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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome update sophia...................................

finally nisha is pragnent.................. thats too good................................
Hope this time their baby will be fine..........................................
TaSha scene was very romaentic..........................................
best part asusual that they caught by RaMan..................................
I just love these kids.....................................
Who the hell that man is???????????
now what he want from TaSha?????????
update soon...................................
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Sophie thanx a lot for the wonderful update and PM 🤗so naku"s mood swings returns😆iam really happy for basha...hopefully All goes well this time....😉....the song and tasha romance in btw was really superb...Awww raman are really cute and naughty ...😆they were asking so many ????😉...the precap looks really intersting ...who is this man in white ....and what suprise did raman planned ?.....will wiat eagerly for the nxt part ,,pls jaldi update karna....u take care and see ya around 👏👍🏼🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

cute update!

yay! nisha is pregnant, plz this time let her hav the baby...wna c a lil baji in the house man..lol.. wud b cool if they hav twins 2, a boy n girl..jus like their mum n dad..lol
tasha scene was cute as always, love the kitchen scene esp, dutta helpin her make dough n the kids turning up..lol.. i wonder wt surprise they hav for their parents...hmmmm
poor noops tho..hpe their problems r sorted out..whats goin on with thm anyway... n m surprised no1 notices tht roops aint happy with naman....
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update soph i just caught up with part 42 very nice loved it i like the way u kept tasha romance alive naku & pregancy aww so cute of dutta looking after her like that. i am happy 4 basha aswell awesome they having 2nd chance they having a baby i hope all goes well 4 them.😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 43

Baaji and Nisha get in the car and hug each other happily. Nisha starts crying; Baaji cups her face and wipes her tears with his thumb.

Baaji: Sab theek hain ab... rau kyun rahi ho?

Nisha: Yeh Khushi ki aansoo hain budhoo... aur tum bhi to rau rahe ho.

Baaji: Main? Nahin toh.. Mard kabhi nahin rota.

They both chuckle and hug each other. Nisha closes her eyes to let the happiness sink in while Baaji runs his hand in her hair comforting her. They break apart and baaji starts the car.

Baaji: Cha lab ghar chalein.. khush khabri bhi dena hain..

Nisha: Pehle mithai to lo.

Baaji: Oh teri... Haan ek minute tum yahin ruko, main kareed kar atha hoon.

Saying this, Baaji goes to the market nearby and buys some mithai while Nisha waits for him impatiently.

.....

RaMan are walking towards the stairs and TaSha are following them when BaSha comes back to PN. Baaji: Bhaaooooooo ...

TaSha stops and looks back at BaSha. They look at each other and RaMan also runs to Baaji and hugs him. TaSha comes to Baaji.

Dutta: Tu chila kyun raha hain? Kya hua?

Baaji: Arre Bhao... lottery lag gayii..

Dutta: Lottery? Tu lottery kareedtha hain? Yahan paisa ki khami hain?

Baaji: Arre bhao.. samjha karo.. voh wala lottery nahin.. doosra wala lottery.

AS comes: Kya ho raha hain? Baaji kya hua?

Baaji: Aaj main bohut khush hoon AS...

AS: Acha hain.. lekin hua kya?

Baaji: Eey Nisha.. tu bata na *looks at Nisha*

Nisha: Nahin... tum hi batao..

Baaji: Lekin..

Nisha: Main kyun bataoun?...

Baaji: tum ladkiyan bhi na.. jab sab kuch kehne ki bari aathi hai to peeche hadh jaati ho

Nakku: Uffooo.. CHUP! Bilkul chup!... Baaji?

Baaji: Ho Vayhini.

Nakku: Jaldi bata ki baat kya hain!

Baaji: Vayhini.. hum hospital se arahe hain

Nakku: Hospital? HOSPITAL? Yani ki? *looks at Nisha Happily and Nisha nods approvingly*... Tum maa bane wali ho? *Smiles and hugs Nisha*

AS smiles: Aayi Jagdambe meri bacchon ko aise hi khush rakna.

Dutta pulls Baaji in to a hug and whispers in his ears: Hum dono to gaya kaam se.

Baaji whispers back: Kyun bhao?

Dutta: Ek pregnant aurat khafi nahin tha? Ab do do hain... yeh dono humein zinda khaa leinge.

Baaji: Oh teri... haan bhao... ab hum kya kareinge?

Dutta: Control control

Baaji: Matlab?

Dutta: Control karna parega..

Nakku: What are you two whispering about?

DuJi breaks apart and looks down.. Dutta: kuch nahin..

Baaji: woh Khushi ka izhaar karaha tha.

Rahul: Chachu.. aap itne khush kyun ho?

Baaji kneels down infront of him: Kyunki tumhara chota bhai ya behen 8 months baad aane wala hain.

Aman: humse bhi chota?

Rahul: Arre budhoo... humse chota hi hoga...

