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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey sunshine thanx alot for the update and PM 🤗 OMG naku"s mood swings mango in middle of nite ...its choo sweet he went get it for her 😆 ...loving the romance btw this 2 couples...keep it up yaar ..pls jaldi update karna... 👏 👍🏼 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank You Girls!!! Writing in Process...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey sophie pls upload faster deear....it was great parts....loved it...waiiting and waiiting
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hello lovely ladies... First of all I'm sorry i didn't give any Precap yesterday... kya hain na.. I love torturing you loool na I'm joking... Anyway Here is today's update without any delay...

Rules: You have to comment yaar so that the thread stays on the 1st page in LTL forum...And press 'Like' as well...

I will try not to disappoint you and will fit every1 in today's update.

And it continues...

Goa; Morning Time. Birds chirping, waves bashing and sun shining. Damn it's a lovely day. Both couples being lazy and are still sleeping after a very long and romantic night.

Baaji wakes up looking around. He doesn't remember where he is. Then he thinks about everything that happened between him and Nisha last night. He smiles to himself and quickly gets up to get ready thinking Nisha might be awake.

In TaSha's room, they are both sleeping, Nakku sleeping on Dutta's bare chest (Stop Drooling) with Dutta's arm under her head and the other on her waist (too much detail). Suddenly dutta wakes up thanks to the sun shining directly on his face. He looks at Nakku who is sleeping next to him and slowly removes his arms from under her head and fix her pillow. He kisses her forehead and heads to the bathroom.

Nisha wakes up when she hears someone knocks on her door, she gets up quickly and opens the door, It's baaji the lover boy.

Baaji: Umm morning, were you sleepin?

Nisha: No, i woke up long time ago (yeah right)

Baaji: Oh okay *hesitating*

Nisha: Umm is Nakku and Duttaji awake?

Baaji: I don't know

Nisha: Are you hungry? Shall i prepare breakfast?

Baaji: No it's okay

Nisha: No need to be so formal, come and help me if you want

Baaji gets happy and follows Nisha to the kitchen.

Scene Shifts to PN...

Kala in her room pacing around with a glass of wine (tauba tauba). Kishore taunting her as usual but she tells him to go from there. Kishore leaves. Leela and Roops enter.

Kala: Aagaye tum dono?

Leela: sorry, woh

Kala: koi baat nahin

Roops: Aapne kyun bulaya tai?

Kala: mere paas ek plan hai

Roops: Oh cool

Leela: kaisa plan tai?

Kala: Nakku ki barbadi ka plan

Leela: matlab?

Kala: bewakoof, pehle puri baat to sunlo

Leela: bolo tai

Kala: Main stairs pe oil laga dungi, Nakku pislegi and ghir jaaegi.

Leela: Lekin tai, bhao to use hamesha utha tha hai.

Kala: Haan lekin Bhao to hamesha uske paas nahin reh sakta na?, use kaam jana partha hai

Roops: Lekin Tai

Kala: Oh shush roops.

Leela:Yeh theek nahin hai tai, agar Nakku ko kuch hogaya to?

Kala: toh acchi baat hai, ek tir se do nishana ya phir teen nishana. Ek Nakku do Nakku ka baccha and teen bhao.

Leela: Mujhe kuch theek nahin lag raha hai

Kala: jaane do. Main khud apne plan ko anjaam doongi. Yeh lo *hands them glasses of wine* pee lo.

Leela: Nahin mujhe nahin chahiye

Roops: Mujhe bhi

Kala: Aree kyun? Kya hua?

Roops: Kuch nahin tai, main chalti hoon.

Leela: haan main bhi.

Both, Leela and Roops leaves and Kala is left thinking what's wrong with them.

Kishore comes back and looks at kala with disgust. Kala looks at him and walks towards the door. Kishore thinks she is going but kala close the door and locks it. Kishore turns back and sees kala next to him. She turns the radio on. *Main Kya Karoon Ram Mujhe Budha Mil Gaya* Starts playing from the radio. Kala starts seducing Kishore. (loool hahahaahaha im so mad, my imagination knows no limit).

She starts dancing around him and pushes him on the bed. He tries to push her off but she clings onto him. *Song Finishes*. Kishore pushes her off and stands up.

Kishore: What are you doing?

Kala: why? I'm your wife. Haaq hai mera

Kishore: Nahin, tum yeh haaq kho chuki ho

Kala: Lekin mujhe tumhare saath waqt bitana hai

Kishore: Mein chalta hoon

Kala: mujhe lagta hai ke humein ek aur bache ke tayaari kar leni chahiye.

Kishore: kya?

Kala: haan, mujhe ek aur baccha chahiye, ab dekho, hamare paas to already ek ladka hai ab ek ladki bhi honi chahiye na, family poora karne ke liye.

Kishore: Oh so now you're jealous that Nakku is pregnant and that too with twins.

Kala: Nahin, i thought we need to complete our family as well.

Kishore: Family? Do you even know the meaning of family? *he opens the door and walks out*

Kala sits on the bed angrily. (Please don't throw chappals on me for the Kala Kishore seducing scene)

Scene shifts to Goa...

Dutta sitting on the bed next to Nakku and caressing her forehead. Nakku wakes up. She looks at dutta happily. Dutta tells her to wake up and get ready and they will go out. Nakku quickly gets up and goes to the bathroom.

BaSha in the kitchen preparing breakfast when Dutta comes and greets them.

