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Posted: 15 years ago
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ROSE DEAR...sheeba is a lucky girl i can say.....first on mishal's

lap then.....dance wid mishal & now..............😳.WOW..update next part soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: nazia.icycool

wooow rose..i wish i could hit the like button every time u update ur OS!!

awesome work..arre madhia bhi agai...sh emust be happy to see a kurta less mishal..uska dil gadren garden hogaya hoga😆...

aur ye kya??..pet hai ya kua?? 🤣 awesome dialog!! enjoyed reading it rose!


sachi mera dil garden garden kaisey karna hain wo koi tum logo sey sikhey 🤣😆

@ rose: very well written again as always Rose 😉🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i am so happy u liked the update🤗
thanks for ur positive feeback...will update asap😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
hi rose 🤗
woooow this last part had..a flowing dupatta, teddy bear, cruise, love hug and what not!! woow sheeba must be soo so happy..aww...awesome update rose 👍🏼
and the pic!! its sooooooooooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeee 🤗 aja jhappi pa😆loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: nazia.icycool

hi rose 🤗 hello daer
woooow this last part had..a flowing dupatta, teddy bear, cruise, love hug and what not!! woow sheeba must be soo so happy i hope so😆..aww.thank u so much..awesome update rose 👍🏼
and the pic!! its sooooooooooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeactually sheeba wanted a jaadu ki jhappi from mishal 🤗 aja jhappi pa😆loved it

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Posted: 15 years ago
#96
Its the last day on the cruise ....sheeba is on the deck watching the sun set with the white teddy bear in her hands...thinking of how she met mishal for the first time on her bday and he had gifted her the teddy bear...then the lovely moments she spent with him on the cruise...making her all emotional and sad.............( u have portrayed my feelings just the way i would have felt them.........wow............
heavy wind is blowing and sheebas duppatta flies in the air. she runs to catch it but it falls on mishals head. he gets up...turns around and removes the duppatta from his face😍
then walks towards sheeba ......My heart must have been racgggggggggg rose................and places it gently on her shoulder😳
hi ..sheeba...so like all good things this cruise also comes to an end............OMG..........he put it around my shoulders drreamingggg............
he looks at the teddy bear and says " oh u still have it with u....its so cute just like u 😳 btw i went through ur scrap book which u gave me on my bday...must say u have put in a lot of effort in making ....so many articles ...snaps...interviews...my god...didnt know i had a such big fan...thanks so much...i am glad i came to this cruise and met u ...i had a wonderful time and will always cherish these moments............(Mishu shonaa is sooooooooooooooo sweet naa..........wow rose this is awsomeeeeee..............😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛

saying so he comes closer to sheeba ...bends down...his face is only inches away from hers..she closes her eyes nervously and takes a deep breath...after a few secs opens her eyes to find mishal giving a kiss to the teddy bear and saying softly in his ear " always be with sheeba...she is the best...ur lucky to have her besides u "
(Rose this is just soooooooooooooooooo overwhelming............I am actually cryingggggggggggggg.............I mean its just soooooooooooooooooo sweet of u to portray mishal just the way i expect him to be................



on hearing this sheeba gets emotional..tears well up in her eyes...mishal gives her a sweet smile...and turns around to leave. sheeba keeps the bear on the chair when accidently the heart of the bear gets pressed and it says "I LOVE U"
Mishal stops and turns around again...the words ringing in his ears...he comes to sheeba and says " can i ask u for something "
" sure mishal"
" can i get a hug ?"
sheeba nods and smiles through her tears...mishal wipes away her tears and gives her warm ...sweet ...cute...bear hug 😍...................(Abb i can't say anything else rose i am in tears tears of joy of how beautifully u ended this unforgettable OS...............Love u and thankn u soooooooooooooo much..............
Edited by MishalLeoSheeba - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: MishalLeoSheeba

Its the last day on the cruise ....sheeba is on the deck watching the sun set with the white teddy bear in her hands...thinking of how she met mishal for the first time on her bday and he had gifted her the teddy bear...then the lovely moments she spent with him on the cruise...making her all emotional and sad.............( u have portrayed my feelings just the way i would have felt them.........wow............happy to know that i can understand u and ur feelings so well
heavy wind is blowing and sheebas duppatta flies in the air. she runs to catch it but it falls on mishals head. he gets up...turns around and removes the duppatta from his face😍
then walks towards sheeba ......My heart must have been racgggggggggg rose................even i was getting nervous while writing itand places it gently on her shoulder😳
hi ..sheeba...so like all good things this cruise also comes to an end............OMG..........he put it around my shoulders drreamingggg............wah kya scene hai😆
he looks at the teddy bear and says " oh u still have it with u....its so cute just like u 😳 btw i went through ur scrap book which u gave me on my bday...must say u have put in a lot of effort in making ....so many articles ...snaps...interviews...my god...didnt know i had a such big fan...thanks so much...i am glad i came to this cruise and met u ...i had a wonderful time and will always cherish these moments............(Mishu shonaa is sooooooooooooooo sweet naa..........wow rose this is awsomeeeeee..............😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛hopefully u will also cherish this ss forever

saying so he comes closer to sheeba ...bends down...his face is only inches away from hers..she closes her eyes nervously and takes a deep breath...after a few secs opens her eyes to find mishal giving a kiss to the teddy bear and saying softly in his ear " always be with sheeba...she is the best...ur lucky to have her besides u "
(Rose this is just soooooooooooooooooo overwhelming............I am actually cryingggggggggggggg..oh so sorry i made u cry in the ss and in real life as well..sorrry...........I mean its just soooooooooooooooooo sweet of u to portray mishal just the way i expect him to be
...glad i succeded in bringing out the rt emotions.............


on hearing this sheeba gets emotional..tears well up in her eyes...mishal gives her a sweet smile...and turns around to leave. sheeba keeps the bear on the chair when accidently the heart of the bear gets pressed and it says "I LOVE U"
Mishal stops and turns around again...the words ringing in his ears...he comes to sheeba and says " can i ask u for something "
" sure mishal"
" can i get a hug ?"
sheeba nods and smiles through her tears...mishal wipes away her tears and gives her warm ...sweet ...cute...bear hug 😍...................(Abb i can't say anything else rose i am in tears tears of joy oh ur tears are now making me emotional as well😭of how beautifully u ended this unforgettable OS...............Love u and thankn u love u too sweetheart...it was a pleasure writing for usoooooooooooooo much..............

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Posted: 15 years ago
#98
Rose it was such a lovely ending.I really liked it a lot.It was simple and little emotional but loved it a lot.But I hope you continue to write.U R a very good writer.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
Rose.......its a awesome ending........thoda emotional par bohut achha tha........Sheeba gets a parting hug from Mishal.......cool......loved it........
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: swati2008

Rose.......its a awesome ending........thoda emotional par bohut achha tha........Sheeba gets a parting hug from Mishal.......cool......loved it........

thanks a lot dibya for helping me post the pic below the update🤗
yah ending was a bit emotional....wanted to bring out mishees real emotions...glad u liked it
hopefully now sheebas all wishes have been fulfilled😊

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