Aman: Oh.. samajh gaya.. ab chalo bhai... mummy papa ko surprise dikhana hain

Rahul hits his forehead : Arre haan.. chalo

Nisha: Surprise? Kaunsa surprise?

Baaji: bacche hain.. jaane do.. come let's get you to bed.

Nisha: Bed? Why? Im pregnant not ill..

Baaji: I know but...

Nisha walks away irritated... Baaji scratches his head and looks at Dutta who laughs at him.

Nakku: Why are you laughing?

Dutta stops laughing and looks down: Me? Laughing? No!

Nakku: How dare you laugh at baaji? Sharam nahin aati?

Dutta: Maine kya kiya?

Nakku: ab chalo bhi.

Dutta: kahan?

Nakku: Rahul aur Aman ke saath.. chaliye...

RaMan laughs at their dad and goes upstairs, Nakku drags Dutta by his collar and follows them. Baaji smiles victoriously and goes to look for Nisha.

Arriving in front of their bedroom door, TaSha looks at each other then at RaMan.

Rahul: Aankhen band Kijiye.

Nakku: Kyun?

Aman: Please Mama..

Dutta: theek hain.. *Dutta closes his eyes*

Rahul: No cheating.

Nakku closes her eyes: Haan baba..

Aman opens the door... Rahul holds Nakku's finger and Aman holds Dutta's and they lead them inside happily. They let go and stand infront of TaSha facing them.

Rahul: Ab aap khol sakte hain.

TaSha opens their eyes and sees RaMan infront of them.. They look around and back at RaMan.

Nakku: Surprise kahan hain?

Rahul: Dyan se dekhiye

TaSha turns around scanning the room when Nakku's eye falls on the wall opposite; she stood still for a bit looking a bit shocked then she smiled. Dutta looks at her and follows her gaze... He saw the most beautiful thing in the world, the wall has a huge framed picture of Him, Nakku, Rahul and Aman.. The picture covered the whole wall and there were lights at every corner making the picture stand out... He was taken aback but he couldn't be happier. He flashes a hundred dollars smile and looks at RaMan happily. Nakku starts crying. Dutta looks at her shockingly and RaMan looks at each other worriedly.

Dutta: Nakku? Why are you crying? This is a great surprise? Please don't cry *Dutta makes her sit on the bed and kneels infront of her*

Rahul: Sorry mama... aap rau mat.

Aman: humne yeh sab aapko rulane ke liye nahin kiya hain mama

Nakku *crying childishly* : Main rau nahin rahi hoon

Dutta *confused*: To phir?

Nakku: Mujhe rona aarahi hain...

Dutta: Kyun?

Nakku: Mujhe nahin pata... lekin mujhe surprise bohut pasand aaya.

Rahul: to phir aap rau kyun rahi hain mama

Nakku: Mujhe nahin pata.. *she wipes her tears with Dutta's shirt*

RaMan climbs on the bed and hugs her from behind. The both kiss her on each cheek. Dutta smiles wipe her tears that are pouring out uncontrollably.

Dutta: Accha yeh batao... tum logon ki madat kisne kiya?

Rahul: Hamare chachu aur kaun?

Dutta: Yeah i guessed it.. Thank you beta

Aman: Lekin idea hamara tha.

Nakku: Bohut bade ho gaye ho.. Ideas bhi aane lagi.

Rahul: Haan hum bohut intelligent hain...

Nakku: Oh So you are not like your dad..

Dutta: Kya?

Nakku: Kyun? Kuch galat kahan maine?

Dutta *scared*: Nahin.. bilkul bhi nahin.

Nakku laughs and Dutta breaths a sigh of relief.

.....

Baaji looks for Nisha and finds her in their room. He goes in quietly and hugs her from the back placing his hand carefully on her stomach. He nuzzles his nose on her shoulder and behind her neck. Nisha closes her eyes and rests her hand on top of his.

Baaji: Sorry

Nisha: No I'm Sorry. I got irritated for a second.

Baaji: Oh No... Here we go.. the moodswings starts! Sirf Vayhini ke moodswings se meri vaat lag jata hai.. lekin ab tum bhi.. main to marr hi jaounga.

Nisha: Kya?

Baaji: nahin kuch nahin..

Nakku comes: Baaaaaaaaaji..

Baaji jumps: Ho Vayhini? *turns to Nakku*

Nisha: Le teri vaat lag gayee

Baaji: Kya hua Vayhini? Maine kya kiya? *Dutta comes*

Nakku: Aaj din kya hain baaji?

Baaji: Er... woh.. woh..woh..

Nisha: Aaj Wednesday hain

Baaji: Haan

Nakku: toh???

Baaji: toh?

Nisha: Baaji aaj tujhe Rahul aur Aman ko khilana... Your turn today *she giggles*

Baaji: Dath teri.. main bhool gaya tha...

