FF- Naku's Call, Epilogue, pg32,note on pg 33 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutegurl224

Very interesting.

She's the man + Dil Bole Hadippa!
Nice!!
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Thank You....I was trying sooooo hard to remember the english film starring amanda bynes..from where Yasharaj totally lifted that idea for Dil Bole Hadippa...But of course...they couldn't match up..the hindi version of it was totally of the mark...

@ tintiny: So we will definately have more action in your FF then in the movie..😉...that's gr8...Looking forward to it....By the way..love the beginning...not only the journey part of it but also the mention of Dadar station...bahut travel kiya hai is line mein recently...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shilpita87

Thank You....I was trying sooooo hard to remember the english film starring amanda bynes..from where Yasharaj totally lifted that idea for Dil Bole Hadippa...But of course...they couldn't match up..the hindi version of it was totally of the mark...

yh i agree...i dnt gt y they bother making remakes of movies/or movies similar 2 others wen they knw they cnt match the standard of the original... fine example wud b sholay's so called remake by Ram Gopal Varma!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ok friends, don't let this ff hamper your daily routine...do your homework etc..etc etc...yesterday I had a bad headache and ear ache my husband said too much of PC and I was not allowed to touch it today morning, hence late update ;)
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Chapter 2

jumped off the train crossing the railway lines, in the fading lights of evening, Dutta saw the girl giving one last glance towards Dutta before running away with her friends...

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Bua welcomed Dutta with a bear hug...kitne saalo baad tu a rahe hai hamare yeha...Bua exclaimed so did other ladies of the house, Phupha came forward, he was looking too old, was recovering from his first attack, infact Dutta's reason of visiting Bua was Phupa's ill health, now he is much better so Dutta thought to pay a visit, in the house of this man Dutta had spent some wonderful holidays, Dutta has come with an offer, to take him and Bua to Mumbai for thorough checkup but the self respecting simple man his Phupa is, Dutta had his doubts whether he will agree, nevertheless ....

Soon Dutta got busy catching up with his cousins, some joined the family business, others looked after their farmland, one of them was working as a supervisor in a local factory...

Few of them had got married, Dutta was introduced with their wives, some had children Dutta handed over their presents....

After dinner, Dutta sat with his Bua' s elder son, Jitesh, talking about their childhood days and the changes thereon...keya Dutta shaadi wadi karo, hume bhi koi bahana mile Mumbai jane ki, to see the rich and famous...

Uske liye tumhe meri shaadi ka intezaar nehi karna parega, you can come anytime tumlog ho ki ateh nehi ho..

Jitesh gives a smile, his family doesn't like the show of wealth his mamaji now does, they were also quite well to do albeit nothing compared to Mamaji but had enough...

Areh Munna saadi waadi karne ka irada hai ki nehi, Bua entered Jitesh's room, Dutta and Jitesh quickly put out their cigarettes...

Ladki kaha Buaji...

Kiyu tujhe ladikiyo ki kami kab se hone lagi

Dutta laughed, he knew thanks to the media Bua and her family was aware of his adventures...

Kami toh nehi hai, lekin ...

Lekin? Bua was curious...

Dilwali nehi hai......Dutta said softly...

Hai hai, keya baath hai, humlog ke time me toh koi yeh nehi dekhta ki dilwale mila ki nehi, pakar ke de dete the, lekin baad me theek ho jata, ..mera kehne ka matlab tha jaida dhunde ga na, dhunde te hi reh jayega...

Aap milte to me itna dhundta nehi, Dutta winked at Jitesh...

Ha mujhe maloom hai, bachpan se tujhe mai bahut pasand hu, inspite of her age Bua blushed....kitne baar tu keh chuka yeh baat aur toh aur yeh baat bhabi ko jaida pasand nehi hai....

Dutta smiled...his mother and his Bua had cordial relationship but somewhere his mother did not like Dutta going ga ga over Bua and Bua did not like Dutta's mother's new habits as Dutta retired to bed, he remembered Bua's blushing face on his compliment...Bua was a simple woman, two years elder to his father, she was married young, the bari bahu of her family, infact his father was very proud of his sister, the family had seen several ups & downs but Bua has kept the family together, he husband a man of few words, Bua has guided the family out of several crises, crop failure, soaring of seed prices, she was admired for the intelligence, her sense of duty and her keeping cool during crises....his father boasted how the sarpanch also came to her for advice though his mother listened to her husband, it was obvious she did not like it much...

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After breakfast, Dutta went around the village sitting on the pillion of one of his cousins to see the changes taken place over the years....he hated to see hoarding boards around the village square advertising latest brand of toothpaste, soaps etc, he felt the flavour of the village was ruined...Mukesh, his cousin laughed...Dutta bhai this is commercialism, don't you advertise your products...

Yes we do...but...

No buts, we use these products, even though we live in villages we use paste and soaps daily so why not....

