OS :TaSha night out in the Jungle Last Part Pg 8

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nik_ita

@nik_ita

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Totally Amazing Shabz..........never thought about such scenes.......😆

Very well written......👍🏼......Loved it..........please do continue.....😊

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jess_dutta

@jess_dutta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

too good shabz...i am loving it

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Soni

@soni-zee

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#23

@dew-drop, i just love both part😳, bold Nakku😍, poor Dutta dont know she is herself Nakusha😉, am smiling over this sentence

Naku laughs at his words '& then calls out to him ..

Aye Saahib sun ,, apna kurta de do ..main wohi pehan lungi ..

Dutta glares down at her 'she winks at him ..Dutta shrugs his head & walks away '

Naku : Le isme ghussa hone ki kya baat hai ..kurta hi manga hai 'koi aur cheez to nahi ..ab main kab tak aise phiregi '

😆😆

Post soon ur next part dear😳

Edited by Soni-Sanraj - 15 years ago

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

main bas soch hi rahi thi ki ab mon tak kya karna hai.

thank god 2 u.

😆 i cn't stop my laugh.

AND DEAR U ARE RIGHT THT U ARE NT GUD WRITER.

U ARE THE BEST ONE.😊

OS IS REALLY VERY GOOD.

kash ye sab serial main hona chahiye.

whn i read ur OS , mere eyes ke saamne saare scenes aa gaye.

bechhara dutta😆 kya hal kar diya uska nakku ne.

plz update soon.

ab monday tak aapka hi sahara hai.

warana hum to mar hi jaate.

plz also update ur ff.

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Megha

@meghaparti

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Wow Lovely dear....I m in love with this new nakku...😆

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Yuvika

@Yuvika_15

Moderator

+ 9

Posted: 15 years ago

#26

awesome...loved part 2....naku is funi....

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Alyson Kapoor Wayne

@KalyWayne07

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Oh wow........Shabz, you have left me completely speechless yaar!! I don't know what to say dear, you are absolutely phenomenal!! I totally LOVED your both parts of OS!!! WOW.....I am still speechless yaar....!!! It is magnificent!! I love your second part the most! The dialogues and everything, thanks for this. It is keeping me busying over this weekend and that's what I need! I loved the way Nakku is behaving totally different in front of Dutta and making him annoyed. (: She is Rani of the Jungle!! I loved how Dutta catches her when she fell. (: It is stunning girl, keep rocking and thanks for the pm sweet!!

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nazia.icycool

@nazia.icycool

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#28

ammmaa...ye kaisi nakku hai yaaro!!!..she looks like a rowdy girl...😆 khatarnaak..i wonder how dutta is keeping his cool😉

ye nakku achi hai..she will make him realize that the old nakku never tried to get closer to him ..never forced herself on him..acha sabak sikhayegi ye...😆

shabz u are really very naughty..the naughtiest girl in the LTL forum..lively n cheerful..and so are ur FF's...great work ya!! too good..wese u have to update ur FF also..rano n baji wala..😛😉so ...well done!! 👏 👍🏼