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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
wow Shilp nice update....................
Loved bro-sis nauk jhok............................. specially that formals ka kya main aachar
dalunga 😆.................... and Leela's all emotional ataychar, that was superb......................
Dutta's trian journey was really interesting 😆 ..........................
So finally he reached there................. OMG he is atheist........................
the way he played with god's idol was very wrong..................
His nature is very complicated....................
Nakku's chat with her nani was soooooooooo touching............................
waiting for his & Nakku's meeting...........................
thanx for the pm dear & update soon........................

Edited by --khushi-- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved the concern leela tai showed for dutta...truly filling the place of a mom...hes going for two months and only two dresses.....hope he is not planing to run back soon....gosh he even counted the hours :-)
.loved the Emotional Attayachar dialogue.... wonder how much hes going to face in time of selection of girl..
jab baaja baajega tab khaaja batega!...Sorry didnt get this proverb😳 could you pls tell the meaning....

awww....and the whole train journey....was beautifully written....reminded me of all my journeys through train....specially dutta prefering slepper class rather than Ac....even i force my family to do so...as i dont like traveling in Ac too :-)
and a girl was drooling over him...y dont i blame the the girl 😍

dutta seems a very restless person....i guess something is bothering him a lot....or may be its his just too busy life ..which has made him like that...

and my fav.scene....convo b/w nani and naku ....loved it so much
naku is so lucky to have such a loving grandma ....who could easily guess that she is upset over something....loved it how she didnt asked the reason but just pacified her and that too in such a beautiful way...loved the story she narrated :-)

waiting for dutta and naku to see each other soon.....
"To kaladid ke tillu ko ye achchi adat bhi laagi hai...i hope she gives him some gyan on this habbit:-)

pls update asap 😊
and thanks a lot for the pm :-)

Edited by Warda. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
Nice update and its very interesting to view Dutta as a doctor.
I dont like him smoking though :) Maybe Naku will change that habit of his..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94
hey shilpi...so sorry for nt reading or commenting on ur previous update...was busy doing my group assignment---gave it in 2day..wt a relief it was...
both updates wer awesome...hmm so dutta is surgeon.....his hands wer shakin during the op...thts bad... so is he the way he is cos his parents died or is der sum other reason 2 it? gosh he seems as scarred as u had made him in ur second chances ff... bt it seems pretty bad here....
lol kala calls him tillu...wer do u gt dese nick names from? sum1 u knw cld tudu n tillu...lol...
stil finding it hard 2 pic naku as being an unattractive girl---does she hav green eyes or brown?
kala may nt consider naku 2 b k with dutta becos she's worried she wnt b able 2 cope...mayb she's ryt bt m thinkin if naku is able 2 change dutta 2 sum extent thn mayb kala wil change her mind!
glad 2 c tht der r no evil sis of dutta's in this ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nice update dear................
dutta n his train journey was nice............naku was crying n nanna is comforting her with story..........it was choooooooo sweet.................n finally tasha r feel each other presence but couldn't know who it was.............hmm.............interesting............looking fwd................

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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Warda: hey whats ur name?
the proverb "Jab baand bajega tab Khajaa batega" means that we will cross the bridge when we come across it..basically is says that we'll worry about the situation and tackle it when we face it rather than fidgeting about it before..
the origin of the proverb is obscure in my head it could be very new or ages old..khajaa is a sweetdish mainly from central india which has long shelf life. and in earlier days was distributed when there was a good news. and ppl used to come to know about the distribution of sweet by hearing the drumrolls..
get ready to read more such funny interseting proverbs..as in central India such florid and rhyming proverbs are regular feature of local speech.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey shilpita lovely post yaar.👏Finally found the tym to read it.Wat i love bout ur FF was that it potrayed D in a different light.He smokes,he's an aethist, he' a casnova yet he's the 'hero' but not the quientessential one.Loved the way D said"Jab baand bajega tab Khajaa batega"😆.Cards bhul gaya to kitni probs ho gayi - chindi kahin ka😆.The way naku's naani consoles her is very beautiful and the line"har tarah ke log hai duniya mein aur sabke lie jagah hai.......👏👏."To kala didi ke tillu ko yeh bhi aadat lagi hai"😆😆😆 so sweet.Now waiting for D and N to meet😳

