OS :MISHAL KA RAAZ PICHLE JANAM KA ...lCOMPLETE - Page 3

Originally posted by: bfunofbb123

oh rose what a beeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaauuuuuuuuuuful written i love it....thanks so much...so happy to know that u liked it..i mean loved it.. my eyes was glued from start to finish the thought u come up with it is amazing ....conceptualising this wasnt difficult but executing this thought was very very tough...u rock girl u r very creative well done jeldi cont.kero mishal faling neeeeeeeeehi....so sorry but of them did fell down and hate to say this... went to heaven😭... ur writing is so realistic i am just lost 4 word....i tried to make it realistic but this time i think i was a little filmy😆 the best part is i can always picture ur writing the scene everything.👏👏😃

Originally posted by: suhana19

Hey rose thanx alot for new OS and PM...ur welcome😛 .....ur so creative gal ....really it was intersting .thank u so much..loved it ...btwn when i saw the tittle emergency had run here...sorry for scaring u but was very eager to know the reaction of my loyal readers and friends 😆 ....keep it up ....take care and see ya around 👍🏼 👏 🤗

DISCLAIMER : friends this update is purely fictional….a piece of my imagination…so plz don't take it seriously. Well leave that to us rose dear………..Plzzzzzzzzzzzzz ………….hum hain naa………….

Well as we all know that during the 2^nd season of Raaz pichle janam ka mishal will be one of the participants so thought of writing an OS on that. I was not fond of the show so don't know its exact format …if u find anything unusual kindly excuse me.

Mishal comes to the set of the show and is introduced to the therapist

Dr – hi mishal welcome to the show

Mishal – thanks so much pleasure is all mine. (I can imagine this all….mishu flashin his cutie smile and shaking hands with the doc…………..)

Dr – so to begin with I must say u have a very interesting name

Mishal – (smiles) well when I was born I used to resemble my late uncle a lot so my grandmother named me after him…………….OMG rose how do u know it?!...........Kya baat hai awwsome……………..

Dr- so mishal tell me about ur fears and why would u like to back to ur past life………….(Yeh docsaab kaa phone no. toh bataao rose kyaa pataa mere hii friend ho and then may be…………..Ok no distractions……………

Mishal- dr ..to begin with I fear heights a lot and then there is a dream which disturbs me often…its like someone is screaming my name and asking for my help but I am not able to help out that person…………(Nahiiin soooooooooo scary poor mishu………well dear…………..ek baar I shonaa is mine I won't let anything or anyone disturb him at all!.............

Dr – we will definitely try to find a reason for ur fear of heights and also know a lot more about ur dream through this session…is there anything else that u would like to share

Mishal takes out a payal (anklet) from his pocket

Mishal – few years back I was trying to find some old documents in my store room when I came across this anklet …since then I feel a strange connection with it…I hope we can find something about this as well

Then mishal is made to lay down on the easy chair and soon his session starts. After some time mishal moves back to his previous birth…with his eyes closed he starts describing about past life

Dr – mishal what do u see ? where are u and what are u doing ?

Mishal – I am in a village ….sitting on a mountain….sun is setting in…the river is flowing down smoothly…I think I am waiting for someone……………Who is the lucky girl?!.................

Dr – are u alone ? is there someone around ?

Mishal – there is a girl who comes from behind and shuts my eyes with her hands

Dr- do u know her ? whats her name? how is she related to u ?

Mishal – she is PINKY …my closest friend…………(Kya baat hai pinkky where r u….cloud nine naa?!.............I am dead sure wahiin ho tum……………..

Then the scene shifts completely to the past i.e. mishals previous birth

Mishal – pinky tumne aane mein kitni der laga di …main kabse yahan tumhara intezaar kar raha hoon.