Baaji: Bhao, sit down we are making breakfast

Nisha: Yes and it's nearly ready, where is Nakku?

Dutta: She's coming. Aree Vah Baaji tu to chef ban gaya

Baaji: Kya bhao aap bhi na

Nisha: I will go see Nakku.

Baaji puts the breakfast on the table while Nisha goes to see Nakku.

Nisha: Nakku where are you?

Nakku walks out the bathroom ready: Yeah

Nisha: good morning, how are you feeling?

Nakku: good. Better

Nisha: good, now it's time for breakfast. Come lets go

They both go to the kitchen and sit down on the table where Duji are already sitting. They all have their breakfast.

Baaji: So what's the plan for today?

Dutta: Ask Nakku

Nakku: me? I don't know

Nisha: common yaar, we can't stay here all day, where can we go?

Dutta: let's all go beach.

Baaji: wonderful idea.

Nisha: Okay, let's go get ready.

Everyone goes to get ready in their rooms and meet in the hallway. Nakku wear a dress, knee length and so is Nisha. Dutta and Baaji wearing shorts and vests (Hailaaaaa)

They all head to the beach and the 2 girls sit down while Duji plays volleyball (hahahah well they had to do something). Nisha and Nakku goes to walk along the water and talk while duji still playing.

Lunch time they all go to a restaurant and eat lunch, they then go shopping to buy some clothes, hats and sunglasses.

They come back home tired. All sitting on the sofa when someone knocks the door. Dutta opens the door and sees a man.

Man: hello saab, mein nattulal

Dutta: haan bolo

Nattulal: there's a party on the beach tonight so i'm inviting everyone. Please come and bring your family.

Dutta: okay

Nattulal: here is the card *gives an invitation card* and dinner will be served.

Dutta: okay thanks

Nattulal: okay saab bye

Dutta: bye *closes the door*

He comes in and informs everyone about the beach party.

Night time...

Everyone gets ready for beach party. They all go on the beach and see lots of people. Everyone greets each other and some boys lights the bonfire in the middle and they all sit around it. BaSha and TaSha also sits around. Some young boys starts playing guitar and sings *Do Dil Mil Rahe Hai Magar Chupke Chukpe*

Baaji and Nisha holding hands sitting down while TaSha looks on and is happy. Dutta hugs Nakku and makes her cozy as she was a bit cold. They all listen to the song and the singers requests all couples to dance around the bonfire.

BaSha and TaSha gets up and slow dance while hugging. While dancing both couples have eye locks. TaSha then sits down because Nakku gets tired but BaSha still dancing. TaSha gets happy to see BaSha getting on so well and Dutta thinks of getting them engaged while Nakku is thinking the same thing. *Song Finishes*

TaSha looks at each other and Nakku buries her head in dutta's chest and BaSha comes to sit down.

I hope you liked it...I know it's a bit short but i got coursework, ARGH stupid teachers killing me!!!

Yesterday i didn't give any Precap and now i feel bad loool

So I'm giving a Precap today

CREDIT GOES TO: Yuvika_15 for the song "do dil mil rahe hain"
Precap - Naman joins BaSha and TaSha which leads to a jealous dutta

BaSha TaSha back to PN, Naman meets Roops.

TaSha and Naman talks about BaSha's Engagement!

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Edited by sunshiine21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great yaar........
keep posting..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u so much 4 d pm. And wat shud i say abt the post. I thnk u'll get fed up of my replies as I always write dat it is awesome, gr8, and u r simply superb. luv u. TC
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Posted: 14 years ago
yay...u listened 2 my suggestion n gt naman in goa..man m dyin 2 c a jealous dutta... i hpe we gt 2 c one in the shw sumtym later...wil b cute seein mishal play a jealous n protective husband to nakusha..lol..
awesome update...the kala-kishore scene made me laugh, i cud actually imagine kala tryin 2 gt close n kishore giving her the cold shoulder..lol...it happened in the shw once n i cudnt stop myself from laughing..lol
great 2 c hw leela duznt like the idea of harming naku n her kids...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

yay...u listened 2 my suggestion n gt naman in goa..man m dyin 2 c a jealous dutta... i hpe we gt 2 c one in the shw sumtym later...wil b cute seein mishal play a jealous n protective husband to nakusha..lol..

Lol Yeah you will get to see dutta being protective very soon. I hope to see that in the show as well man. But the CVs are dragging soo much..😡
Yes Naman going Goa.. Yu and Scorpio suggested the same thing so i thought y not add it.😉
awesome update...the kala-kishore scene made me laugh, i cud actually imagine kala tryin 2 gt close n kishore giving her the cold shoulder..lol...it happened in the shw once n i cudnt stop myself from laughing..lol
Looool i was literally laughin when i was writting about Kishore and kala, i could imagine it as well... Haahhah
great 2 c hw leela duznt like the idea of harming naku n her kids...
In my FF, Leela and Roops will be positive. Because they got attached to dutta and can't see him sad however Kala is selfish as usual

Thanks For Commenting 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

^^^^^^^^ wow m reali excited 2 c jealous dutta... cud u nt update nw rather thn 2mrw? lol....i wil giv u chocolates..hehe

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

^^^^^^^^ wow m reali excited 2 c jealous dutta... cud u nt update nw rather thn 2mrw? lol....i wil giv u chocolates..hehe

Very funnyy😆😆😆
That reminds me..I need to go eat chocolate
Sorry hun,,, college 2moz... so i can't update 2day... 2moro pakka lol😳

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