Edited by niki11 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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shilpi......its awesome......loved Dutta n Leelatai's convo........n also Naku n her nani's convo......nani is so good.....waiting for TaSha meeting.......update soon......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Shilpi !

i know i know i am extremely late but dear kind of busy here and there but now back

and in full sherni mood to reply !

Ch4: Exhausted

Ah well may be Dutta is Exhausred but im fully enthusiastic to know his side of story !
I just love the relation ship Dutta share with his elder sister ,

she is like sisiter , mother , she knows how to tackle her lil bro ,

she didnt bother to black mail him with emotional dialogues :P

Loved how she knows he will go down with her decison to for packing of bags

and she already did it :d

love this part , the little humour act by Leela

So the journey has started

Not very nice I say !
starting late means reaching late ,

Not a single person to please plus a girl who is irritating him a lot

Though I think its not girl fault if I see a hwtie like Dutta wil do same

But I will only eye him :P

Well the attempts fail miserbly but the question is why ,

Why the same things don't xcite him anymore ,

Why the life he alwsy wish for doesn't make him cntent !

Lot of questions in his mind with no answersss!
and when he didn't have answer , feeling unsatisfied

He thinks he can atleast make his sister happy !

He indeed love his sisters !

I love what Dr Ghoush has said to him specially this line

" ust go away somewhere for a few days.try living without excitement for a few days…live a boring life for once…you'll appreciate this excitement again."

Its such an amazing line

You know we are living in such a hi fi life and so busy we never appreciate it

Just think how we will live with computers our cell ipods ,

Which used to a luxury but now we have make it necessity !

Great job with this dialogue

A reality check I must say !

OH god dutta is mad going to that place !

Life is so unpredictable , he is thinking he is going to have a most boring time there but u never know

Some times the palce u are running away from is the palce where ur destiny is

Well one thing im sure dutta is one of those who don't mind in pain rather than talk or evn be with he don't like ,

He shifted himelf to lower compartment though he has got a compartment ticket

Just to get rid of those ppl!

Very proud and stubborn !

I loved how he remember memories of his father going with him

And he also got the cards !
thast sweet !

This compartment he has much fun than the other !

And well Dr.Patil is finally landed on his desried destination !

Great Dutta left his med bag :P

I hope no accidents happening soon here :p

AHan so finally Dutta sees what Naku has doen to his room !

He liked it :D

Now I am only waiting when and who is gonna bring back the idol to his life

And will try to throw the pack n lighter out of his life !

And Shilpi u done an amzing job with Naku

Grandmother are the one who is definitely comforting !

She make Naku realize why cry for something which isbnt ours

And a beautiful story to align with !

Even I am ease now like Naku

And I am sure I am not cry on nything which is not mine :D

Oh wow wow Naku and dutta first encounter is not meeting face to face !
But meeting of shadows and gaze

And wow naku in very first time seeing got to know abt his bad habit too :P

OH cant wiat for real meeting eye to eye wali !

And wohooooooooo dutta also sees her !

Its amazing :d

My teeth all out !

A dozen bio data and he didn't like single !

Kaise kare his destiny is in front of him !

OH shipi

I am sooooooooo loving it !
this update has make me crave for their meeting !

I sooooooo want to read what happens next !

Ur story is exceptional !
I am loving evry bit !

U are increasing by curiosity by heaps and bounds !

I want updateeeeeeeeeeeee !
plzzzzzzzzzzz

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovd the way u described duttas journey ...his thoughts , his life style everything was perfect ...felt sad for nakku ...but her naani made her feel better and the last part was the best ...nakku watching him secretly and he too felt being watched ...superb

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