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Posted: 14 years ago
👏Hi Shilpi🤗

omg super update yaar...loved every bit of it...ur really a god gifted gal...wht a talent u hv gal👏...yaar i really wish u gain ur name in dis field n one day i read book by shilpita😍😳👏👏👏👏👏 coz im already in luv wit dis story n i last month i read ur last FF " second chance" ...i missed dat ..dont knw hw? 😕 but i read d whole story at one go😛 n i loved it...😳
ok abt dis update kya kahu , kya likhu...omg just awesome...yaar...first even i thought he cheated her..but finally wen he held her wrist n ...he ws missing his chat wit nakku..jaan me jaan aayi😳😆...wht a superb covo..Tai ki aad n bhidi baazar😆i luv dis language...D mk an excuse to tk nakku wit him...aww..innocent he is showing dat he is shy...😆...ahh nakku ne chunti kaatii..😆 gud gal.. Tasha on bike😍 awww he shw him hw to seat.. wen D sed aur aur ...superb dear... lunch n finally he gifted her...one of d best scene of LTL wen D gifted nakku dat locket😍...ok..
n d best n superbest scene ws wen dey returned n nakku slept n D feel sumthing...😳 yeh ishq hayee😳...ahhh ladkewale...?? wht a cliffhanger...yaar shilpi aisie majdhar pe naa choda karo??😆 plz update
PS: wil also comment on second chance soon😳sorry for late...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Shilpi, take that comment in caps as encouragement & start 1 more FF.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Shilpiiiiiiiii !

Kya kahon u updated the same day of ur last update !
but u pmed in the morning !

Shilpi tum aise tu na thi
but all maaf cuz this is what i call a real VICTORy update !

it was a pleasure reading it ,
ur one update makes me go in sad mood and another makes me jump like bandar :P
hehehhehhehheh

LOveeeeeee it !

NOw let me tell u what i felt like reading ur TUg of war Chap eleven :P

OMG satrt he itna intense that ,
Dutta on phone with Mehgna and Naku coming with tea :P
its been a week this is all going like this
oh my Naku she is fuming with anger ,
the most amaizng pat of naku here is her rebel thoughts which i adore !

she is getting angry that Dutta used her to kill his time and i second u
howmuch u make urself ready for but when it actual happens it much more happiness or saddness in both cases !

OH Naku have got guts , not only she is listening to Dutta MEghna concvo
she has guts to ask kala abt Meghna not directly but still !
she is totally different person from what she is showing to others !

and OH Naku doesnt know abt all these fancy words Fb , tweeting and the baddest thing is she even cant ask too :P

and OH Dutta asking Meghna for a date in front Of Naku
thank gos she didnt break his phone
:P
hmm Dutta stopped her so Dutta do miss her
her talks her total new way of thinking
definitely a good sign :D

and wooooo Naku outburst at him
and even mentioned abt cigarette !
and Dutta still have questions !

at times boys are fool !
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a new day a new beginning hmm
Naku back at Kala place ,kya kare all her life she is connected to this place
not just emotional wise but even when they need anything !


hmm so kala is making Dutta to get her haar !
hmm and whats going in Dutta mind is to how to make up with Naku :D
good boy :P
and what dutta decides to go on abike
wooooooooooooooooo
and as stubborn he is , he get the keys !

and wo i was so missing Dutta Naku fight !
naku definitely have claws :P
she never feared him she always fight back with him !
but Dutta is Dutta
he know how to mend his way !

OH she used kala and tells he want a gift for mEhgna
and then ask to take Naku with him !

oops Kala definitely on the wrong spot !
and then she give in !
definitely good things at readers part but my Naku she has given the most honest nd practical answer to kala !
Dutta just cant get everything because he wants so !
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yahoo Bike ride with Dutta , on highway :D
lucky Naku !

ahhhhhhhhhh Naku doesnt know to sit and the way Dutta make her sit
and ask her aur paas- aur - aur
my heart beat was rising as she was slipping near Dutta
and then she put her hand on Dutta shoulders and what Dutta do take herhand and put it at his chest
Its a
picture perfect scene !

and they reach the place
hmm Dutta told her its just a bahana !
but she is asweety she said take gift for mehna !

hmm and sales man becharaaaa got scolded By dutta !
though he was just doing his duty :P

and hmm Dutta naku in mall !
He is enjoying , doing and feeling good about everything he does with Naku !
and naku she is such a cutie she wwants to see the malla nd also tells Dutta k they can have the gift from there !

smart Girl !

hmm so Naku do make Dutta get a gift for meghna :(
hate it

and Dutta Naku in foodcourt !

Maku do love to cook
not only she impressed Dutta by her choice of food but the way she asks him that she willa sk the cook abt the receipe !

Top Chef in making :P

and OH dutta didnt forget abt her gifts
he bought her te gift she adores most !
and the way he says she cooks and he eats (Dutta this is all what we all want but not just for now but for whole life of u and Naku :)

and OMGGGGGGGGGGG

naku sleeping and leaning on Dutta
and Dutta having all besharam khayalssssssss !

best part when he realized what he is thinking he sped away
hahhahahh its a mental game
which makes one numb !

and the way u described he holds her hand and put it on his chest !
woooooooooo Love it !

Ah party over DN back in the town
Naku back to herslelf'

and wow wow wow
the way u described the setting of the scene !
the sun in HOrizon , new Dutta ,
uncomfortable gaze !
Woooooooooooooooo

and then whatt
no way Bittu cant be here !
Dutta do something dudeeeee !

Kalaa open ur eyes and see these 2 !

