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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jedy25

<font color="#00ff00">Hi pooja
<div></div>superb ud! well done naku by exposing milli lie😊</font>

yaar thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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dutta-main daar gaya tha naku bahut daar gaya tha. Tujhe khone ki himmat ab mujhme nahi hai.
Naku-saab kya aapko humare pyaar pe bharosa nahi hai. Koi bhi kitni bhi bari wazah ho humare bich nahi aa sakti.
Ravi-dekha mili ye hai pyaar wo nahi jo tum karti ho.
Mili-sorry bhai sorry naku main samajh gayi ki jo mera nahi use jabardasti hasil nahi kiya ja sakta. Tum or dutta ek dusre ke liye hi bane ho.
Dutta-koi baat nahi mili. Mujhe tumse koi shikayat nahi.
Ravi-dutta naku ab hume wapus jana hai. Tum dono aise hi khush raho.
Swara-chalti hoo beta lekin jab is maa ko teri zaroorat hogi tu aayega na.
Dutta-maa ke bulane pe beta na aaye aisa kabhi hua hai.
Sab ke jane ke baad pura patil family ek sath hoti hai.
Kala- main na kehti thi ki naku ka pyaar mere bhau ko sahi salamat wapus le aayega.
Dutta-tai kya tu such me khush hai?
Kala-matlab bhau?
Dutta-tai main kuch kehta nahi iska matlab ye nahi ki mere ko ye pata nahi ki tu kya chahti hai. Kyu aisa karti hai tai. Kyu mujhe or naku ko alag karna chahti hai. Is daulat ke liye. Patilwari ke liye. Tai tujhe jo chahiye wo rakh main apni naku ke sath yaha se chala jaunga. Mujhe kuch nahi chahiye. Chal naku.
AS-ruk ja dutta jaha humara beta hoga wahi hum rahenge.
Leela roop-hum bhi tere sath hi rahenge bhau.
Baji-bole to jaha bhau waha main.
Kishor-rukiye bhau main or anay bhi aapke sath hi chalenge.
Kala-kishor.
Kishor-tumhe jo chahiye tha mil gaya na ye mehal ye daulat. Ab raho yaha chain se. Per hume rishte pyaar chahiye isliye hum apno ke pass rahenge.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sab jane lagte hai. Tabhi kala zor zor se rone lagti hai.
Kala-ruk jao are jab mera pati mera beta mero koi rishta mere sath nahi hoga to main ye sab leke kya karungi. Isase to acha hai main apni jaan de du.
Dutta-tai ye kya keh rahi hai.
Kala-bhau mujhe maaf kar de. Main aap sabse maafi mangati hoo. Nahi chahiye mujhe daulat mujhe mere apne unka pyaar chahiye.
Dutta-tai aaj tujhe apni galti ka ehsas ho gaya. Mujhe or kuch nahi chahiye. Humne tujhe maaf kiya.

Sab kala ko maaf kar dete hai.
Dutta-ab bus ek zaroori kaam reh gaya hai.
AS-wo kya?
Dutta-choti ke liye ek dulha dhundhna. Aapki nazar me hai koi ladka.
AS-nahi humne to is baare me socha nahi.
Dutta-per meri nazar me hai. Naku tujhe yaad hai jab main aadi tha tab maine tujhe mere ek dost ke baare me bataya tha canada me hai.

Dutta naku ko ishara karta hai.
Naku-haa wo ladka wo thik rahega apni roop ke liye.
Roop-bhau mujhe utni door canada nahi jana.
Dutta-to kya sari zindagi yahi rahegi?
Roop-haa.
Naku-saab ek raasta hai roop isi ghar me reh sakti hai.
AS-wo kya?
Naku-roop ki shadi baji se karwa do.
Baji-main kaise
dutta-nahi karega koi baat nahi koi dusra ladka
baji-bhau suno to
dutta-teri shakal pe likha hai tu mera jija banane ko bechain hai. Ab nakhre mat kar.
AS-baji to hume roop ke liye pehle se pasand tha.
Kala-to der kis baat ki jald se jald bajwate hai shehnai.
Pura patil pariwar ek sath husta muskurata hai.

THE END
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ye ff complite ho gaya ab main khyp ff ko update karungi.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: poojaluvnbt

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ye ff complite ho gaya ab main khyp ff ko update karungi.

hi pooja
thanxs for completing the FF & enjoyed every bit ..pls ud the next ff soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi pooja thanks so much for giving us a amazing ff & biggest favour is👏 u did completed it many of good ff started but were never completed ,u r good exception 😊luv u for it the story started with naku waiting for dutta to return from death the twin adi & u gave a different perspective to the original LTL i hope u start to ud the next ff soon i just luv that story too i 'm sure u will complete it big hug & lots of luv😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks pooja nice happy ending. baji gets roops, kala sudhar gaye.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi pooja thanxs for giving beautiful & happy ending😊 it s a awesome story pls start to ud the other ff soon once again thanxs
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi pooja
enjoyed everybit 😊loved the happy ending...thanxs
you completed the FF as naku said some of writer left the ff incomplete
pls ud the other ff soon ...already missing you
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi pooja great ending dutta & naku happy together..baji & roops married...kala accepted her mistake...thanxs for stating ur going to ud the next ff..otherwise i would have been sad despite happy ending😆 waiting for the ud regards uvi

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