Nevertheless Dutta did not like the idea...

Bhai, the day you will make those products you will also advertise here, agar hum janenge nehi toh kharidenge kaise '

Dutta saw the point but left still felt the somehow the old feeling of village square was lost'

Areh pakro pakro pakro'.an old man clad in dhoti was shouting, pointing out to a group of boys cycling away'

Areh keya huwa Chacha, Mukesh wanted to know'

Aur keya hoga beta, mai thora us diwal ke pechhe'.aur us bhootni ne mujhe pathar mara

Diwal ke pchhe'aap keya kar rahe the diwal ke pechhe'

Keya kar raha tha, samjha karo beta'.

Mukesh winked at Dutta, Mai kuch samjha nehi chacha, Diwal ke pechhe aap keya kar rahe the...

Pishab kar raha tha...aur keya...diabetic hu...abh har samay toh khulla nehi na rehta hai sulabh me jane ke liye (the public toilets in India are normally set up by an organisation called Sulabh)...

Tabh toh theek hi kiya, sulabh to bagal me hi hai....

Tumlog, tumlogo ki waje us bhootni itna bar gayi hai'Chacha was hoping mad to hear what Mukesh had to say'Mukesh gave a loud laughter and drove away'.telling Dutta that chacha will not spend to go to Sulabh but with that money have sweets which is not good for him'

Lekin yeh bhootni kaun hai, Dutta asked'

Hai ek...areh Vinod, kal ka match humlog jeet gaye suna...

Ha bhaiya jeet gaya, Vikas ne century mara...

Areh vah yeh toh bahut achha khabar hai, finals me hume jitna hai...

Dutta frowned is it the same match they are talking about, if yes why did the players get down a station ahead,

Chalo Dutta Bhai, tumhe hamara nayi stadium dikhate hai, idhar finals khela jayega'

Kis chheej ka finals?

Woh jo cricket tournament chal rahe hai na, one day match being played amongst 10 villages around here, a very prestigious tournament'

Yeh Vikas,

Ha Vikas is one of our star player lekin bare match o me thora nervous ho jata hai'.

Vikas ek ladka hai'Dutta said it to himself'

Mukesh gave him a funny look, of course Vikas ek ladka hai, naam jab Vikas hai, ladka hona chahiye na'

Dutta quickly recovered'..no no I know two Vikas's and both look a bit girlish'

Mukesh smiled, so does this one'.but wait till you watch him play, if he can keep his nerves intact he is no less than Tendulkar'.

Now that is a big exaggeration, Dutta smiled'

Maybe but he is real talented'

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Edited by tintiny - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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My place ......... Me first............ a very nice updt.........
So dutta is at his buas place........... he met all of them in the family........... he is thoroughly njoying his stay...... Dutta whatever he may be in the city a casanova or whatever,,,,,,,, but W*H his bua he is the same small boy who used to cum fr holidays to his buas place....... so he is waiting fr his Dilwali.........Now he is to meet Nalkku(Vikas) 2morrow........... wow!!!! cant wait fr 2morrows updt..........
Edited by ushankitvc - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi jayati,

nice continuation for a nice start of FF.......

waiting for tomorrow......... wud luv to imagine the intro scene btw D n N....

tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yay you started your 3rd ff!!! omg..Nakus being a guy..so like she's the man?! LOL..this is going to be funny... waiting for the next part!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww Dutta at his bua... lol they want him to ge married..
well well i guess he will meet "Vikas" soon... lol.. i wonder if he will recognise him/her? lool.
great update.. 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Tin I AM SOOOOO loving it !

so vikas lives in the same village where Dutta landed !
wow wow wow !
cant wait for the next update TIn :D

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Jayati,
I am really liking this FF.
Even i agree with dutta,i just hate those big adv. boards in villages,it just ruins the natural beauty village.
So when is dutta going to meet Vikas,or should i say nakku😉

Have a nice day & take rest.
Pooja😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi tin..very nice start..you are getting the characters in place well. I totally agree that villages these days don't have that charm as they did a few years back. Things have changed and yes, they have changed for a reason, but just like you, I also find ti hard to digest! Waise, yesterday I forgot a v imp point. About how mobiles have made people so isolated. Earlier when I used to take the kids swimming etc, most mums would sit around chatting, sharing news/notes etc whereas these days everyone is busy on their phones and I remember coming home and moaning about this to hubby ;-) so Dutta also feels the same..lagta hain humari khoob jamegi ... hahaha

Oh, so they got down a stop earlier so no one suspects 'Vikas'.. cant wait for D to run into her again! Bua and family look very grounded, real and sweet!

Grrr.. why does everyone compare anyone who bats decently with Sachin?! There will only be one Sachin and no one else can ever be like Sachin. He is the best :) I better stop here before I write an essay on him and what effect he has on me ;-)

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