wow.. such an endearingly sweet, honest and sensitive part.. loved it to bits.. if my son turns out to be half as sensitive and caring as D in your FF, i would be so ecstatic! he was there for her, holding her hand in one of the most sesntive moments in her life.. it is life changing and it was amazing how they were both lost in the same thoughts.. and loved how slowly he is realisiing how she looks etc.. when she was in tears, he thinks distractedly about how beautiful her eyes were! and also about her skirt being a bit short was irking him.. gosh, it is gonna be so beautiful to read your story to find out how they both realise their feelings.. with N she now knows that there has always been only him and somehow he had realised that before her, na? OMG, she ven suggested Meenal rather than shireen!! lil minx just does not know what will hit her when she will see anotehr girl with him, na?
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