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Posted: 14 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Sophia21

You made me cry yaar...Aww dont cry, heres a tissue *passes Sophia a tissue* Feel so sorry for Nakku... the song was touching... Im glad Nakku is ok... Awww Tina and Priya are really nice... and protective.. Love them...
Very emotional Update... Great.Thanks.. end it on a cliffhanger why dont you? lol..of course..you should know by now that I will continue leaving this ff at cliff hangers. Thanks for the PM .ur welcome.. Continue soon sure

Thanks for the comment Sophia, but everyone is complaining about cliffhangers, what about the hints that I put in? it wasn't about Dutta about something else...but I put in like 3 hints and no one is noticing....if someone guesses correctly, I wont leave cliffhanger in next update and in the one after that, I might give you a treat....



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Posted: 14 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: suhana19

Hey Suvi thanx for the wonderful update and PM🤗..ur welcome.naku,priya and tina are truly awesome...love there friendship😉..thanks (unki taraf se)..the are so protective of each other ..especially tina of Naku and Naku of Priya .Omg the song was touching and emotional😭...Awww poor naku ...feeling really bad for her ....where is dutta yaar?...coming soon..u like to give us cliffhanger don"t u😆..yes😆....thanx yaar ....pls jaldi update karo .ok...u take care and see ya around 👍🏼👏🤗

Thanks suhana and take care🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
wow suvi that was awesome u know i actually hv tears in my eyes its just omg i dont know wat to say amazing i luv this nd as far as i know u dont really hv any mistakes keep writing i luv this story now lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: iluvltsl

wow suvi that was awesome u know i actually hv tears in my eyes its just omg i dont know wat to say amazing i luv this nd as far as i know u dont really hv any mistakes keep writing i luv this story now lol

Thanks Sani
Yeh lo tissues, I should like carry a box of tissues for you, Jess and Sophia, nahi? 😆
Yayy I finally made you love this story dhinchak dhinchak According to me I have loads of mistakes...Sani I am looking for that novella competition, if it is running next year I might make rollercoaster a novel!!!! That would be so awesome na? but ofcourse I have to edit it a lot and make it perfect thats why I need everyones criticisms and tips on where to improve
tc 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
Suvi dear.. read both of ur updates.. and All I can say..I love the way you are going with this story.. naku bold and strong in some sense. Love tina.. she is worried bout naku and the way u described naku-raj's bedroom it was so romantic..
and what u end on a cliffhanger, when the story was getting interesting come on yaar😡😡
take care Vika
Edited by vikaluvsmish - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: vikaluvsmish

Suvi dear.. read both of ur updates.. and All I can say..I love the way you are going with this story.Thanks. naku bold and strong in some sense. Love tina.. she is worried bout naku and the way u described naku-raj's bedroom it was so romantic..thank you

and what u end on a cliffhanger, when the story was getting interesting come on yaar😡😡
Sorry, but I have to take care of my fingers as well na...after writing that long update my poor fingers ki to socho😆
But I love leaving cliffhangers😉
take care Vika

TC🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: Suvi7884

Thanks for the comment Sophia, but everyone is complaining about cliffhangers, what about the hints that I put in? it wasn't about Dutta about something else...but I put in like 3 hints and no one is noticing....if someone guesses correctly, I wont leave cliffhanger in next update and in the one after that, I might give you a treat....


hints!! i will need hints to find hints!! 😆

okay why was she mesmerized by priya's tattoo... did raj also have a similar one 😆,,, just kidding
😕 and why should priya be upset with nakku... nakku just saved her life... why would nakku ask her that?

who is this someone to ring the bell in the middle of the night ....😕...
Edited by -priya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: -priya

hints!! i will need hints to find hints!! 😆

okay why was she mesmerized by priya's tattoo... did raj also have a similar one 😆,,, just kidding?
😕 and why should priya be upset with nakku... nakku just saved her life... why would nakku ask her that?

who is this someone to ring the bell in the middle of the night ....😕...

Priya....sorry but I cant answer your questions...but about priya (story wali) being upset with Naku you'll find out in next update.............

Edited by Suvi7884 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
OMG Is nakku pregnant????? Lool im banging my head on the wall to find hints as well
Yu n ur cliffhangers...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Sophia21

OMG Is nakku pregnant????? Lool im banging my head on the wall to find hints as well

Yu n ur cliffhangers...

Naku pregnant?🤣 Did I give any hints about that?😲 Dont worry Sophia..chill kar

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