Love Unexpected Epilogue pg 110 Upd May 10/11

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Shally

@shally_m

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

loved it .... especially dutta taking nakku to doctor 😉😉

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Akanksha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

wow👏 loved it awesome update vika pls update next part soon 😍loved our tasha scenes☺️ awesome 👍🏼

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--Sia--

@--Sia--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

very nicely written vika...👏

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Yuvika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

nice update

loved the tasha scene in the rain, both staring at each other...they r obv attracted 2 one another...thank god AS pushed dutta in going with naku otherwise i thrt kala wud jump in the car with thm..lol..

nice 2 c dutta tke cre of naku...lol... lovely update hun plz continue soon n inc mre tasha scenes

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usha

@ushankitvc

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Posted: 14 years ago

#95

Waiting eaaaagerlyyyyyy for the next chapter. The Tasha scnes were great. Nowaday's ur FF is more interesting than the currently going on story in the serial, thanx. Loved the rain sequece and Dutta taking nakku to doctor very much.

One suggestion - Both know sumthing strange is going on within them, make tem realise it. May be sumthing like Next day at the breakfast table Dutta notices that Nakku is not to b seen. he doesn't say a thing but feels very concerned. Again at lunch time also when Nakku is not seen, Dutta nqures to Baabi abt Nakku and she replies that she is down with fever...................

Do try...

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554064

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

awesome update vika....luv d way u show tasha scene😳😳😳d rain scene amazing....n eyelock nice😳...luv to see datta fallen for her...n d way he cares 4 her... dattas dinner n nakkus medication scene just too good girl loved it...day by day ur ff is gng really very interesting...dieing to know what happeneed nxt..plz update asap..well done update sweety ...keep it up👏👏👏

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suhana19

@suhana19

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Posted: 14 years ago

#97

Hey Vika thanx alot for the wonderful update and PM 🤗 wow dutta is getting attracted to naku ..he is already falling for her..the rain scene was really sweet and I love that song u picked perfect yaar ...Thank god kala "s plan didn't work this time kishore is a saviour..Iam impressed by gadha he took naku to the doctor he a sweetheart ..AS is really wants naku as her D-I -L asap ...she is finding ways to make Tasha come closer ..like sending naku to dutta ...u are awesome yaar ...iam falling in love with LTL all over again after reading ur FF ...thanx alot for this beginning of wonderful journey ...pls jaldi update karna ..take care and see ya around ❤️ 👏 🤗

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bfunofbb123

@bfunofbb123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#98

Wow vika i must say what an excellent FF u have started i read from part 1 -5 they r awesome. i love how u started with fair naku and how they met with dutta superb every update i loved it very much and part 5 naku playing in the rain with setji wow loved it i always wanted naku to do that in the show so dutta can c her other side and the song that goes with it i was listening to it while i read the rest i must say excellent choice goes with the scene & u can picture them. aww dutta's caring said love it i can't wait 4 them to get together. what u said about kala made me laugh u found the right word 4 her the underlined. Kala on the other hand was fuming, that they are sending these two out alone. She knew that something was developing between them and before it even starts she wants to crush it like a bug. apt 4 her.well done vika pls keep update i become ur new fan pls add me to ur pm list if not too much trouble i already read too much ffs in this form i ditched my books for ffs i must say we r v.lucky in this form we have suchtalented writer worth swapping books for.keep up the good work.👏😉

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Vika

@vikadesigirl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: Sophia21
Reserved 😉

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Have i ever told you how awesome you are? No? well you are fantasically awesome!

The way he cares for her is Ahhhh no words😳 too goooood😳

He definitely is falling for her and she feels something ankhani ansuni for him as well...

Loved the song selection... i was moving along with the tunes😆

Ahhh im the first one to comment!!! How nice it feels loool😆😳

Thank god kala's plan didn't work.. varnaa😡😡

Ok back to TaSha... he took her hospital... he's acting like her hubby😆😳

No precap?

But thanks for the PM!

Please continue soooooon😳

Sophia, Thank you girl for the lovely comments. You are welcome for the PM anytime girl! I am glad that you liked the song selection, i love that rain song from Dil to pagal hai it is my all time fav. I am glad that you are noticing that there is something brewing.. btw dutta and naku. Girl you just have to wait and read on.. there are lots more twists and turns.. to come how is that for a precap..

TC dear Vika😊

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Vika

@vikadesigirl

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: vaniabi
hey really superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb update dear...................rainy romance was awesome n dutta care towards naku was nice n finally dinner convo was damn good..............so naku didn't scared abt dutta.............hmm............interesting.....................looking fwd...................

Hey dear thank you for reading and commenting I am glad that you love the rainy romance scene. I loved writing the dinner convo, I could totally picture dutta scolding naku that way.. ha ha

tc vika

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