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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 2010huma

omg...omg...omg... I am loving it....😊.... great job...👏... cant wait to see what happens next...

Huma........................... ................I am so happy you loved this part.
Thx a lot for the reply dear.........................



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: newbe

Hay saaki my sweetooo 😍thanks for the pm ....but after reading the only thing i will say is Dil mangey more and more and more 😆....really i loved this part soo sweet ..just like u




Taayiiii.............................................................. ...................................
Definitely give you more & more & more............Filhaal to yeh le......................



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Posted: 14 years ago
hey saaki
really loved it yaar
the face revelation was good..n so is the precap..hope u update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mariescott14

hey saaki

really loved it yaar
the face revelation was good..n so is the precap..hope u update soon

Thx a lot Marie................. .........
Will do it soon.....................



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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 9

"Ab kya hoga iss ladki ka?yeh kya kiya tune Bappa?" Baabi cries loudly.Looks once angrily at Nakku & speaks "Yeh kya kiya tune?kisne kaha tha teri ko taalab ke paas khade hone ko?Bol Nakku" frustratedly Babi pushes Nakku.
"Kaaki,bas.Accident tha.Nakku jaan buchke thodina giri thi.Kaiko usspe ghussa horahi hain?Kya galti thi uski?" Angrily speaks Gajri finding very difficult to see Babi getting angry over Nakku for no reason.
"Sab khatam hogaya.Itni dinon se isska chehra bachaake rakhi thi maine.Ab to pata nahi kya kya hoga meri bachchi ki saath" Babi breaks down.
Nakku still sitting on the floor with no xpression.Just a few minutes later,she stands up & walk towards the mirror & sees herself in the nirror.She is feeling as though she is seeing someone else.She sees the person in the mirror with amaze.Then she remembers all that happened on that day.But,the thing which hit her on her heart was "Dutta".Tears came out of her eyes drop by drop & there was a thankfull view towards Dutta in her eyes..........................
"Bhao,kaha tha tu?Itni dair kaise hogayi?" asks Kala with her fake concern.
"Kuch nahi Taayi.Bus,aise hi dair hogayi" Says Dutta .
"Theek hain.JAldi haath muh dhole.Main khana lagati hoon.Baaji nahi aaya?" questions KAla.
"NAhi,woh ,usse kuch kaam tha.Kehraha tha bahar hi khaalega." replies Dutta.
Kala goes in nodding her head.
After finishing his Dinner,Dutta lies on the bed.His eyes were not in a position to sleep.Dutta thinks about all that happened that day.He remembers how Nakku caught in trouble,how she was frightened,how her eyes were filled with fear & tears,how the guys teased her & how she was looking at him.Everything he remembered.
"Kaun hain ladki?baar baar main ussekyun milta hoon.Usski aasoo dekhkar aisa mujhe kyun itna bura lagta hain.Aisa lagta hain ki koi mere saath bura karraha hain.Aur achaanak woh kaali se gori kaise bangayi?apna chehra chupa rahi thi aajtak?kyun?kya wajah hosakti hain?"Dutta questions himself searching for the answer within himself.But,fails to find the reason.
He turns towards left,.
"Agar aapko doosron se koi lene dena nahi hain,to doosron ko kast pohonchane ka haq bhi nahi hain"
Nakku's words played once agin in his mind.
