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Posted: 14 years ago
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maine dekh liya...and mere post kanre ke baad dekha...toh ruko,,,me kuch sochti hoon..uhmmmm woh dono so jaat ehain and then subah ho jaati hai and I cant be stuffed to type it in english😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Woh dono so jaat ehain and then subah ho jaati hai

They wake up in the morning only find so close to each other...with Nakku's head on his shoulder....they get a bit embarrassed...

P.S:Suvi, woh dono office mein hi sojate hain? 😲😆
Edited by Bushy_92 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Suvi7884

refreesssh karo Bushy

Kardiya. aur likh bhi diya....thanx meri Suvi....muahhh bye...sleep tight 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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She slowly moves forward...and whisper's seductively in his ear...."Dutta, tumhe mujhe Nakku bolna hi hoga....." and she moves back.....he leaves a sigh..and says "Nakku" ans she beams...

P.S.: OMG u really got the temperatures soaring dude..☺️.😆.Thank god i got SOMETHING else in my mind at the right time warna yahan KISS ho hi jata 😆
ho memsssah...nahi, nnnaku.. ab se ap ka ye khadam ap ko yehey bola ga....waise aur koi hukam ho to zaroor batien ,ap ka har kaam sar ankoon pa! this is going no where he says to himself ..I know she fancies me ,par kya karoon apni gadhagiri ki habits se, kitni defa kaha ,to myself, tell her that you love her Dutta... but you are such an ass !


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Posted: 14 years ago
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ho memsssah...nahi, nnnaku.. ab se ap ka ye khadam ap ko yehey bola ga....waise aur koi hukam ho to zaroor batien ,ap ka har kaam sar ankoon pa! this is going no where he says to himself ..I know she fancies me ,par kya karoon apni gadhagiri ki habits se, kitni defa kaha ,to myself, tell her that you love her Dutta... but you are such an ass !

D :" O main … main aap se kuch kehena chahtahoon.😳"

N : Haan bolo (looking into his eyes with full intensity)

D scared and said : O main …….main…

N : haan haan bolo naa main sunrahi hoon (she smiled)

But D says (with full of pasina pasina) "Mujhe bhook laga hai." 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
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D :" O main … main aap se kuch kehena chahtahoon.😳"

N : Haan bolo (looking into his eyes with full intensity)

D scared and said : O main …….main…

N : haan haan bolo naa main sunrahi hoon (she smiled)

But D says (with full of pasina pasina) "Mujhe bhook laga hai." 😆


Naku moves towards him and looks deep into Dutta's blue-green eyes. Dutta can feel her breath and her fragrance fills his senses. She touches his face with soft hands. Blood rushes to his face and he breaks the eye-lock.

D: Memsaab...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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We've made a nice Story.....have a look...😃

Once upon a time there was a young Man called Dutta Shriram Patil.
He lived in the 'sapno ka sheher' MUMBAI but his life in the murky underbelly of the city was nothing short of a nightmare.
He has been looking for a job for a long time without any luck, but one day he gets a good job in a huge company owned by Madam Nakusha, whom he calls "Memsaab" 😉!
He was not good looking unlike her memsaab who was very beautiful....and he loved beautiful faces 😆!
But unfortunately, his Memsaab loved ugly faces, so one day he pretends to be a victim of fire burnt face, and thereafter comes to office wearing "soot" on his face! 😆
His memsaab feels something similar looking at him! 😆
But eventually she falls for his "ugliness" and calls him back! 😆
He soon starts working under her! 😉
Memsaab starts making passes at him😉 but he remains as ignorant as ever, gadha haina!!!
Memsaab one fine day gives him flowers and he being a gadha puts them in the flower vase on her desk! 😆
Angered memsaab smashes the flower pot on his head but instead of being angry he smiles at her to which she asks 'tu kis mitti ka bana hai dutta'????😉
He nods and says "Kaali mitthi ka" leaving her amused 😆
It starts pouring and D gets wet ☺️ as he stands waiting for an auto under a tea stall, but N spots her and dcides to give him a lift in her car.....
The rain washes away the soot from his face and N sees his real face 😲!
N shouts DHOKHA!!!!! and goes ballistic and starts throwing tea and biscuits at D😆
Next day when D comes to office, N starts behaving indifferently towards him 😳.
D knows N is hurt but as he loves her,he vows to win her back👍🏼
Next day when N steps out of her office to go for a meeting, while she is walking past a building, someone throws garbage from the balcony, but D spots that at the right time and pushes her aside and takes the garbage on himself 😲!
N eyes fill with happy tears as she picks up a banana peel off of D's shoulder she gets up and help D get up then she gives D a sweet smile and twitches her nose as the smell of the garbage suddenly hits her😉
After the initial smile, N suddenly remembers D's DHOKA and goes back to her indifferent self, thats when her favorite uncle (someone who has always been her adviser and guide) comes to meet her - Jagtap Uncle! 😃

