NEW FF-Tu hi re.MahaUpdt-Nakus rishta!Epi-15,Pg-51 - Page 31

Originally posted by: spandana11

kritika update karo waiting great ff 😆

Originally posted by: gp00

I'm in 😍 time after reading this. So sweet and wonderful. Can't wait for Datta's dreams...

Originally posted by: kritika4eva

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Spandana!!😛😛Main abhi wahi karne ja rahi thi!!😳😳</font>

Originally posted by: nik_ita

Pure Romantic.................fabulous episode Kritika........love each n every bit of it......👏
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please update soon...

Originally posted by: Naina_Mishal

oh my gosh didi.....inta goood.....just loved it.....dutta kissed nakkus feet hahahahah so sweet.....jaldi upoad karna...and nice pic of baajirao :D:D

Nainu

Originally posted by: nazia.icycool

wooow kririka..i loved it...
actually i was a lil busy this week so couldnt read the prev post...but now im done with everything and just read the posts and my my the udates were tooo goood man!!! 👏
i will firstly comment on the prev update...
well i was glad to knw rhat it was baji n dutta who decided or rather alloted the places to every one.. 😉 thank god they were not stopped by kala..lol..well i was a bit taken aback bcuz the two kids were sittin tween tasha..i just wished tasha sat together 😳 but i was totally happy that the next tym dutta took an initiative to make nakku sit beside him that was sooooo 😳 😍 ....and.....and.....and...later when nakku replies to dutta ..'thakne sone ka mauka har din milta hai'..i was like haan haan saara din to so hi rahi thi car mein ab kaise neend ayegi?? 😆 😆 ....hey n i also loved that dutta declined the idea of havin baji n the kids wit with them the next day....that was sooo 😳



and comin to the 11th update....wooooooowwww..it was soooo romantic!!! thoroughly enjoyed readin it!! 😳 lovey-dovey scenes especially when the gangster don dutta turns to a doctor and does marham patti to nakku's legs n kisses the..perhaps marham ko dawa ki nahin duaa ki nahin balki pyaarrr aur kisses ki zaroorat hai...hai ki nai.... 😍 😳 😳 ///simply loved the updates...

Originally posted by: mariescott14

hey kri

loved it..dutta is so romantic...baji is clueless not understanding what is happening to his bhao

would really love to watch the scene of dutta spreading his hands and standing

it was so cute the way he carried her in his arms..and took her back

dutta is so in love with her

loved the kiss..feel like going and kissing my cute dutta

love baji's pic

hope u continue soon...cant wait

Naku is strictly ordered by Babi to take ample rest and not roam around the house,"Tu kahi nahi jaayegi aaj..samjhi..agar tujhe is bistaar se uth kar idhar udhar ghumte huye dekha na maine..toh khair nahi!!"Naku protests,"aayi main bilkul theek hai..bas halka sa moch hai'tu aise gabhra rahi hai jaise kuch bura hua ho.."Babi puts her finger on Naku's lips and says,"aage se aise kuch nai bolna'abb chupp chaap araam kar'"Saying so,Babi leaves to complete the chores for the day. Naku sitting on her bed,stares into the empty space and roof,thoroughly bored by her house arrest.She thinks,"Abb main kya karegi din bhar'aayi ne bhi mana kar diya..aur kamre ke aas paas koi aisa bhi nahi dikh raha jisse main baat kar paayu.."Naku looks around the room trying to find a source of entertainment,to help her while away time.She finally gets up slowly from her bed and with the help of the table nearby,stands up painfully.She stands there for a few minutes so that the pain may subside and she can get accustomed to it.

SCENE 2

Meanwhile,Dutta was reading a book in his room when suddenly his eyes fall on the balcony of Naku's room,which can be seen directly across from his window.He feels an urge to and visit her.To check whether she was fine and needed anything.He puts down his book and exits his room heading for Naku's room.

SCENE 3

Back in her room,Naku roams around aimlessly.She suddenly feels a gush of soft wind blowing from her balcony,caressing her cheeks.She immediately limps towards the open balcony and stands,her warm hands touching the cold iron railing.Her soft yellow gergeotte dupatta flows with the air rythymically.Naku's heart and mind is at peace.She forgets the searing pain in her foot.Dutta knocks on the door of her room."Naku....main aa sakta hu andar..??"No answer.Dutta gets worried and opens the door hurriedly.His eyes fall on an empty bed with Naku small jutis tucked in the corner of a sidetable.Worried,he starts shouting her anme,"Naku..kaha hai tu...kaha gayi naku..."Naku's trance breaks and she answers Dutta's desperate cry,"Saab..main yaha hai...bahar.."