Nisha: Ab jao aur in dono ko dhoondo..

Nakku: woh dono neeche hain.. baaji ka intezaar kar rahe hain

Dutta: Baaji.. surprise accha tha.. thanks.

Baaji: Kya bhao... acha laga? Main jaanta tha.. Im the best *pulls his collar*

Dutta: tu aur teri nautanki.. kabhi bhi shuru ho jata hain.

Nakku: Baatein baad mein.. Baaji tu neeche jaa .. *to Dutta* aap bhi chaliye.. Jao

Nisha laughs at DuJi while they walk out of the room, Nakku comes to Nisha and holds her hand.

Nakku: Im so happy for you but please take care of yourself

Nisha: Nakku, I will be fine, right now you need to take care of yourself. Aur un becharon ko chod do.. dono ke dono tumse bohut darte hain

Nakku: darte hain? Kyun? Main thodi unko kha jaoungi.

They both laugh and Nakku gets emotional. She caresses Nisha's face and looks at her with teary eyes.

Nakku: It feels great seeing you glow like this.

Nisha: Abhi to tu hass rahi thi.. abhi rau kyun rahi ho? Mujhe bhi rona ayega.

Nakku: mann karaha hain rone khi.. pata nahin kyun.

Nisha chuckles and they hug each other crying out of happiness.

......

A man is sitting in his car outside and his eyes are fixed on PN. He taps his finger on his knee and looks at his watch. He looks at a picture of TaSha and smiles.

Man: Kya re Dutta.. tereko meri yaad nahin aata.. miss nahin karta.. Lekin u don't worry. Ab main wapas agaya hoon... tereko visit zaroor karounga.

He takes a red marker and puts a big cross across the picture and laughs evilly.

Man: Nakusha Dutta Patil... Wow what a beauty? Yeh Dutta bhi na.. mujhe invite bhi nahin kiya apni shaadi par.. koi baat nahin... personally aounga aur milounga. Face to face!

.....

Roops is sitting on the floor with Arjun teaching him how to write and Naman is sitting there reading a newspaper but peaking at Roops at the same time. He wants to talk to her but can't... He gather some courage and was about to speak when the door bell rings. Roops gets up and goes to open the door. She doesn't see anyone. But then a little boy pushes her and runs inside the house. Roops is taken aback and looks at the boy shockingly. Naman and Arjun also stands up and looks at the boy.

Roops: Tum... tum kaun ho?

Boy: Main abhay hoon.

Roops: tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? Tumhare mummy papa kahan hain?

Abhay: Mummy ko to pata nahin lekin papa yahan hain

Roops: Kahan?

Abhay: Wahan *Points towards Naman*

Roops and Naman looks at each other shockingly. Abhay runs and hugs Naman's leg calling him "Papa". Naman looks down at him and then at Roops.

......

Ok ok dnt give me that look i know it's been ages since i updated this update.... Khaan pakroing lol ... Im soooo sorry.. Mishtake hogayaa!!

Precap nahin doungi lol...

Try guess the new entries..

Abhay and Mysterious man!

Thanks for the comments for the previous update.. i couldn't thank everyone individually. But a big THANK YOU to everyone!!

Don't forget to leave ur precious comments as it means a LOT!!... Don't forget to press the 'Like' button as well..

*throws snowball at everyone* have a good day/night! *Evil laugh*

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update
da man iz anna r8 lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank god u updated..its high time..nisha baaji scenes , tasha raman scenes were sooooooo..cute.....naaaaaaaaaa...

mystery man is of course ANNA...dhan tan nann..*plays aah ante amalapuram BG...anna's ringtone*


Abhay ka pata nahi...naman ka koi past affair tha kya....OMG..nahi...thats not so cute..naa?

sophie...u amaze me..how do u keep the plots straight in ur head....i want to start another ff but i m scarred that i'll mix up the plot..so m waiting to finish 1 then start next...


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Posted: 14 years ago
this abhay track is reminding me of the track tht happened in maayka...shabd's son bt l8r was revealed 2 b planted by his ex jus 2 separate him from mahi
nice update
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Posted: 14 years ago
love it love it a lot yaar n man duji are so afraid of naku hahahahahha n we all know who the mysterious man is by the way he spoke its non other than anna
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Sophie finally u updated ....😆...thanx for the wonderful update and PM 🤗loved it yaar ....very well written yaar ....loved the nisha and baaji scene when they were tryin to tell the good news 😃....Raman"s suprise was really sweet and wonderful ...it really bought tears to my eyes....😃So the mystery man is ofcourse Anna😆the funny Don is bk ....OMG who is the abhay.....he is some from the past affair😲...but naman doesn"t seem that kind of guy...or someone is trying create misunderstanding .....so much of suspense.....will wait for the update ...pls jaldi update karna....don"t forget 😆...u take care and see ya around👍🏼👏🤗

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