OS :TaSha night out in the Jungle Last Part Pg 8 - Page 9

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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
gr8 going girl..i like the way u write
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
i luved the line chal ab ghar chalte hain....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
Part 3: Shabzz...............u have to be the funniest writer alive! 🤣
1. To distract Dutta from recognizing her face, she kisses him??? 🤣🤣....all hidden desires coming out....it wasnt an excuse to make him NOT recognize her but her ultimate long-lived desire to smooch him...🤣🤣....all bahaanas!!
2. Then u make Dutta throw stone at her....awwwwwwwwww........he is such a baby!! 🤣🤣
OMG! First dutta cries for missing Naku, then he calls her his BIWI....and the last scene has to be the killer Shabz.....I can imagine dutta saying all those things about Naku!.....u make me cry too! 😭
I loved this part Shabz! 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
Part 4: Shabz, u made him strip??? 🤣🤣.....Should I get him a pole too? 🤣🤣....BTW, U made him walk in vest and the pajaama?? errrr.............what a sight....how can u spoil his fashion sense like tht??? either pyajama with kurta, or take of the pyjaamaa too!! 🤣🤣
awwwwwww..........he confesses, hugs and kisses her.....and makes its permanent and tells her to go home........wow.......
BTW, Now tht Dutta has realized his love, what wuld Jagtap do in ur story? 😉
awesome end Shabz....u shld write more OSs!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
OMG Shabz what have u doing with naku
she was literally seducing Dutta
i am totally shocked
i was like yeh kya ho raha hai
love it to the core
awesoem ending
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: kiran255

OMG Shabz what have u doing with naku

she was literally seducing Dutta
i am totally shocked
i was like yeh kya ho raha hai
love it to the core
awesoem ending

shocked right??
I told u....read it at ur own risk...🤣🤣
this is nothing,...wait till u see after effects...from tomorrow onwards, u will imagine Naku seducing dutta anywhere and everywhere in the serial!! 🤣🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

shocked right??
I told u....read it at ur own risk...🤣🤣
this is nothing,...wait till u see after effects...from tomorrow onwards, u will imagine Naku seducing dutta anywhere and everywhere in the serial!! 🤣🤣

oh girl ur right after effects has started
im imaging naku seducing dance in front of dutta
which was shown in front of Anna
oh gosh
Naku ka character he khara kardia
bad Shabz
where is my massom naku who doesnt utter a word and now !
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: kiran255

oh girl ur right after effects has started

im imaging naku seducing dance in front of dutta
which was shown in front of Anna
oh gosh
Naku ka character he khara kardia
bad Shabz
where is my massom naku who doesnt utter a word and now !
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

🤣🤣🤣
u know when Dutta gatecrashes the room where fair Naku was, and gets confused, it was so similar to Shabz OS when he gets confused seeing this fair Naku emerge...I immediately thought about Shabz OS and wondered if Naku wuld start seducing Dutta now!!....this is what this gal did to me!! 🤣🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wowwwwwwww dats superb yaar...............👏👏👏👏
I read it & was very touching Dear.......Ultimate...⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
The second part is my favorite...loved the Tasha nok jhok in that part...and naku asking dutta to give her his kurta...😆...I would have loved to c that in the show...Dutta's expressions would have been awesome when she would have asked him for his kurta...and dutta kissing naku on forehead...😍...i loved that part 2...a forehead kiss is much more simple and sweet...hopefully, I read ur other FF soon 2..

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