SCENE 4

Dutta immediately heaves a sigh of relief and enters the balcony."Tu yaha kya kar rahi hai..maine kaha tha na..bed par se matt uthna...Naku tu itni laparwaah kyun hai..."Naku interrupts and says,"Saab....agar issi tarah pure din bistaar pe padi rahungi toh tabiyat na kharab hote huye bhi ho jaayegi..Abb main bilkul theek hu..Dekhiye..mausam kitna suhana ho raha hai....Kale kale badal...yeh thandi thandi hawa...aisa lag raha hai..jaise baarish hone waali hai.."Dutta looks at Naku with disbelief and says,"Tu sach mein pagal hai Naku.."Naku grins and adds,"Woh toh main hu!!"Suddenly,the sky lights up and there is a bbig clap of thunder.Scared,Naku flinches and tugs on to Dutta's arm fiercely,closing her eyes,hiding her face in his strong arms.Dutta,surprised at the sudden closeness felt like putting his other arm around Naku.He starts lifting his left arm.Suddenly,Naku opens her eyes ,laughs and says,"Maine kaha tha..baarish hone waali hai...Saab...mujhe maaf kar do...woh bijli kadki na...isliye thode der ke liye darr gayi thi..."She smiles brightly at him and adds,"Par abb theek hu..."Dutta puts his lifted hand back on the cold railing.Suddenly with another set of claps of thunder,the rain comes pouring down.The thirsty ground laps up the rain and the fresh earthy smell lifts up.The flowers and tress dance with the rain,refreshed and green.Naku takes in the earthiness around her,closes her eyes and puts out her hands to touch the rain,to allow the first shower of the season to melt into her.Dutta looks at her,mesmerised,lost in her.A fresh water droplet falls on Naku's beautiful pink lips.Dutta's eyes wash all over Naku,from her eyes to her flowing black hair,to her tiny nose to her lips...he sees a water drop and is tempted to kiss her at the moment.He slowly lifts one of his fingers to touch her pink lips.His hands reach her face.He can feel the freshnessexuberating from her..so close to him..yet so far...Naku,unaware,drifts off to dreams,her eyes closed.Dutta touches Naku lips,wanting to turn her towards him and give her a kiss but stops himself and withdraws his hands.Naku,opens her eyes at Dutta's touch and looks at him surprised.Dutta blushes and says,"Main woh..dar asal tere hooth pe paani ka boond tha..wahi hata raha tha..."

To avoid further embarrassment,Dutta turns to leave.Naku suddenly holds his hands and says,"Kaha ja rahe ho Saab..."Dutta freezes in his steps and turns slowly to face a smiling Naku."Accha yeh batao Saab..abb kya kabhi baarish mein bheege ho??"Dutta's eyes popout and he says,"Naku!!Yeh kya keh rahi hai tu..tu janti hai na...main aaj take k hi baarish mein bheega hu...khoon ki baarish..."Naku looks at Dutta's sad expression and decides to change the topic.She smiles at him and says,"Phir toh aap zindagi ki khushiyon mein se ek khushi kam jeeoge.."Dutta looks at her amazed.Naku explains,"Saab...meri aayi kehti hai ki...iss jeevan ek kagaaz hai...jisme khushiyon likhi hoti hai...unme tarah tarah ki khushiyon ki lambi si parchi hoti hai...Mausam ki pehli baarish mein bheegna unme se ek hai...Agar yeh khushi aapne nahi mehsoos ki..to ek khushi kam ho jaayegi jeevan se..Saab...kabhi bheeg ke toh dekho..."Dutta rolls his eyes and says,"Nahi baba..main nahi bheeg-weeg nahi sakta...usse behtaar hai main apne kamre mein jau aur chai peeyu..."Naku looks dismayed and says,"Theek hai saab...jaise aapki marzi.."

SCENE 5

Dutta leaves and as soon as he enters his room,he takes a look outside his window and his eyes fall on Naku,he arms spread around her like wings,ready to take off.He could hear her hum a beautiful tune in her melodious voice ad dancing in the rain like a peacock.Naku gets all drenched in rain.Dutta looks at her longingly from his window,totally absorbed in her.Suddenly,his mind wanders off in the dreamy world...

Naku,in a beautiful red churidaar and suit,her hair open and him in a white kurta-churidar are standing in the terrace.Suddenly it starts raining and Naku,starts to hum a tune and dances around Dutta with her red dupatta touching his face.

In the background,He could hear the song...

Saazish hai boondon ki...koi khwahish hai chup-chp si..

Dekho na...dekho na....

Dutta catches hold of Naku's red dupatta and brings it closer to him.Naku,blushes comes closer to him shyly,her back facing him.

Hawa kuch haule haule..

Zubaan se kya kuch bole..

Kyun doorie hai abb darmiyan...

Dekho na..dekho na..

As Naku comes and close to him,he slowly puts away Naku's stray hair on her shoulders and bends down to kiss her.Naku feels a chill go through her as she feels the warmth of Dutta's lips against her cold body.Dutta hands slip on her hands and he puts his arms around her.Naku smiles and frees herself from Dutta's grip.

Phir na hawayein hongi itni besharam..

Phir na dagmag-dagmag honge yeh kadam...

Naku gives hima teasing smile and runs.Dutta finally gets hold of her hands and jerks her towards himself.Naku and Dutta face other.Naku looks at him,her eyes full of love.Dutta puts his arms around her waist and his face moves closer and closer to Naku..towards her lips...Naku puts her dupatta between them and frees herself from Dutta again.

Sawaan yeh sidha nahi...

Khufian bada...kuch toh baraste huye keh raha..

Samjho na...samjho na...

Dutta gets upset and puts his arms around his chest and looks away from Naku.Naku,laughs and comes near him with her hands clasped,saying sorry.

Hawa kuch haule haule...zubaan se kya kuch bole..

Kyun doorie hai abb darmiyan....

Dutta smiles and looks at her again.He lifts her in his arms.Naku looks at him lovingly,her arms around his neck.And they disappear into the room in the terrace.

SCENE 6

Suddenly,Dutta hears someone shouting and his dream breaks.He opens his eyes immediately and looks towards Naku's balcony where Sethji is shouting at her,"Taayii!!Bas kar bheegna..beemar pad jaayegi..ab chal andar.."Naku nods her head and goes inside her room.Dutta smiles at himself and pats his head.

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😃omg kritika i just ;love ur ff and all da scenes of dutta and naku 2day were awesum👏👏update asap cant wait 2 read mre