Pinky sits besides him and says " main kya karti ghar mein itna kaam tha…aur waise bhi jabse tumne job karni shuru ki hai mere liye toh tumhare pass time he nahin hai "

Mishal gives her a sweet smile and says " main janta hoon main kafi busy raha lekin aaghe aisa nahin hoga …sorry…dekh main apne kan pakadta hoon….ab apni aankhen bandh kar main apni pehli kamayee (earnings) se tere kuch laya hoon

Pinky – sach (closes her eyes excitedly)

Mishal takes out a pair of anklets and ties them around her ankle….pinky opens her eyes and gets emotional on seeing these anklets " mishal yeh toh wahi payal hain jo maine uss din shop mein tumhare saath dekhi thi….aur tum inhe mere liye le aaye " ….tears well up in her eyes on seeing this mishal wipes off her tears and hugs her………….(Awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee beautifully written rose………….

Mishal – main yeh payal tujhe khush karne ke liye laya tha…rulane ke liye nahin…ab rona bandh kar…aur dekh sunset hone wala hai…tujhe bahut pasand hain nah

Pinky- haan bahut pasand hai…waise toh aasmaan aur dharti (earth) alag alag hote hain lekin door (far away) kahin woh ek dusre se mil jaate …dono ek ho jaate hain….usi tarah do log jo ek dusre ke liye bane hote hain kabhi na kabhi ek dusre se milte hain aur ek ho jaate hain…yeh dekh kar aisa lagta hai kahin na kahin koi aapke liye bana hai aur ek din woh aapse zaroor milega

Both of them look at each other understanding completely the hidden meaning behind pinkys words.

Pinky – ab main chalti hoon …bahut late ho gaya hai

Mishal – kya yaar abhi toh aayee thi …khair phir kab milegi ?

Pinky – hmm do din baad mele (fun n fair) main …thekh sham ko 4 baje

Mishal and pinky attend the mela and have a blast together…after sometime pinky sees a bangle stall and goes towards it….mishal was busy having paani – puri and doesn't notice her absence

Pinky – bhaiya woh green wali chooriyaan (bangles) dikhana…achchi hain zara mere size ki dena

Mishal finds her at the bangle stall ….the man was about to hold pinkys hand to make her wear those bangles when mishal immediately stops him and says possessively " rehne do…main pehna doonga ise' and holds pinkys hand gently to make her wear those bangles " jab ek ladka ek ladki ko hari (green) kanch ki chooriyaan pehnata hai toh iska matlab samajhti hai ?"

Pinky – nahin kya matlab hota hai?

Mishal hits his forehead gently with his hand and says " rehne de tu nahin samjhegi"(Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww aap detail mein smajhaao naa mishal………….we r all ears………….

Pinky – mishal ab humein chlna chaiye

Both of them start walking towards their respective homes when pinkys payal slips from her ankle and falls down…mishal notices this picks it up…"iska hook lagta hai toot (broken) gaya hai…main ise theekh karwa kar kal tujhe phir sun set point par lauta doonga…tu aana zaroor …sham ko tera intezaar karoonga

Next day it rains heavily but still pinky manages to reach the sun set point. Enjoying the rain she stands at the edge of the cliff when her leg slips and she fall down the cliff …she manages to hold on to an edge of a rock and starts screaming mishal for help….just then mishal reaches the sun set point and hears pinkys screams…he gets worried…tries to pull her up but fails to do so and in the process falls down himself in the river flowing below…pinky on seeing this is so shocked that when her she loses her hold on the rock even she doesn't know as a result she also falls down not in the river but on the rocks down………………(OMG this is sooooooooooooo scary…………….rose jaldii update karnaa…………..Lovely and rockinggggggggg as always……………

END OF FLASHBACK

Originally posted by: kiran255

OH Rose 😛

You are getting better and better with Imagination 😃

i love it

its very creative of u 😉

and do continue

i really want to know what comes ahead

Thanks for Pming dear 😊

Mishals session gets over and he discusses about his past life with the doctor

Dr – so mishal from ur session we come to know that u fell from a very high cliff while trying to save ur friend who was asking for ur help…I think u blame urself for her death and in this process u have developed a phobia of heights…as a dr . I would suggest that plz . don't feel guilty …u tried ur best to save her but what happened was destiny…it was bound to happen u couldn't change it even if u tried.try leading a normal life and let bygones be bygones..............Wow this doc is sooooooooooo sweet yaar............Mishu come on past chodo move on...........well hope u find pinkky dear......................😳😃😛😊

Mishal looks at the anklet in his hand and nods his head thinking that this anklet probably belonged to his girlfriend of his previous birthPinkkyyyyyyyyyyyy mujhey bhii iss anklet ke darsha karaa do.....................😆

Mishal – ur right dr. I should now move forward in life and not look back at my past…thanks so much for ur help…I feel very relieved now and hopefully will not fear heights anymore.............Yeh hui naa baat shonaa..................