Love it shilpiiiiiiiiiiiii !

i want a new updateeeeeee !
this one just make me head over heels
superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb



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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry for the late reply ...reserved both the parts
ch 10 ...loved kala n kishores interaction ..wish it was the same in the show as well ...omg this dutta will never change..openly flirting and using debbu as well..and the rose as well ...ohh wont take it personally lol ...but nakkus father is rt she should maintain distance with him ...so new entrats ..let see how they go about
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's amazing update yaar.................
tasha n their out was nice n dutta feel somthing different😳............hmm..............nice..........
but someone is gonna see naku as his life partner😕............i wanna see dutta reaction n please don't make dutta to take it soo easy..................

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Posted: 14 years ago
@shilpi..

Yes, I was damn tired girl when I wrote it! at least you were awake!

I agree DDLJ still has that freshness. DTPH in bits esp that aur paas has that magic.. but as you said I don't enjoy K2H2 or K3G anymore..i think Raj-Simran were such powerful characters and the actors lived those characeters to perfection! Will try to watch the ones you mentioned.. Old is gold! Arre, me not talking of me here!!hahaha

I think the subtlety in romance is gone these days.. I have to watch tanu weds manu.. as many people have said the romance is subtle..i do like Saathiya's Tamil version even now..the original was better in my opinion..though it is a straight copy, Madhavan-Shalini pair was very real and cute!

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Posted: 14 years ago
@ VAndu: NOOOOO..Tanu weds manu is no good...just mediocre..madhvan was cute but kangana was irritating...i have not seen tamil version of sathiya though i love the hindi one...eventhought it has vivek..


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Posted: 14 years ago
le..here i was hoping this one will be good :( anyway thanks for advance warning!
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Posted: 14 years ago
First of all SORRYYYYYYYY for commenting so late.
Let's start with - A GOOD GIRL
Ye title apni Nakku pe bada suit karta hai😊
I loved the convo. between Kala & Dutta.If my memory is alright,this is the 1st bro-sis convo. at such leaisure & in such a loving way.All her gestures & Dutta inbetween eating apple somehow reminded me about my talks with my grandma where she used to apply oil in my hair & will chat about what's new happening in the entire village & i used to lovingly call her -Gossip lady😆
Kisore's one liners are damn good yaar👍🏼.His trespassers to be prosecuted made me smile real big & then when said something on the lines of mujhe latka ke ghumna & Kala calling him -antique🤣
Poor Nakku,galat time pe entry maari😆did n't know any head or tail about their convo.& she only added salt to Kala's ANTIQUE comment ,dye laga doon kya jiju🤣
U have described the typical wedding atmosphere to the core.Funnily like Nakku,when i was a child,i purposely used to ask the person to sprinkle itra on me & that to repeatedly ,my logic used to be from far distance people will recognise me from this fragrance😆
I felt a lump when nakku said- har roz mujhe koi gulab thodi deta hai😭
The girl is so emmm i cann't find proper word for her right now,but she always takes the things in positive stride.
Dutta getting bored is pretty much expected😆
U had to complicate the story naa,tujhe hum sabko pareshan karne me bada maaza aata hai😡
From what u described about Meghana's physical beauty,i don't know but i found the girl too much full of herself😕.To me it looked like she was flaunting her beauty.
Dutta was checking her out😲,but read this clearly -I HATE U SHILPI😡
How dare dutta told I love u to nakku only to divert her attention & took the only gulab ka phool which someone had given her.DUTTAAAAAAAA
Oh,no,yahan to sirf nakku nahi uske sibling bhi Dutta naam ki bimari ka shikar hai
Nakku is so right,dutta just doesn't think or see what his actions or words are doing to her & her siblings.I feel like crying for nakku,how long can she hold herself?
Unknowingly Dutta said one line which is so true - Nakku tujhe kali mili thi ,jisse tune pyaar se khilaya .
Indeed Dr.saab,when u came to kalatai's place ,u were also like kali,& it was nakku's nurturing that showed to the side of life which u ignored thruout.She again made u lively person.
Also Dr. saab the layers which u think are on meghna,they are actually on Nakku ,only if u choose to look carefully.There are so many things about Nakku which u don't know,i suggest u better try to know that rather than wasteing ur time behind this meghana😕
Meghana's mom checking out Dutta😆😆😆,kyun aunty bakra kaisa laga😉
Ok,so she is also Dr.,chalo now i am relaxed,ask me why?
Becaz knowing Dutta's character,
very soon he will get bored with Meghana & her medicinal talks😆
Nakku's father made me cry with his lines about bhagwan ,mehmaan & insaan😭.
But,i disagree with him,becaz i know nakku will get Dutta,her kanhaji will make sure of that.Afterall deal jo hui hai😉
But then i also understand what he actually meant by that,he was just trying to save his daughter from heart break,what else can he do?The line about wasteing food kind of looked incomplete as if nakku's babuji was just about to say,had ur mother been there ,she would have taught u.😭
I already dislike bittu's mommy dear.Kitne nakhre hai😡,ghar ke liye furniture purchase kar rahi hai kya jo itna touchy hoke nakku ko dekh rahi thi😡
But,then till date india me so many girls have to go thru this dekhai thing where girls are asked to walk,speak ,cook & what not.When will our society change?
Bittu seems like nice person,i hope he is not layered like Meghana😕.Actually his name -BITTU sounds like nickname,asli naam kya hai😉
One Question - What is the colour of Nakku's eyes?
Actually u wrote Meghana having grey-green eyes & i have forgotten that in this FF how nakku's eyes look like😕
P.S. It may take some time for me to comment on ur next update.I will make up with long comments.Pls don't use ur jhaadu on me😆
Edited by preety_219 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice plz update soon ,the serial has nothing to offer i am reliving the good moments through ur ff ,plz update soon

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