1 hour special-maha episode

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi to all ltl fans,
At present we know that nakku got kidnapped and again a long weekend 3 days to get back out LTL so i just want to write a story that how nakku should tell the truth to dutta regarding her beauty and situation ...so plz guys dont scold be after reading this....
As we know that nakku got kidnapped by ANNA ..she will be safe becoz anna's wife will help nakku to go out from anna's place
comming to patil niwas dutta is ready with his gang to fight with anna.dutta and his gang started to go to anna's place..mean while comming to nakku..she escaped from anna's place and she is running...anna comes to know that nakku left the place and he orders his men to get back nakku.anna's men will also start to bring back nakku.
nakku running..goons chasing and dutta with his gang on the way....All of a sudden dutta's car will hit nakku...nakku falls down..dutta comes out and sees it is her nakku...nakku is fine..dutta hugs naku and with tears BAHUT DAR LAAGA MUJHE KI TUM KO KUCH HO JOYEGA....AB MEIH BAHUT KUSH HUU HOON..TUMHE KUCH NEHI HUA..MEIN TUMHE KOONA NEHI CHAHHTA ..dutta will be very happy that her love is safe...nakku will be seeing dutta
ANNA's men also reach the place dutta says nakku to stay in car and goes to fight.and fight starts with guns and then all bullets will be over..then both teams come hand to hand...one of anna's men from back comes to hit dutta with a rod on his head.As we all know nakku will come in between and that rod get hit to nakku hardly and bleeding starts from nakku's head..dutta sees and gets shocked and that guy and calls baji and says nakkuuuu..baji comes there and dutta lifts nakku and takes to car and fighting continues between anna and dutta's men.
baji will be driving..back seat meih nakku dutta ki bahomme .dutta 's hand will be on nakku's head with a cloth to stop bleeding...
dutta: baji jaldi
baji: ha bhau...
nakku: ahhh(with pain)
dutta:nakku tumhe kuch nehi hoga..meih tumhe kuch nehi honedunga
nakku:sab mujhe pata hai ki meih marne waali hoon
dutta:nakku aise baat mat kar..tumhe kuch nehi hoga..meih tumhe kuch nehi honedunga
nakku:meih janti hoon sab meih maroonga.marne se pehle meih aapko dil kolke baat karna chahta hoon..aap bas sunlo sab...sab meihne supriya ko bhagane meih madat nehi kiya..maih dhokibaaz nahi hoon..marne se pehle koi joot nehi bolte.maih sach kehta hoonmeih sachi dil se chaha ki aapki aur supriya ki shaadi ho..
dutta:crying...baji jaldi(baji 2 crying)
nakku:sab meih aapko ek sach kehna chahti hoon meri zingagi ki baare meih.meh aapse ek baat chupali..iska matlab meih aapko dhoka dhiya ..aur zooti nehi hoon.ek sach chupayi..eh meih aapko jungle meih hi baatana chahta hoon par kehne se pehle baji agayi..ab kehta hoon..aapne mujhe ek bar poocha tha woh police mere peeche kyu padi ..par uski jawab meih us waqt nehi kehpayi(nakku struggling with pain..)..kyonki woh sach hai mere chehra
dutta shocked kya bolti hai nakku..baji with tears
dutta:nakku....
nakku:ha sab meih kaali nehi hoon..she points to her hands and says eh eh kaala rang meih laga tha mere zindagi bachane ke liye and starts telling the truth that aayi ne lagayi eh raang..sethji ko bhi nehi patha hai meri asli chehra kya hai...pehle hum mumbai slums meih rehtete..meih is kaali rang se he hoon..sab ko laga ki meih kali hi hoon..koi mere paas bhi nehi atithi mere chehra dekh kar..par aapne mujhse dosti ki par ek hatsa se mere asli chehre samne aayi thi..tab se woh police mere peche padi thi shaadi ke baat le kar..mujhe ,mere aayi ko pasand nehi hai..is liye ham bhaagi thi par woh pakadli..meih ne kaha tho usko shaadi nehi karna chahta hoon..usne kaha shaadi mat kar..suhaag raat tho ban mere saath.hum dargaye aur bagayi woh mere pecha nehi choda phir pakadli mujhe..tabhi tumhara entry huyii
dutta:listening and crying and wiping tears of nakku and tells baji soon
nakku:meih dhokibaaz nehi hoon sab..sab meih sach se aap ne pyar karti hoon..sache dil se pyar kiya par kabhi aapki paane ki khoshish nehi ki..koi chal nehi pasaya ..meih sirf aapki khusiya chaha
dutta:closes his eyes feels a lot...
nakku:aapne kaha tha ki jab tum seema ki bhare meih mujhe bataya meihne chal pasaya aap ko paane ke liye ki dutta pyar meih kamzoor hai chal phasane se aap mere chal me phasegi...par jab tumhe eh sab batayi meihne socha thaki appke saat kuch bura nehi hona chahiye..supriya love matter jante bhi..meih apko kehne ke liye kamre tak pouncha gayi par jab tum supriya ke baare meih baji se baat kar rahi thi..meih nehi keh payi..supriya se kaha sab se shaadi kar. us ladki ne kaha ha.mujhe vada dhi..par woh mujhe dhoka dhi
dutta:cries.......
nakku:meri aayi ne mujhe pyar karna seekha di dhokha dena nehi sab

