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marie

@mariescott14

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Dew-drop
It waz just gr8 marie ...
would luv to read more .....continue soon ..!

thanks shabz

will continue real soon

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marie

@mariescott14

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Irika95
wow...that is awesomeee...👏 want to read more plzz update asap
btw thanks 4 using my siggy... 😊

thanks irika..u do make lovely siggies had 2 use them

will update soon

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Hessa85

@Hessa85

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#23

I loved your version, just hoping it actually happens like this on screen. But Im sure they will drag the storyline as much as possible....

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sinak

@sinak

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Awesome, Amazing one. Hope like this happens in the serial. Our CV are going to drag the love-hate relationship for months.

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marie

@mariescott14

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: sinak
Awesome, Amazing one. Hope like this happens in the serial. Our CV are going to drag the love-hate relationship for months.

thanks sinak for liking it😃

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marie

@mariescott14

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: shai85
I loved your version, just hoping it actually happens like this on screen. But Im sure they will drag the storyline as much as possible....

thanks for liking it shai

as for ltl being draged that toh will always happen

hope i dont get cvs ka beemari and drag my ff 2😆

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nazia.icycool

@nazia.icycool

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#27

IT WAS AMAZINg!!!i hope everything happens just like this in LTL...

so heres wishing u the best of luck for ur viva!!!and thanx 4 this thread..inspite of having the examination u took initiative to start a thread...[:)]

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kinno

@kinno

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Beautiful work. I just hope the same thing happens on Monday. What should happen next is that baji and datta go rushing out to look for naku but she's in a mandir crying her eyes out. Datta and baji still couldn't find her. They go back to the house and Babi and Gandpat are very worried. Then Babi says "what if Moore kidnapped her". Then it should be one of his men go to Moore where she is and they kidnapped her. After that it should be somehow datta finds out about her color and she takes a bullet for datta. While all this is happening another person is added who is naku's best friend. who is really angry an datta.

what ever you write next i bet it's really good. please continue as soon as you can. thanks😊

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spandana11

@spandana11

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#29

good one continue fast waiting for next update

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marie

@mariescott14

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: 92icycool

IT WAS AMAZINg!!!i hope everything happens just like this in LTL...

so heres wishing u the best of luck for ur viva!!!and thanx 4 this thread..inspite of having the examination u took initiative to start a thread...😊

Thanks nazia

it was a tough choice as i have never written any ff before..but guess there ia always a first time

hope u will like future parts and am open for suggestioins