"Sahi baat hain.Yahaan har kisiko har roz ladna padta hain zinda rehne ke liye.Phir bhi,chahe jitna bhi ghum ho milbaatke jashn manana nahi bhoolte,ek doosre ko sahara dena nahi bhoolte,jitna khushiyaan hain,ussi ko jee bharke jeete hain aur kuch baatte bhi hain.Jitne dair tak zinda hain sukoon ka zindagi jeete hain.Uss main bhi aap iss tarah aapne ghusse se khatam karoge to uss waqt ki khushiyaan bhi naseeb nahi hogi.Kya aap yahi chahte hain?"
Each & every word was spinning in Dutta's mind.Dutta never found anyone who talked to him without any fear like this.He was amazed with Nakku's words as well as confused to see "why she was hiding her beauty?"
"Taayi,kahan hain tu?JAldi aa.MAin jaaraha hoon" shouts Dutta towards Kala.
"Bhao,kuch khakar to jaa.Pata nahi wapas kab aayega?Gaon ko to jaaraha hain." says Kala .
"Taayi.Hosake to jald hi aaonga.Chal ab bata teriko kya chahiye?" Asks Dutta his Taaayi lovingly.
"Mujhe kuch nahi chahiye.Tu bas sahi salaamat ghar waapas aaja.Bus.Isse zyaada main kuch nahi maangti." Replies Kala with her very famous "Fake Smile".
"Nakku,yeh le.raaste main khaane keliye rakha hain maine issme.Jaldi nikal aur teri chachi ki ghar chalija kuch dinkeliye.Wahaan,teri ko koi parishaani nahi hongi meri bachchi."Gives the box to Nakku.
"Aayi,tu itni phikar mat kar meri.Gajri rahengi na meri saath.Kuch nahi hoga mujhe.Tu bas apni khayaal rakh.WAqt pe dava lena mat bhool.Zyaada kaam mat kar.Thak jaayegi.Meri chinte to bilkul bhi mat kar tu." Nakku convinces Babi.
"Sethji,Aayi ka khayal rakhna.Saath main apni bhi." Hugs her little brother.
"Taayi tu kab lautegi?"asks Sethji."Lautegina.JAld hi."Convinces Nakku.
"Gajri,Nakku ko kabhi akele mat chod.Jitna jaldi hosake nikal jaao tum log yahaan se.Jab yahaan sab theek hojaayegi,Nakku ko koi achchi aasra miljaayegi,tab main khud bulaayegi tum dononko.Sambhaalna Gajri." pleads Babi.
"Kaaki,meri pe bharosa nahi hain teriko?Tu bilkul bhi tension mat le.MAin haina,vaada karti Nakku ko kuch nahi hoga.Tu bas apni khayaal rakh." Gajri Convinces Babi lovingly.
They both leave the house & walk towards the busstand.
Baabi still gazes at her remembering her past,
"Aayi,main kitni sundar haina?" Roopa,the elder daughter of Baabi asked her innocently.
Baabi nodded appreciating her Daughters beauty.
"Aye Roopa,kisine tujhe bataya hain,tu MAdhuri jaise lagti hain?"asked Raaju jo Basti ki chokra tha.
"Chal hat,Paagal"........Roopa Smiled with shy.
Roopa was trapped by Raaju .She became blind in his love .Raju showed her "Money power" & it provoked Roopa to get more & more & more......................
"Roopa,tu yeh kya karrahi hain?Wahaan bar mein jaake nachti hain?Paison ki pyaas laggayi hain teri ko?Nahi roopa aisa mat kar.Bahut pachtaayegi tu.Yeh sahi nahi hain.." Babi tries to make her daughter understand.Roopa ignores it.
"Roopa,wahaan Dubai main ek mast job dhoondi hain maine tere liye.Bahut kamaayi hogi.Ghar,kamaayi,sab kuch hoga.Paisa hi paisa........"
Roopa gets xcited listening to Raju's words.
She decides to leave the house & go to Dubai.
"Nahi Roopa.Tu nahi jaanti tu kya karrahi hain.Aisi matkar.Woh log teriko barbaad kardenge."Babi cries & trie to stop her daughter.
"Chodna meriko aayi.Mujhe nahi rehna hain iss kholi main.Mujhe bahut bada kardikhaana hain.Khoobsara paisa kamaana hain.Mera roop rang hai kaiko aayi?Main isse bahut paisa kamaayegi.Nahi rehna meriko iss basti ki jhopdi main." Replies Roopa & ruches out ignoring her Aayi's words..Babi cries hard.
Baabi comes to Nakku the next day & puts her the kaalich saying ,"NAkku,aaj se tera rang yahi hain.Garibi ka rang.Kabhi bhi apne rang par udan mat.samjhi?"Shots Babi at Nakku with so much of anger,Pain & helplessness in her eyes.NAkku stood like a stone to Babi's reaction.
