New FF---Gone with the wind..FOREVER URS pg 1

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Hi Guys,

This is new FF from one of my best friend to all of you...Specially for them who misses DUTTA like both of US...Name of the writer you will come to know soon...Hope you enjoy this FF...in the absence of DUTTA...😊


It begins from the scene where deegu is bringing back naku frm the asylum ( such a dumbhead himmat toh dekho he took dutta's beloved to a pagalkhana grr dutta hota na toh bataata tumko! Anyways...back to updt...)...deegu is driving fast while naku just keeps on repeating that she wants to meet aayi...just as deegu is abt to take a sharp turn around the corner of the road...the tyres skid over the nails spread around and he looses control over the car...naku screams ar the car hits a tree hard and the two become unconcsious... 😭

Naku stirs and looks around to find deegu's head bleeding...she shakes him--aye kya hua tere ko...before she realises what was happening someone grabs her arm and opening the door of the van pull her out...a stunned naku finds herself staring at the men who had come the other day to take her! Seeing naku scream helplessly they hold her and laugh! One of the goons smirks--uss din toh tu bach gayi thi...aaj toh yeh bhi madad nahin kar sakega teri...A SCARED NAKU SOBS AND looks around desperately...😭

Naku bites one of the goon's hand and runs away from them at full speed...she seems to get lost seeing all the darkness around and after a few minutes the noise of the following footsteps stop!...a deathly silence falls and the leaves rustled as naku hid in the bushes knowing that she was lost...all of a sudden she feels sumone close her mouth and she tries hard to set herself free...BUT THE ARMS THAT HELD HER WERE TOO STRONG TO FREE from...and as naku felt a sense of belongingness in that touch...She gave up fighting back...😕

Naku turns around and what she sees leaves her stunned yet elated...in the moonlight...there it was...the face she craved to just get a glimpse of...the eyes where she wanted to get lost forever...it was dutta looking at her and as the two gazed at each other the clouds cleared in the sky...and all the stars lighted up the sky ...and smiled down at Dutta and Naku as they Finally met...BUT DUTTA STILL HAD THE WORST TO FACE!...the screen blacks out...!!!!

There in the van...deegu comes to and as he held hurt head...he looks around to find that naku was gone...scared he gets down and searches around but in vain...his forehead was bleeding and he opens the back of the van and takes out a cloth to hold it to his forehead...as he winces in pain his eyes fall on the pic that kala had given him and had fallen out by the impact...the ground under his feet gave way...AS HE PICKED IT UP TO GET A CLOSER LOOK at it...he realizes horrified...that he knew both the people in the pic... 😕

Hope u all liked...!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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GEET!! omg bbe i thought u had left!!! missd u gyal...so hapy ur bak!!!
btw pls do tel hu dis oda person is?? rely curious lol
ffs r very much needed currntly...miss tasha...spesh our dutta sooo much...
wil read d ff n edit my comnt... wantd 2 b 1st u see😉😆



Edited by mIsHeZ.x - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: chitrakshgeet

It begins from the scene where deegu is bringing back naku frm the asylum ( such a dumbhead himmat toh dekho he took dutta's beloved to a pagalkhana grr dutta hota na toh bataata tumko! Anyways...back to updt...)...deegu is driving fast while naku just keeps on repeating that she wants to meet aayi...just as deegu is abt to take a sharp turn around the corner of the road...the tyres skid over the nails spread around and he looses control over the car...naku screams ar the car hits a tree hard and the two become unconcsious...

I assue naku wil get out of the whole trauma n realisation wil struck...she wil be aware of her surrounding n remmemba everythng...btw jus 2 point out i havnt been watching any of this diggu-piggu shytt... not sinc 28th march...

Naku stirs and looks around to find deegu's head bleeding...she shakes him--aye kya hua tere ko...before she realises what was happening someone grabs her arm and opening the door of the van pull her out...a stunned naku finds herself staring at the men who had come the other day to take her! Seeing naku scream helplessly they hold her and laugh! One of the goons smirks--uss din toh tu bach gayi thi...aaj toh yeh bhi madad nahin kar sakega teri...A SCARED NAKU SOBS AND looks around desperately...

Er can i just ask...uss din kaun naku ko lene aya tha??? NS??n his goons?? Ukno atm i dont mind them takin her..anythng 2 get her away 4rm diggu piggu!!!

Naku bites one of the goon's hand and runs away from them at full speed...she seems to get lost seeing all the darkness around and after a few minutes the noise of the following footsteps stop!...a deathly silence falls and the leaves rustled as naku hid in the bushes knowing that she was lost...all of a sudden she feels sumone close her mouth and she tries hard to set herself free...BUT THE ARMS THAT HELD HER WERE TOO STRONG TO FREE from...and as naku felt a sense of belongingness in that touch...She gave up fighting back...

Man as soon as i read 'arms 2 strong 4 free her' i instantly knw it was our sher!! Hes back baby!!!

Naku turns around and what she sees leaves her stunned yet elated...in the moonlight...there it was...the face she craved to just get a glimpse of...the eyes where she wanted to get lost forever...it was dutta looking at her and as the two gazed at each other the clouds cleared in the sky...and all the stars lighted up the sky ...and smiled down at Dutta and Naku as they Finally met...BUT DUTTA STILL HAD THE WORST TO FACE!...the screen blacks out...!!!!

