'Ek berang zindagi sahab ke naam' conclude p95 - Page 58

Originally posted by: buttbhai

hi jagruti,i m addicted 2 your ff cant wait plsss update today very well written as usual no doubt u r awsum writer dialouges were superb i dont know what happens 2 me when iread your ff get so much involved that cant hear anyone voice and get angry if anyone disturb me .iwish u 2 get time 2 daily update butt pls do not let us wait so much.plsss update soon lot n lot of dn.

Originally posted by: Nakusha

i wish i was the 1st to comment ,as always loved it ,you would be doing a favour if you update soon enough :)

😊thanku u for a wonderful update and pm.please do update soon do not take long ,we will love to see dutta taking care of nakku and making her heal with his love and care,great work please continue soon waiting eagerly for next installment ,thank u😊u r a wonderful and to some extend becoming addicted toward your work,update soon.i while reading this can visualize each and every scene .thank u for such a wonderful story,even though it is not LTL story it is indirectly related to it as we would have loved the story that way rather then this disgusted angle going on at ltl with diggu and new dutta,crappy one ,bit now it doesn't bother mishal fan anymore our dutta is only mishal.😊

Thank you very much guys for your lovely comments got to apologies for the text format of that update.

Something was playing up with i.fs text editor and as all the words seem to go funny..which was really annoying for me!!lol

Buttbhai: Thank you very much for reading commenting, glad you enjoyed the update and I will be sure to try and cut down the delays..but yep you have got it spot on this storyline will give lots of scope for nakusha and dutta. Anyways thanks again your comments are much appreciated.

droopy_asleep: Aw thank you very much your far too kind with your words..just glad you enjoyed it and as for duttas character I've tired to stick to the original..and something tells me dutta would have been this way when It came to all the intimate moments. As for the whole Sia thing..very much like nakusha..and myself for that matter..ive left this thread hanging in question because somewhere down the line I think dutta isn't to convinced either he is just trying to make up for the gone wrong past..i think he may realize that he is making decisions that in turn will help illiminate the guilt he feels..still I'm not to sure either so will give it some thought. Ive got an concept to mind..as ever I cant share it with you ..otherwise there would be no fun in reading on!!!
thank you very much..will try to update soon.

Krisha: Thank you very much for reading and its really good to know you guys are liking what I write. Again I will try to update as often as possible and some extent you are right I have have tired to follow the original laagi..yet because its fiction and a storyline that has to provide some reading for you guys..its going to change. Mind you I don't aim to turn it completely into something new..its just a spin of version of ..laagi more so my version of laagi thujse lagan…which hopefully you guys like too anyways thank you again. !! as for the update it self the fact that you enjoyed it is enough for me…its fab to hear that you are able to visualize my moments for that Is always my aim when writing!!!

Norey: Hi thanks for reading!!! Your far to kind with your words..the fact that you enjoyed it is enough for me!! one thing I will say is that I don't plan on any major fallout between dutta and naku…had far too much of that in the last couple of updates so nothing like that. As for what does happen next you will have to wait..till the next chapter!! Thanks again.

Originally posted by: ziks

Jagruthi again an update from u so fast so sweet of u 👏 . Thank u for pm and for giving fast update .
..hey there..thanking you for reading and commenting THANKS!!!

coming to the update As usual baazi's antiques and shayari so amusing . The environment in patil niwas seemed to be so peaceful and pleasant at that time . naku intezaar , dutta shayari hayee adorable couple .😳
...I thought i would start of with some lighter moments to the update and i didnt think there was anything or anyone better than baaji for that.

Dutta completing shayari staring at naku and naku blushing, his ishara to naku to come to bedroom ohhh so romantic , lovely so sweeet . 😳 But no one identified that dutta's shayari is for naku indirectly he was refering to naku . 😊
...i think the thing here is that nobody expects dsp to be all romantic and so even when he does say something that is super romantic its not always apparent for they allways think its near enough impossible from duttas mouth..aisa hai- but glad you liked that moment..

Dutta saab is in full romantic mood as usual naku looks timid . I love his unique way of romance . He is not at all in a mood to stop at any stage as he mentioned in shayari also "isko sab kuch chahiye " hai naa ? So sweet and romantic scene. They all desrve this happiness and love through out their life . 😳 ..what can i say..dutta has a very.. er..DSP way of doing things only reason being that can you really see dutta being the mushy time..softy softy..he is sweet but he is still dutta shri ram patil .and so even the romance..is playful yet serious in its own way ..

But as usual if some happiness comes in tasha life again there comes many problems and hurdles .😔 ...swapna you worry too much..last time bhi kaha tha meine thuje when sia character entered..theres nothing to it at all. With out the hurdles life would be boring..trust me if i had romantic moments over and over again..in my ff..you guys would eventually get board..
trust me on this one!! 😉
I like baazi chotu fight . Baazi is so much like a kid . Baazi ki naak mein mirchi so funny .😊
...mirchi moment was thrown in there for fun..it made you smile..then it did its job!

jagruthi again i was tensed about sia . what the .. . i mean chotu calling dutta "baba" its so much irritating . I ave a bitter feeling and its disgusting . 😡 . I hate it even though dutta given permission to call him like that . I hate it .😡🤢
..phir se woh sia wala stress..!😆 don't worry..remember the first time around you were worried about her relationship with dutta..now again..the worry seems to have risen..
my argument to that would be..that dutta considers all of patil wadi to be his family..so he would happily allow his family to address him closely. I wouldnt think about it too much cuz i think the storyline is going to pan out in a way which..you wont mind.
🤢
Dutta 's idea is very very good . baazi and sia match would be very nice as chotu is so close to baazi . Please make them a pair .
...really do you think soo..to be honest.. that was moment was there as a little bit of a question mark..the way in which nakusha isnt too sure about it..either
I don't know i was feeling tensed while reading this update. 😔. ...why??? itni sara romance hai..light moments hai.. the only one part where it was intended that you worry yep dutta and nakushas convo about sia and nakushas saari on fire.

Not feeling good , sia, and her chotu calling dutta baba an oh my god the shock naku's accident . why suddenly this accident ? 😲 Iam feeling very very bad and low . 😔 But iam having confidence on u that u won't give pain to tasha and me again .
...nothing will happen to dutta and nakusha..as for chotu and sia..i think you might be overthinking things too much.. 😆

Its so tragedy naku's accident thank god baazi saved naku . Otherwise what would have happened ? ..baaji too the rescue and i wouldnt say it was tragedy just an accident thats all.

Poor naku she even though she suffers from pain she is so strong . That's what naku is .
..dutta shri ram patil ki patni hai.. (superhero!!)

Dutta called as if he had sensed something bad happened . Always telepathy works between tasha right ? ❤️ ...yep pretty much..i dutta felt that there was something quite not right..and even when he was talking to her he asked her if everything was ok..the guy knows his stuff..
His sixth sense told him something he called and talked to naku and he doubted also . ❤️

Feeling sad on reading this update . waiting for the next update .
...dont feel sad..the end of it was left this way to keep you hooked not worried..
"all is well comes to mind!!!"

If iam feeling this much sad means u can estimate how well you are writing and what is the effect of this story on me . The credit all goes to u and your beautiful writing .👏
...that only means that my writing is convinicing wow ...such a big complement..!!
too kind with you words.

But Please don't bring again sad and misery into tasha's life me scared as if they have taken birth to face sad and misery always . 😒
...again.. i reassure you...turmare dutta aur nakusha ko kuch nahin hoga...koi tragedy nahin hogi i promise!- anyways thank you very much as always i love your feedback so keep with me..