Tears comes out of Eyes of Babi.She rushes in as the pain in her eyes were unbearable to her.
"Dutta,yeh le.Hotel se khaana laaya hoon.Bhao bolrahe the,yeh deal hogayi to sab set hojaayega.yeh zameen karodon ki keemti hain.Aur kisibhi haal main hamein haasil karna hain.KEhrahe the Bhau ki bahut mushkil hain.Pan agar haasil kargaye to apna hi dandha shuru karsakte hain hum Dutta." Smiles BAaji.
"Kya bolraha hain.Bhau ne permission dedi Baaji?" asks Dutta with happiness.
"HAan re Dutta.HAin na badi baat".....smiles Baaji.Both Dutta-Baaji hug each other.
"Yeh lo,Bus aagayi .Bhau tu jaa.MAin zara paani leke aata hain."baaji leaves from there.
"NAkku ,hamein jaldi nikalna hoga.Tu apni chehra chupake hi rakhna.Yahaan se Chachi ki ghar jaane tak .Baad mein thoda aaram milegi" Gajri says to worried Nakku.
Suddenly Baaji hits the man in front in hurry who inturn bumps at Gajri.
"Yoy,Andhe ho kya?Dikhta nahi." the guy says ,"MAin nahi.yeh gira tha mujhpe." pointing at Baaji who hides his face seeing Gajri.
Gajri comes to him saying,"Pata tha .Patha tha mujhe ki jabhi koi accha kaam karne jaati hain,hamesha koina koi apshakun hota hain.Ab,Dekho,Tumhe dekhliya. Ab,isse bada apshagun kya hosakta hain"
"Apshagun to meri huyi hain.Teri ko jo dekha.Pata nahi ab mera din kitna kharaab jaayega".....says baaji irritaingly.
"Kya hua Baaji."Asks Dutta to Baaji & sees Gajri."Tu?tum dono phir se shuru hogaye?Teri dost kaisi hain" asks Dutta.
"Theek hain.Shukriya.Kal main aapko shukriyada nahi karpaayi.Maafi chahti hoon.Par,aapne bahut madat ki meri dost ki" says Gajri pleasingly.
"Nahi.Usski koi zaroorat nahi.Aapki dos theek hain.Kaafi hain."says Dutta.
"Gajri chal.Gadi nikalne waali hain."saying to Gajri Nakku looks at Dutta.Dutta too gazes at her.
"Haan.Chal chal"......Gajri takes her hand starts moving.Nakku still gazes at Dutta & Dutta too still gazing at Nakku.
"Dutta,chalna.Gadi start hogayi" Baaji interrupts.
Dutta & Baaji too gets into the same bus where Nakku-Gajri went in.
Precap : "Dutta ,kuch bhi bol.Bus main travel karna wakhe main bada mazaa aata hain" smiles Dutta to the smiling Baaji .Nakku gazes at Dutta.Dutta turns & sees that NAkku is gazing at him.
I hope you all enjoyed this part.
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzz...........do comment............................



Edited by kateleode - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for the update...😊....it was awesome...😃...cant wait to see what happens next...😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice updt ! enjoyed it ! Hope to have some cute tasha scene in the next part !
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 2010huma

Thanks for the update...😊....it was awesome...😃...cant wait to see what happens next...😍

Thx Huma................. ............Next part is something you will be looking forward to..............



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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: misssmily

nice updt ! enjoyed it ! Hope to have some cute tasha scene in the next part !

Cute?????????????You will love it.Just wait & watch.................... ...................
Thx a lot for replying dear...........I am very glad that you enjoyed it....................



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Posted: 14 years ago
sakshi beautifully written and just loved it.
Precap is also equally interesting.



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