The show Raaz pichle janam ka was being shot at shimla…so after completing the shoot mishal leaves the studio and goes to the sun set point. On reaching there he feels much more calm and composed…looking at the setting sun and recalling the events that took place during his session. All of a sudden he hears someone screaming for help…he moves towards the edge of the cliff when he sees a girl hanging down and holding a piece of rock to save herself from falling. Mishal gets nervous and has flash back of his previous birth…fearing the girl would fall down again he moves his hand forward shakily to pull her up. As soon as the girl holds his hand his fears take a back seat and with full force he manages to pull the girl up.(OMG rose this was really high on drama quotient yaar....awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.............

The girl is so scared that on coming up safely she just blindly hugs the person who saved her. Mishal wraps his arms around her lightly and calm her down. The girl breaks the hug and looks up to find a concerned mishal looking back at her.

Mishal – hi I am mishal….hope ur fine

Girl is shocked to see her favourite actor so close to her but manages to reply " hi I am DIBYA…thanks a lot for saving…had u not been here I would have been dead for sure" on hearing this mishal immediately shuts her mouth by placing his finger on her lips and says " plz don't use the word death…I don't like it"

Dibya surprised by his reaction lowers her head

Dibya – I think I should leave now …my parents must be waiting for me.

She starts to move back but cries in pain and is about to lose her balance when mishal comes from behind and holds her thereby preventing her from falling.

Mishal – I think u have sprained ur ankleAwwwwwwwwwwwwww.............Mishu is a real sweetheart................

Mishal helps her and makes her sit on a nearby rock and starts inspecting her ankle. Dibya closes her eyes in pain on seeing this mishal gently massages her ankle leaving dibya breathless and restless. Unaware of the effect he was having on her he starts conversing with her so as to divert her mind

Mishal – what were u doing here ?

Dibya- I had come here to watch the sun set …the view here is just so spectacular…if u look far away u feel that the sky and the earth are meeting at some point…just like 2 persons who are meant for each other meet at some point of time in life…this kind of reinforces my belief that someone somewhere is made for uWell said dibyaa jii..................lucky girl..............

Mishal thinks that he had heard the same thing somewhere before …after a few secs. He realizes that in his previous birth pinky had said the same thing to him. He gets surprised at the strange coincidence and asks further " how did u fall down from the cliff?"

Dibya – actually I had dropped something really precious and was trying to pick it up when I lost my balance and fell down

Mishal – what was so precious that u risked ur life for it?

Dibya opens her palm and shows him a piece of anklet. Mishal is shocked to see the other piece in her hand and asks her "where did u get this from "

Dibya – this single piece of anklet belongs to my late aunt…when she died she had it on her ankle…my mom was very close to her so she kept it with her as my aunts last memory….my mom says that I talk and behave a lot like my deceased aunt ….she gave me this payal on my birthday …since then its too precious for me. Mishal picks up the payal and ties it around her ankle giving dibya a heart attack for the second time in a row. Dibya is still trying to recover herself from his actions when mishal takes out the other piece from his pocket and ties it around her other ankle which goes completely unnoticed by her.................Splendid ending rose................outstanding u rock dear....................Yaar i may not be as good as shweta still i try!..................

Dibya – I think my ankle is feeling a lot better now…so I should leave for my hotel

Mishal – do u mind if I drop u to ur hotel ?

After leaving dibya mishal returns to his room and thinks about the whole days events. He closes his eyes when scenes from his previous birth and events after his session got over flash in his mind and feels how closely they were related to each other making him think that " pyaar kabhie marta nahin…hum tum marte hain…hote hain woh log amar pyaar jo karte hain"

Dibya also hugs her pillow tightly thinking about her encounter with mishal.

Both are in their own world where sleep is far away