FF: Thaam Le Mera Haath: Chapter 7:Page 14: Mar 5 - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Zahra!
I'm back to comment in spite of having a ton of studying to do, because I simply couldn't resist! 😃
I thoroughly enjoyed this part, especially the ending, but I'll go through things in order...
Nakusha chose to blame her hormones for her unashamed ogling.

'Hello Nakusha,' he said, grinning at her, an amused glint in his eyes. He took a step forward, his tall frame filling the doorway.

She frowned as the look in his eye told her that he was up to something.

LOL! I adore Naku and her determination to pin her reactions to Dutta on her hormones! Hahah, she's a tough woman, but extremely sweet! I like that blend! Dutta's amused glint made my smile even wider...And Naku's reaction...She's already starting to read his body language - ah, I love it!
I honestly wasn't expecting Naku to sink down onto the sofa like that, but I guess it really was the hormones this time, haha! I'd half-expected her to put up a fight for her independence. Yep, definitely the hormones. Or maybe Dutta's resilience. Or both. Nevertheless, it was a rather cute reaction!

Dutta sighed and travelled the small distance across the room to take hold of her shoulders, drawing her closer to him and holding her against his chest. Muffled sobs escaped from her lips as she weakly clung to him.

'You have to understand why I'm doing this Nakusha, please,' he pleaded, threading his fingers through her hair in a soothing gesture.

Her tears soaked through the fabric of his shirt. As she pulled away, her eyes red and moist, she watched his eyes sweep penetratingly over her face. She quickly averted her head, in a hopeless attempt to control the rapid pacing of her heart and to resist the temptation of simply melting in his arms.

How cute, how cute! The way he ran his fingers through her hair was completely awww-worthy! 😳 My god, I love even the most casual of interactions between the two of them, they're SO sweet. Hopelessly drawn to everything about them - does that sound familiar? 😃
The entire exchange between Dutta and Naku about the tie and "making myself at home" was hilarious! Why do I think Nakusha was expecting something else? LOL, maybe my imagination is running away with me - first reading Temptations and then TLMH probably affected that thinking process in some way, haha! Man, Dutta is completely at home already, isn't he? Loved Naku's vehement reaction about his tie on the floor; Dutta was like, "Is she serious...? Oh. Yeah, I guess she is." ROFL, too cute.
He cautiously leaned over to pick up the tie as she watched him like a cat would a mouse.

'Thank you,' Nakusha said sweetly, her eyes twinkling with delight at his act of obedience.

Dutta's lips curled into a smile at the way she could turn from totally terrifying to irresistibly sexy within seconds. He watched her curiously. There was a magnetic pull that she had over him which drew him to her incessantly, and he was powerless to stop it.

Nakusha's smile slowly faded as Dutta refused to take his eyes off her. A languid weakness fused through her at the piercing gaze of his, her heart hammering away uncontrollably.

Naku, our darling sherni! Funny how that worked out! But the rest of the quoted portion...*sigh* The powers of description...Fantastic, once again, Zahra! The sexual tension in the air was palpable...I always feel like I'm seeing every little detail in my mind's eye! And needless to day, I LOVE it all!

'This is just...amazing,' said Dutta, finally able to muster the courage to speak.

Nakusha nodded, tears blurring her vision. 'Yes...amazing,' she repeated.

What more can I say about the entire part preceeding the ending than "AWWWWWWWW!" ❤️
Waiting eagerly for the next chapter! And good luck on all the exams and assignments - I'm in the same situation!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb update yaar....................
dutta gathering all the deatils abt naku................hmm............interesting..............
n they both happy to watch their baby groW*H ,it was soooooooooo touchy............... looking fwd...................

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you..*kneeling to zahra and kissing her hands*...yay..me in zahra FF..working for dutta..dinchik dhicchak...*shilpita looks smuggly around at all the other forum members and pulls her collars proudly..poking a tongue at others *......i m there h ha hhahha...beat that..

I m so loving myself in this FF...she is smart and investigator to boot...so nancy drewish..hihihi..lol..

Oh..zahra i love you.........chalo atleast in FF i get to have screen space with DUtta....

So my boss moved in with his love did he? i knew he was the assertive,ziddi types..when he wants a file done...he wants it done,u see..doen't care if its the middle of the night..but once its done he is very sweet drops me off safe to my place. respects my privacy and my opinion. he was so sweet and gave me all expense paid vacation to singapore last year..how many bosses can do that? so nakusha is one lucky girl to have him..

The line wher dutta thought that it was fitting that he created the shells and she created the oranament within was so apt and symbolic.

man does make and build a house..while a woman makes it home..

i hope that tasha learn that lesson in a sweet lingering process.

Thanks once again..hope to see more of me in your FF..a scene with naku..say naku comes to office to see dutta during lunch..sees me with him working gets J..then i befriend her....howzzthat....i know i m getting greedy..lol

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow sweet update dear.......................
I knew Dutta is too smart.....................
So he moved to her home...................... good decision......................
Finally i knw abt Nakku's family......................
that was very touching when she showed her little bump to him....................
and his reaction was too much touching....................
Hope they get close soon......................
Thanks for the pm dear🤗..........................
Dunno worry abt nxt update...................... Study comes first.................................
Do well in ur studies & update whenever u get time......................
Edited by khushi0318 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi zahra..

thoroughly enjoy reading it.. wow, ziddi Dutta moves in, she is in tears but in his arms wow.. I think you have a very interesting story here and cant wait to see how you take it forward. Sorry, a bit busy , so will post later! I love your other FF too and you are doing a commendable job with both of them. Good luck for your exams!

Vandu

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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice update ..... the way you've described tasha's feelings and expression was amazing 👏👏👏👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oops am so so so sorry Zahra...i totally forgot i have to comment here.....really i apologize...😳
Am loving this FF a lot......
U have show Nakusha and Dutta in a completely different light......
Wonderful update......u have a great way with words..u write it so beautifully...it makes u imagine all those scenes right away.......😳
Gr8 Job Zahra.....👏
Edited by Bushy_92 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww, that was sooooooooooo beautiful Zahra! it was truly amazing. just loved the way u described both of their emotions and feelings. the way Dutta touched her was just so sweet especially when naku took his hands to her!😳 thank u so much for the PM and update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awhhhhh bby das wz such a cutee update...awhh totali luvd it wen she shwd da bump..it wz so sweet...
thnx 4 pm continue soon.xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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pls pls add me to ur PM list....i love ur ff its great.....upload asap

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