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I too feel this will happen. Naku has cum in his room and Dutta will for sure enter there bit drunk and then we will get to see a nice romantic scene

👏 👏 very well written..!!!! Hope Dutta will be completely out of his senses..and will have a HEART-TO-HEART talk with Nakku...!!!...maybe she's leaving and he'l catch her hand and say..."mein tumse bahut pyaar kartha hoon Nakku...mujhe chodke kabhi math jaana..." and *thud*..he'l fall on his bed...!!!!! 😆 😆

very well written want this to happen CV please note this scene and give us

Aage yeh hota hai


Naku is breathless and Dutta suddenly pulls her closer. She cannot meet his eyes....He says..Naku look at me! She raises her head and gets lost in his eyes...he caresses her hair....and she says "saab koi aa jayega"...he says "saab nahin Dutta bol"....

She is quiet again...he looks at her and says......barso se jis pyar ki talash thi mujhe...woh mere itna paas tha aur mujhe pata hi nahi chala......lekin ab tu kahin nahin jayegi,,,he carries her to the bed and lays her down.,,,,Naku suddenly realizes...and says..saab mujhe jaana hai,,,,sab dekh lenge......and some how slips pasts him.....

He smiles and addresses an empty room...Kab tak bhagegi Naku...mujhe pata hai tu bhi mujhse itna hi pyar karti hai jitna mein tujhe...tu aayegi.....aur main tujjhe boolanga....

the next morning..Naku makes sure that she avoids Dutta....while Dutta is watching her closely....she remains busy in the household chores......and dutta and baaji are busy in their own thing....

Naku finally finishes all the work and is heading to her room when she hears the haunting strains of a mouth organ....She hurries to see Dutta in the bar with a glass of whiskey and playing on his mouth organ.....She just closes her eyes and listens to the haunting melody....

Suddenly she senses that he has stopped playing......she opens her eyes.....and he is almost ready to drink.....she asks him "saab aaj aap peoge"? He replies haan kya karoon.....koi mujhse baat nahin karta to peena padega......!

main baat karegi na...batao aapko kya baat karni hai......\


well,,,,thats what my imagination is.....do feel free to add more

gosh! too romantic man 👏

me 2 imagining same..it's nice..khash aise hoga tho acha lagegi

keep imaging yar and update soon.

very well written👏 i enjoyed it

Thanks for your encouragement....here is more....


Naku: Saab batao kya baat karni hai
Dutta: Naku ek baat batta.....tujhe meri zindagi ke baare mein sab pata hai...par tune kuch apne baare mein nahin bataya.....mein aksar sochta hoon ki moore tere peeche kyon pada tha?
N: Gets scared...saab....
D: Tu darti kyon hai pagli.....kis baat se darti hai..main hoon na...teri hifazat meri zimmadari hai....
N: (she hears a voice telling her..naku yahi sahi waqt hai saab ko sachai batane ka...batade....)
N: Saab meri ek sachai hai jo aap ko nahin pata....maine chupai....
D: (gets worried) kya sachai...
N: Jab aap Naku ko Anna ke yahan doond rahe the...jo gori ladki apne dekhi thi....
D: Flash back ...he remembers
N: Woh main hi thi...wohi mera asli roop hai...
D: Kya? Tu kali nahin hai?
N: Kali...sahab kali meri kismat hai.....yeh roop mera dushman hai...bachpan se lekar aaj tak isne mujhe dukhi kiya hai...Anna yehi sachai aap ko batana chahta tha.....par mera vishwas karo saab maine aapko dhoka nahin diya....
D: Takes a deep breath...paces up and down...remembers everything......
N: Saab mein umar bhar is kale pan ke saath reh longi...mujhe pata hai ki aapko sundarta se dhoka mila hai...par mera irada yeh hahin tha.....meri aayi ne mujhe bachpan se yeh rang laga diya jab meri behen ko logon ne barbad kiya....

D: Naku....yeh tune pehle kyon nahin bataya...
N: Kaise batati saab kis mooh se batati....mere upar waise hi supriya ko bhagane ka ilzam tha....maine kuch nahi kiya....(she covers her face with her hands and starts crying)

Dutta doesnt know where to look....he doesnt understand.....he feels like killing More and Anna...people who have ridiculed her.....and harrassed her because of her beauty.....he looks at her crying....Jagtap's words come back to him ....a voice tells him...bharosa kar Dutta.....Woh tera pyar hai...usne bahut kuch saha hai...tu aur mat sehne de...usne tera saath diya hai..tu uska saath na chod...subus voice says usse koi agni pariksha se mat guzarne dena..woh tere liye hi jeeti hai......He hears Kala's words bhau, woh ladki mausam ke saath apne rang badalti hai"....then he hears Naku's words...jisko pyar kiya usko paane ki koshish bhi nahi ki.....He remembers all those moments...(flashback)....

Meanwhile Naku has stopped crying...she is looking at Dutta who is looking angry and lost in deep thought....she thinks..phir se mere roop ne meri zindagi mein zeher ghol diya hai.. pyar ki choti si kiran ab bhooj gayi...Bappa kya pyar meri kismat mein nahin hai?
She is quietly walking away when Dutta says Ruk Naku....

she stops....

Dutta: Mujhe tujhe dekna hai...tere asli roop mein....
Naku: Saab...
Dutta: Naku....abhi...
Naku: theek hai sahab....she goes while dutta is lost in thought....

reali nice...plz continue... hpe dutta trusts naku the way he has dne in ur fan fic