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mIsHeZ.x

@mIsHeZ.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#151

hey shilpi sooo sory 4 not comentin i n mst of ur updates..hav read them but not got time to comnt...got soo much wrk.l..wil update as soon as i hav prepared to my presentation for monday

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Wanderbug

@Wanderbug

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Posted: 14 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x
hey shilpi sooo sory 4 not comentin i n mst of ur updates..hav read them but not got time to comnt...got soo much wrk.l..wil update as soon as i hav prepared to my presentation for monday

Best of luck for ur presentation....ohh..don't be sorry take ur time and comment when u are free...take care

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droopy_asleep

@droopy_asleep

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#153

Nice update, I like the tashan from both sides and both not backing down...Lage raho :)

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#154

hi shil

finally got to taste your ff... read chapter 18, well written stuff as per usual. Had to get my head around a taming of the shrew Nakku, and a fagging Dutta... so he's a quack is he? i wonder if he can cure coronary disease which is what Iam suffering from along side hypertension..... The bit where he shoves a ciggy in her mouth was so dread! mind you, her bit where she says he looked like a fire snorting bull did make me laugh. I also like that you compared him to an eagle,the king of feathered friends. Promise to read the next bit. is he likely to play doctors and nurses games with her.oops I guess that would be out of order. May be his nurse goes off sick and he takes Nakku to help him at his clinic, and she reeks havoc...sorry just a thought... Iam sure you'eve got plenty more from the rest came from.... cheers mate. Thanks for the fun you gave me.

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Nileshni Devi

@nileshni679

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Posted: 14 years ago

#155

Love u Shilpi kya update hai man karta hai bas padhti hi jao. Kitna lively hai, mujhe to bahut mazaa aaya.

Loved their tit to tat tricks on each other basically the war is full on. Ab aage kya hoga yeh jaane ke liye bahut intezaar nahin kar sakti.

Pliz do update soon.

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Vika

@vikadesigirl

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#156

Shilpi,
How are ya girl??? hope well. thank you so much for this wonderful update and PM. I am so loving this back n forth pranks between dutta n naku............ it is so hilarious to think that everyone thinks that she is a sweet, innocent girl, but dutta knows better. oh man he burnt her curtains YIKES!! i can imagine smoke coming out of her ears when she saw that.......and the tea with salt classic move................ and the ending.................. when he puts a smoke in her mouth................ he is enjoying his vacation................ but yet i still think he has got a long way to know her.......

Update soon........... waiting eargerly literary on the edge...............

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#157

hey superbbbbbbbbbbbb update dear................
all tasha fight was like tom n jerry..............i loved that...........very interesting too..........
looking fwd.............

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Naina :)

@NainaSengal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#158

Ahhhhhh two spoon namak in chai.......🤢

but this part weere really funny.....

upload asap dear....

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Warda.

@Warda.

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#159

Loved the update :-)

such cute fights....these two are just like kids....

specially dutta....glad hes exploring the child inside him

But he had not anticipated that the girl with fight back blow for blow.....now he ll come to know whom hes dealing with...she is a worthy opponent :-)

he burnt the curtains....really liked that how naku was worried for kala s emotions ...wish he realize that too...

really enjoyed all the pranks played by them.....specially the live cockroach one....dutta is too much :-)

awww....but dutta is still asking for his bottle.....wish naku had kept it in a safe place...and do return him one day :-)

so dutta is now trying to find out who nakusha actually is....a wallflower or a spitfire...

glad he found a reason to stay...rest he was running away in a week...

waiting for more such cute moments...thanks a lot for the pm

OH and I loved the aao dialogue from DDLJ 😊

awsome update...i know my comment cannot do the justice😳

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kiran255

@kiran255

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Posted: 14 years ago

#160

Hey Shilpi !

How u doing Honey !

everythings fine , im doubtiing something is going on full swing in ur life

cuz if not how can u write with such an amzing speed and enrapturing updates !

