New Tasha OS Need u...Monday prediction..UpDt Pg1!

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Hi everyone............Kal i was sooooooooooooo sad and crying........kuch hii dinon mein jagtaap won our hearts and see him die made me feel really bad😭.............anyways at least he taught shonaa something...............and hopefully gadhaa will trust koyal............(hey pinky ur line dear!😳............)..........


Here's a new one part one shot for monday..........enjoy............part update soon.................😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It begins from yesterday's last scene………U see the two had reached the road to sheher and stand alone staring at the empty road………..

Nakku says sadly----Saab……aapki manzil aa gayii……….

Dutta wasn't listening he just stares at the empty road………….

Nakku says----Saab……….abb se aap apney aur main apney raastey…………Aapka faislaa hai ……..aur main………

Dutta wasn't listening to what nakku was saying and he interrupts her saying-----TU SAHII THI NAKKU!...........

Dutta's sad BG music plays and he says sadly as nakku watches him----Vo humaari madad kar rahaa tha aur main uss par shak kiyaa!..............Vo humaari jaan bachaana chahtaa tha aur main…………MAIN USSI KO NUKSAAN PAHOCHAANEY KII SOCHAA!..............Ussney…..ussney humaarey liye apnii jaan dey dii aur main…………..MAIN NAHIIN SAMAJH PAAYA!...........😭

Nakku looks at dutta and walks to stand by his side……………🤔

Dutta could feel tears welling in his eyes as he recalls jagtaap fall to the ground dead!................

He turns to look at nakku who notices dutta was crying………..

He says softly----Inn dow dinon mein…………..aisaa lagtaa hai………….jaisey………….jaisey na jaaney mainney kitney pal jii liye nakku………………Jaisey…………. iss jungle ne mujhey shaant kar diyaa hai………..Yahaan se dubaraa uss duniyaa mein jaaney se…………DARR LAGG RAHAA HAI!..............

Nakku looks at dutta wondering what happened to him!...........

Dutta takes in a deep breath as nakku slowly holds dutta's hand…………

He looks at nakku and a tear falls from his eyes onto naku's hand………..which she had used to hold his hand!............

Nakku looks at her hand and then at dutta ………….she says----Saab………..aap………..aap toh itney himmat waaley ho………….phir aap………..aap aisii baatein kyun kar rahey ho?!...........

Dutta says turning to hold nakku by her shoulders and say----Nahiin………..NAHIIN HOON MAIN HIMMAT WAALA…………MUJHEY BHII DARD HOTAA HAI NAKKU!..............Aur vo jagtaap……….SAHII BOLAA……EK DUM SAHII BOLAA VO!...............Bhaagta hai main apnii zindagi se………….Bhaagta hai main iss duniyaa se………….Aur abb………(dutta looks into naku's eyes and says hurt………)……….ABB THAK GAYAA HOON!...............THAK GAYAA HOON BHAAG BHAAG KAR THAK GAYAA HOON!..............😭

Nakku looks at dutta and the two stare at each other……………as the ltl BG musi plays in the BG and Dutta steps forward to HUG NAKKU!.............He moves his arms around nakku and brings her close to himself hugging her tight…………..tears roll don her cheeks and a hesitant nakku in the beginning ………….slowly moves her arms around dutta too and hugs him back……………….Silently……….making a promise to him……………👏

PROMISE………..that she would always be by her side………..

PROMISE……….that she would always be her support system………..😳

PRIOMISE…………..that she would always love him…………care for him…………………..and give him all love he deserves………….😳



Kaisa laga?..........😊


Jaldii bataao.............😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sheeba Awesome. Y don't u join LTL creative team.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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goooooood oneeee againnnnnn👏👏👏👏

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey sinak............Thankx yaar........lekin meri aisi kismet kahaan..........😍..I am glad u enjoyed it dear...............😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thankx shally😊.............I am sooooooooooooooo glad u liked it dear...............😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing ............ continue soon!😊
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Thankx salmeen I am sooooooooooo glad u liked lekin yaar just one part OS😊...........waisey i will soon update the os love story.....watch out.................😍
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thanksssssssssssss sheeba u made my day...........................luv uuuuuuuuuuu .............keep writing such grt os...............now me too hav joined ur group of loving datta...........omg its communicable disease.......yet loving it..................
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🤣Triasha..............Communicable disease dutta.........awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww..............I am sooooooooo glad i could make ur day dear......OS love story update soon..wait and watch ...jagtap won't die in it..pukka...............😳

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