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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb update dear..............
tasha first meet was sooooooooooo nice n dutta was slightly impressed by naku😆.am sure abt it.......................n naku tension towards dutta was soooooooooooooo cute,i can imagine those scene's it was really cute n market scene's n car journey ,every thing was great.................so baji is in london.................hmm............interesting................ looking fwd...................

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Wanderbug

@Wanderbug

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Hi zahra,

Lovely update...the more i read ur writing, i the more prominent the feel is that i m reading a professional m&B writer...just yesterday i picked up a latest M&B book by lucy gordon..and would you believe it,it reminded me of thaam le mera haath....u r that good...get ur book published yaar...u'll be a success...i m so tempted to goto kiss desh forum and read ur completed FF their...but being a honest LTL fan...i don't even snoop in other forums even by mistake...i hate all other shows...excluding sasural genda phool...i like the girl in that one....going to other forums feels like betraying LTL...lol....i know thats very foolish....but then thats there...thanks for PM....

Love,
Shilpi

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lizdarcy

@lizdarcy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

OH.MY.GOD! You write SO well Zahra! I am flooooored! 😊

Am loving this story. Ummm...btw, is dear Naku dark? Or is she her fair self? 😊

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Yuvika

@Yuvika_15

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

wicked update zahra!

i was right, nakusha is the maid, but also sreeram's friend's daughter so its quite cool...

really liking nakusha's character... determined to provide for herself n sister by earning hard... n liked the market scene wer she insists on carrying the bags evn tho she is struggling...goes 2 shw hw much she is used 2 doing things on her own bt its sweet dutta helped her..

omg is baji in love with roops? hw i wish it was madhu instead cos i dnt like roops..lol

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Sophia Khan

@Sophia21

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Oh wow... Nakku is the new maid... And omg he's getting attracted to her unknowingly... Dats great...

Hmm Baaji in london... I think his GF is related to Nakku somehow .. hmm mayb her sis lol...

Awesome update...Im loving this..

Thanks for the PM... Continue soon

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mIsHeZ.x

@mIsHeZ.x

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Pyari_Zahra

.x: You've got to tell me your name hun, I find it amusing calling you Missy 😆, unless you want me to of course 😆. But anyway, yep you gave me that little push into posting it 🤗. I'm glad you like it so far- I guess Dutta will be irresistible no matter what, huh? ☺️😆 Yup, in that teaser Naku refused him, she put him in his place 😆. Thanks for the lovely comment 😳. Oh, the story will contain many tempting moments, haha 😉☺️. x

😆haha lol ma namez misbah bt evri1 jus calz me missy...u can cal me wateva u wnt hun 😊

lmao!! 2 ryt bbe ez gt suma da jus pulz us towrdz hm 😉😆 jus lyk ez bein puld towrdz naku in d shw 😳

lol defo she gna sodar-ing hm 😆 wondr hw shse wil tho...

awh no prob hun u desrv it 😉👏🤗

yeh wel dat wil defo keep us glued 2 it den 😉😆😳

mwahh