The update is so thrlling , i enjoyed every bit of it :D

its a kick ass update :P

Love it

Ch6: Fire & Ice

What a title

i got a mysterious smile on my face !

i know u are something big this time , something captivating

and indeed you did that !

Wow Chess indeed game of technique and as a guy of ca;culation , he must have enjoyed this game !
duttta life here is very simple and yet very complicated !

He has only two things in life which matters him the most !
one is his four sisters , who he loves a lot and didn't want to hurt them and second is his career where he wants to xcel !

Now suddenly his life is upside down !

At the place he couldn't have expected plus by a girl so fragile !
he is doing the things he couldn't have imagined o doing !
Its like its totally anew xperience !
he is not just enjoying it he is loving it and loving the way she is palying along :p

Nakusha Shukla the name he was hearing day and night but how they describe her he couldn't have thought it could be Naku doing the stealing

Ahahhahahha

Im so loving it !

He is getting so much interested in knowing Naku cuz sometime she is as brave as a lion kicking a guy thriple of her size and some time as a scared mouse :P

He so want to know what running her mind or may bge has got it !

The way u described he saw her claws :P

So Naku is officially on Dutta 's mind 24 /7 right now :d

Hahahhah Love Dutta playing little pranks !

And that's the uniqueness of Uf FF !
he doesn't plan something huge
1he is giving her sweet poison:P

He asked naku to get her phone and waited and waited But naku is super heroine here !
she not only stays calm , she got Dutta off guard by putting 2 spoons on salt in his tea :p

Love it !
its like Dutta is playing with a seasoned player here :P

Love naku blabbering after he accused of her putting salt in his tea !

Kala did well scolding with Dutta

And the last line

Wohoooooooo

Its awesome :P

"Ye lo kuch meetha kha lo..aapka muh karwa ho gaya ho ga naa!..waise karela aur kitna karwa hoga?"

Hahhahahah Hilarious :P

Well this thing is quite sure Dutta to win get blinded sometime
naku is right he doesn't care it was may be done by Naku but it was her sister love for him !

But he least bothered about it L

Love Dutta counter attack he renove all the covers and it was now Naku to be scolded by kala !

A very cute scene beside she got scolded on something she didn't do but

Its so old school athat even neighbor can scold u for doing wrong things !

And the way then kala Manofy Naku by makin them all eat ice cream !

Aw I miss old stories my mommy tell about gr8 neighbors !

Hahhahahah stoney rice !

Bechara Dutta nevr have imagined hehas to drink salted tea , stony rice by just challenging a small town girl :P

And Love DUtta thoughts when Kala nd all talk sweetly about naku !

His replies in his mind are hilarious !

Love their cross fire !
im so proud of Naku for doing this all !

Plus I am so proud and doubting u !
how can u come with these amazing ideas !

I hope u are not victim of any of these ideas of urs !
cuz they definitely are non violent but very irritating :P

You know I think its not Just Dutta who is having a great time , he is been busy in his hi fi life he love being thinking of strategies by which he can make the girl get in angry !

Its so not him , I think even if Naku gives his bottle he will not stop from making Naku angry !

Its like he looks foreard to irritate her and so want to know

How will she react?

Its indeed an addiction :P

Na even ON Naku part she is not like this to any stranger But its like she is niot scared of this guy ,s he also is enjoying his lilttle pranks and gets ready to see what he is up to this time !

And last ahem ahem Dutta tu thora over ho rraha hai :P

Well shilpi how can u come with this dialogue !
I imagined it and LMao :PP

"filhaal to naak-muh se dhuan chodta bail lag rahe ho."

Hehehehheheh

And wo Dutta reacted in the bad way !

But Naku reaction is the one I love !

Good job !

Thank u shilpi for not making Dutta angry that Naku throwed water to his face !

I hate if it goes like "

Ye Dr Dutta patil kay muh peh pehla aur akhri pani ka glass hai :P

Ahahahah but shilpi is unpredictable !

Love this thing about u !