FF: Life's a Rollercoaster-updated pt 17 pg 67

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Wanderbug

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

the man was dutta for sure...loved that you kept the inner voices of both characters..but...when they both are talking to eachother whose POV will u use then...that would be a pickle but i m sure u'll handle that beautifully.. awesome update..

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Chinchinchoo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: ushankitvc
m sure this is Dutta........ n now she isgoing to slap him........
nice updt.......... a long one is expected afterall my gift......that will be the answer to my questions indirctly😉

updt sooooooooon........cant wait to read.......

Thnx fr PM

Why would she slap him? And how can you be so sure? Thanks.....but that isn't the answer to your question😆 The suspense is still there...you havent answered all of the questions yet *mysterious face* ur welcome for the pm😊

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Chinchinchoo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Sophia21
OMG Suvi... u updated cause i was going to postponed the promo?well I had to know what was going to happen ohhh ur so sweeeeet... thnks doe..ur welcome
The italic mind is so Dutta's... i can just tell.. lol Accha? You'll have to wait for me to update to find out for real, for now you cant be too sure about me

arre yeh kya? Nakku ka accident? Hailaaaaa.. Was that Dutta's car??I never actually thought about it being Dutta's car😆

OMG too much suspense lol... Update soon Sure😊

Take care and thanks for the comment🤗

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Chinchinchoo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: swati2008
nice part..........that italic font was of Dutta's mind na........i know it.........naku's accident..........update soon.......

Thanks dibya...everyone's guessing guessing but I am not going to answer lol and sure I will update as soon as I finish last sacrifice

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Chinchinchoo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: shilpita87
the man was dutta for sure...loved that you kept the inner voices of both characters..but...when they both are talking to eachother whose POV will u use then...that would be a pickle but i m sure u'll handle that beautifully.. awesome update..

Thanks shilpita...er I never thought about that...maybe I'll use Tina's pov😆 lol I am kidding...I'll figure something out

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suhana19

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Hey suvi thanx for the wonderful update and PM🤗so blackmailed to update😆...btw i loved it👍🏼...i suppose that guy is dutta....😉..so finally he entered....Omg naku had an accident😲...u are creating suspense here....waitin for the nxt part eagerly ...pls jaldi update karna.. u take care and see ya around👍🏼👏🤗

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Chinchinchoo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: suhana19
Hey suvi thanx for the wonderful update and PM🤗ur welcome🤗so blackmailed to update😆.Yes.😭.btw i loved it👍🏼..Thanks.i suppose that guy is dutta....😉.you'll have to wait and find out.so finally he entered....Omg naku had an accident😲...u are creating suspense here.This FF has a lot of suspense...waitin for the nxt part eagerly ...pls jaldi update karna.sure. u take care and see ya around👍🏼👏🤗

Thanks suhana and take care🤗

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557451

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

wow suvi its amazing i luv this part cant wait for the next one plz write soon

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Chinchinchoo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: iluvltsl
wow suvi its amazing i luv this part cant wait for the next one plz write soon

Thanks ...ok I will write soon, but you know the next part dont you? Or maybe I'll write it in maths or something😆...I ended up writing in spanish..soo boring we were making pinatas but there was no point because I couldnt find mine....so I just wrote a little bit

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kadduu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#70

hey suvi ... Priya was enjoying green tea yaar not black .... just kidding ... 😆

Is it dutta nakku crashed into!!!!!!!!!!!! yay!! aakhir takkar ho hee gayee ... dutta jaldee se nakku ke life mein aao aur dher saree khushiyan lao!!!

Oye! nakku hurt while saving priya.... how are they both? 😕Am waiting for the update!! Post soon!