N was totally shock to see his Uncle cuz he was bald but now he was flaunting his new hair transplant!
N is delighted to see uncle Jaggs ,although not too pleased see the young trendy girl with him,N notices the girl is checking out Dutta who stands quietly with his head bowed,eyes lowered and arms folded,as if waiting to be ordered about🤪.... DUTTA! yelled N Chai laye kar ..jaldi..jaldi she goes like a task master...Dutta runs like he is going to wet his pants!!
Dutta makes the tea after freshening himself and as he turns with the tray...he finds himself trapped by the young girl who was with jagtap....I am Supriya she says looking at him with leering eyes.
Then Supriya winks at him and says "chalta hai kya patilwadi "to which N who came luking for D to warn him bout the leering Supriya grabs Supriya, knocks her down and starts beating the shit out of her 😆 as D looks on standing on the side thinking wether he will get a leave for going to PW😉
Jagtap uncle confused😕 and said "I have an urgent meeting so I have to go. Supriya come with me ." and also said " D & N concentred in your own work."😆
D and N start working on the new project when D gets and Idea to manao N....Eureka he thinks
Let's try a gift. So he bought a Watermelon Shocked and gifted to naku.
Dutta stood infront of N ,with the watermelon cupped in his hands.... what the hell is he thinking about 😕 mused N ...kya hai yai? she spoke loudly! memsssab Dutta mumbled with a tiny smile, aap naraz dekhti hai, aur lunch break bhi hai to mein ne sujho aap kai wasti ye melon lay ahoin takay ap thundhi ho jayan... N😡 glared at him but looking at his face🤪 ,she decides to cool it aacha jal Dutta ab aisay katay ka bhi ? yah tera is sar phar phoroon N barked! JEE woh mein Dutta went....
He got a knife and cut the melon for Naku naku ate the melon and sighed in pleasure...some of the juices dibbled down her mouth and D leaned forward to wipe of the juice touching her lips...
He tried to wipe the drops with his hand and suddenly nakku held his hand and they have an eye lock.. and then suddenly ....
Baaji enter into the room (who is co-worker of D) & said " HailaShocked main inha kaise a gaya "
Dutta reminds himself abay! ,meemshab malek or tu nakur hai, and he reluctanly disengages his narrow eyes from her haiiii❤️ green eyes..... the door opens and in barges Supariya ... Dutta🥺 recedes back from the feeding act.......woh Dutta ghari nehi start ho rahi.......
her entry makes him mad and he murmurs to himself "main kya mechanic hai jo mere pass aa gai.. itna pyara moment karab kar diya.. hadddi kahin kiAngry" and looks at her with anger..
Nakku looks at angry Dutta and asks Supriya to leave them alone as they are busy....making Supriya go red in her face.....she leaves the room embarrassed..😆 (i love to see Supriya getting embarrassed Approve😆)
nakku then looks back at dutta trying hard to hide her love for him but not able to do so she tries to get up from her chair when dutta holds her hand and...
And asks her...."Kahan jaa rahi ho MemsaaB?" Nakku stops and looks at him...."Tum mujhe Memsaab mat bolo, Nakku bolo" ..he looks down and says...."Memsaab bone do na mujhe apna sa lagta hai" Nakkus its down and says....."Yeh mere order hai....Tum mujhe Nakku bolo" she makes a face....
and then suddenly Nakku places both her hands on his shoulders ,and brings her face close to his ...Shocked Dutta is gobsmacked ..hell! what does she want me to do? plant one on her lips😕... she notices his cheeks were a tad flushed .... and she continues to give Dutta the come on... but.... he could'ent, on her giving an inch take a yard so......
She slowly moves forward...and whisper's seductively in his ear...."Dutta, tumhe mujhe Nakku bolna hi hoga....." and she moves back.....he leaves a sigh..and says "Nakku" ans she beams...
ho memsssah...nahi, nnnaku.. ab se ap ka ye khadam ap ko yehey bola ga....waise aur koi hukam ho to zaroor batien ,ap ka har kaam sar ankoon pa! this is going no where he says to himself ..I know she fancies me ,par kya karoon apni gadhagiri ki habits se, kitni defa kaha ,to myself, tell her that you love her Dutta... but you are such an ass !

D :" O main ' main aap se kuch kehena chahtahoon.😳"

N : Haan bolo (looking into his eyes with full intensity)

D scared and said : O main ''.main'

N : haan haan bolo naa main sunrahi hoon (she smiled)

But D says (with full of pasina pasina) "Mujhe bhook laga hai." 😆

Naku moves towards him and looks deep into Dutta's blue-green eyes. Dutta can feel her breath and her fragrance fills his senses. She touches his face with soft hands. Blood rushes to his face and he breaks the eye-lock.

D: Memsaab...

So ladys nice story haina...😆😆kise ne new FF shuro karna hai...😆😆i have a intro....😆Hope you girls enjoyed....Mwaaaaaah Love you..

Edited by Naina_Mishal - 14 years ago

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