Hayeee we are still craving 2 see the very pair of eyes our self...taras ke reh gaye hain abh hum...

OMG abh kya hua... pls dont seperate them agen...mujhe abhi hamare tasha 2gether chahiye...issi waqt!! lol

There in the van...deegu comes to and as he held hurt head...he looks around to find that naku was gone...scared he gets down and searches around but in vain...his forehead was bleeding and he opens the back of the van and takes out a cloth to hold it to his forehead...as he winces in pain his eyes fall on the pic that kala had given him and had fallen out by the impact...the ground under his feet gave way...AS HE PICKED IT UP TO GET A CLOSER LOOK at it...he realizes horrified...that he knew both the people in the pic...

Its tashas pic right!!! Soo glad naku ran away!!! Arrgg dis man *shudders*



Thnx soo much 4 dis hunnies...pls doo continue soon..soundz rely interesting..cnt wait 2 see wat hapens next...n pls plss add me 2 ur pm list...x


Edited by mIsHeZ.x - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good start and happy diggu ko jaldi se jalde bahar nikalo from tasha

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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh wow!!! yes bring dutta back...and finally naku reunited with her saab awesome...girl...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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How i wish this happened in the Show. But that stupid digu has still not seen the Tasha Pic. May be the CVs want to extend and he will see the Pic after he falls for naku.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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great start dear
chalo dutta aa gaya and diggu is going soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Everyone...

How are you all...????

Here is another update from us...Hope you all enjoy it...😊

Deegu stares at the pic in his hand...and as he is horrified to recognise both people in the pic his head feels like spinning...and all those memories of that day came flooding back to him!...NANASAHEB HAD CALLED HIM THAT DAY and told him he was going to give him the toughest assignment...and deegu had listened his mentor tell him to go and abduct the persons pic he had sent earlier that day...like always...without asking why deegu had left for the temple where he was to kidnap that man...and as deegu stared at the pic he could understand that the girl who had come ashore was the wife of the man he had taken away that day by hitting him with a needle which had a chemical that stunned and temporarily paralysed him...AS DEEGU REALISED THAT IT WAS THE GUY IN THE PIC WHO WAS THAT INNOCENT GIRL'S SAAb...FOR THE FiRst time deegu wanted to question nanasaheb as to Why? And his GUTFEEL TOLD HIM THAT WHAT HE DID MIGHT NOT BE REALLY THE RIGHT THNG TO DO!

There in the jungle...Dutta finds himself lost in naku's beautiful smile and innocent face as she kept on lookng at him wide eyed...slowly dutta raises his hand and winces in pain...seeing which naku analyses his arm and finds his shoulder was hurt and bleeding...forgetting the pain dutta had sustained thanks to the bullet injury he got while escaping from his captives...and lovingly he embraces nakus face as she says out loudly-SAAB! Aapko chot lagi hai..main..main patti karti hai...AS NAKU TEARS OFF HER DUPATTA A LITTLE AND TIES THE PIECE AROUND HIS WOUND...dutta watched her stunned! FOR THE FIRST TIME he notices...nakus long hair were undone and in a mess...she wore no vermillion and no mangalsutra too! ABOVE ALL THERE WAS A STRANGE KIDDISH MANNER IN HER VOICE...😕

Naku blurts out-mainney aapko kahan kahan nahin dhoonda saab...main...woh...woh mandir ke chakkar...gol gol ghoomti rahi...par aap kahin nahin miley...(she begins to cry)...aap mere ko chod kar kyun chaley jaatey ho saab?..(she hlds his hands and sobs) ab main aapko kahin nahin janey degi...aur...aur apko ayi se bhi milayegi...DUTTA STARES AT NAKU TAKEN ABACK AS SHE KEEPS on blabbering things...and realizes that something was wrong with her...and that she seemed to lose her sanity too!...naku goes on and on in her innocent and childish manner as tears well up in Dutta's eyes and moving a little closer to Naku he takes her in his arms...and hugs her tight...wanting to hide her frnm the world which had always given her pain and hurt!...😊

Feeling dutta embrace her naku falls silent...and slowly he moves his hand across her hair and with clenched jaw he glares hard'wanting to find and kill all those who were behind his kidnapping...afterall the trauma of being separated from dutta again had taken a toll on naku!...and dutta felt terrible thinking how much she had suffered thanks to him...HOW MUCH SHE HAD PAYED TO FALL IN LOVE WITH HIM...AND HOW MUCH SHE WENT THROUGH FOR HIS SAKE!...

Dutta holds onto naku more tightly and feels all the more caring and protective for her...and as the two cuddle upto one another the song plays in the background frm the movie haunted--KHUDA KO DIKH raha hoga...NA DIL TUJHSE JUDA HOGA...TERI TAKDEER MEIN MUJHKO...WOH AB TOH LIKH RAHA HOGA!...TERA hii bas hona chahoon...tere dard mein rona chahoon...tere dil ke inn zakhmo pe marham main hona chahoon...😊

Hope u all liked...!!!!

Edited by chitrakshgeet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loveley update but felt iit was very short...
hmm so diggu is realising his mistakes...beter l8 den never😡
dutta wil defo not leave hm...
aww naku gone mad in here aswel..
poor dutta he must be feeling evn more guilty...
sooo glad they 2gva agen tho😳
thnx 4 updat
cont soon.x
Edited by mIsHeZ.x - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update dear

love it
so they are together
amazing

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