Again anna's men come back and stops car(it's thundering and about to rain)
dutta koh bahut gussa athi hai raste se nikalne ke liye kehta hai..and fights..baji also helps a bit
Anna's men come and get nakku out of car...dutta comes and fights..nakku falls done and becomes unconsiousness..dutta comes near nakku..again anna's men come dutta fights and then it started to rain..nakku color be utharthe..baji n dutta comes back and gets shocked and take nakku to hospital holding nakku's hands ..but treatment dhena hai na ..dutta and nakku hands are aparted...
dutta will suddenly fall down and cries nakku...........and recalls all the conversation in the car
baji comes near dutta to soothe him...aur kehta hai...kaise ladki hai bhau nakku...itne achi ladki ko meih kahi nehi dekha...pyar ke liye koi kuch bhi karega...usne pyar ke liye uske pyar ki kurbann kardiye supriya aur aap ko ek dekhna chahti thi..ab uss ki jann....dutta cries ..........and says kitna sacha pyar hai tumhara nakku......with this face will be out and also nakku ke pyar

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swati2008 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice write up.......i liked the plot.........
Laxman.....can i ask u something???
nazia.icycool thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wooowww....it was sooo nice................
u knw what..when u said that dutta is gonna get hurt with a rod...my heart started beating *thud*..bechari nakku ko lag gayi 😭 ........great action sequence....
loved the idea of colour coming out in the rain....also loved this dialog..baji helps a bit 🤣 🤣 ..i tho had not even expected that from him.... 🤣

amazing OS....loved it...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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laxman very well written hope you continue with some tasha scenes update karo 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: swati2008

nice write up.......i liked the plot.........

Laxman.....can i ask u something???

thank u so much ...ya ask me
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: spandana11

laxman very well written hope you continue with some tasha scenes update karo 😆

ya surely i will continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Good one 😊 👏
In fact CV can consider this idea....

Keep going with many more write ups.


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: nazia.icycool

wooowww....it was sooo nice................
u knw what..when u said that dutta is gonna get hurt with a rod...my heart started beating *thud*..bechari nakku ko lag gayi 😭 ........great action sequence....
loved the idea of colour coming out in the rain....also loved this dialog..baji helps a bit 🤣 🤣 ..i tho had not even expected that from him.... 🤣

amazing OS....loved it...

thank you so much
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@Laxman ur plot is good but without any hard feelings ur plot is a bit cliche altho rainwater washing out the color idea is good ... in fact i thot something like that myt happen in the forest whn they were lost but well it dint turn out so ... the plot that you suggested is as i said cliche....
Its a a very sweet romance btwn two very unconventional characters ... n the story is a mystery as far as predictions go .... Cvs doing a great job with the story line ... but if anything like wat uve plotted turns out even then i would want it to be in a lil "hatke" fashion since the whole stuff as i said is unconventional #Hatke😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very well written Laxman👏.......good plot.....😊

Would love to read more !!!


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