxthanks

Will miss u loads,...But u have a wonderful Time and enjoy ur trip🤗

Lots of love and hugs xxthanks for your comment su...and the cute teddy.. what is in that grey pouch..is it kirsch chocs?...xxhammie

suhana🤗

Originally posted by: ushankitvc

Fabulous updt... luved the way dutta tries to manaaofy nakku... he is jst so crazily in luv with her...behaving like a love struck teenager... Nakku had her say... gr88888 luved their confrontation...this wait is really going to bbe a long one fr me... waiting eagerlyyy fr ur nxt updt... cum back sooon frm ur holidays... but do njoy ur vacation tooo...

Originally posted by: brvr