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Posted: 15 years ago
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Waise to is topic pe pehele likha pari ho chuke hay. Phir bhi topic hi kuch aisa hay ke koi bhi kabhi apni tarha soch sakte hai.

Nakusha ke liye meri ek soch.

hota hai yoon'

Swapno ke usrat me Nakusha apni rajkumar ke hath thame jannat ki sidio se upar ja rahi hay aur is bar piche murke dekhne ki phusat hi nehi hay. Dutta ke kano me sirf nakusha ki payel ki gunj sunai de rahe hai. Hatho may hath liye dono apne kamrome pohoch te hay jaha hazaro diye unke swagat ke liye bechyan the.

Jabke dono ek duje ke ankhome khoye huye the ............... Achanak ek halka hawa ka jhonka Nakusha ki sar ke chunri (vel) ko urati hay'.jisse uski hosh ati hay aur apna ankhe juka leti hay . honto pe muskan lie balcony ke our bhagti hay ........... ( "pran chay chokhu na chay mori eki tobo dustaro lajja" *Bengali song*)''..Uski chunri dutta ke banhome girke use bhi bulate hai.

Nakusha ke nazar chand par parti hay aur man hi man chand ko puch ti hay "tum batao aaj kaun jiada khubsurat hai? Tum ya mai? Aaj meri suraj mujhe roshan kar rahe hai ............. Itne me dutta Nakusha ke thik piche a jata hai aur dhire se apna hath Nakusha ke kandho pe rakh te hai. Nakusha kanp uthti hay (aaj use ajib sa ahesas hone lagta hay jo pehele kabhi na hue ho).

Dono jhule pe jake baithte hai. Dutta apna mouth organ uthata hay aur Nakusha apna sar dutta ke sine pe rakhti hay. Dutta naya dhun suru karta hay, aaj uske dhun me ajibsa khusi jhalak raha tha o ankhe bandh kar ke apne dhun me mast tha aur nakusha kho rahi thi dutta ke dhun me, uske khusboo me, uske sansome'''.Dutta ke dil ke hare k dharkan me, sineke hare k utar charao pe Nakusha madhos ho gai.

Achanak usne apni ankh khuli aur khud ko apni pyar ke banho ke jhule me pai. Sanse, dil ki dharkan utna hi karib tha. Dutta use swapno ki sej pe letata hai aur ek hawaka jhoka ghar ke sare diye bujha de te hai. Sirf chandni in dono ke chehere ko roshan kar rahe hay. Dono ke ankho me kuch alag hi chamak the aur honth thar thar kanp rahe the aur dono ek dujeme puri tarha kho gaye'''''.

Uske bad se Nakusha ek hi dhun gate rahe hay

" tere bina jia jaye na

tere bina jia jaye na

bin tere, tere bin

sanso me sans aye na

jab bhi khyalo me tu aye

mere badan pe khusbu aye

maheke badan per aha na jaye

raha jaye na"

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ye meri life ki peheli story writing hay to koi galti please excuse me.

ritun
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Arrey wah Ritun...!!! aap tho bade lekhak nikle...!!!!



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Posted: 14 years ago
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"lekhak" hahhahha 🤣 well said lava. actually kal ltl ke time pe power cut hua tha. to dimag bahat garam hogaye the 😡
tab ye sab soch ke dimag ko thanda kia.
thanks
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