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Posted: 17 years ago
AWESUMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!
SuperBBBBBBBBBBBBBB!!!!!!!!!!!
MARVELOUS!!!!!!!!!!

PLZ CONTINUEE OR I WILL KILL MYSELF>>!!!!!!!!!

Shifa
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sanasara

AWESUMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!
SuperBBBBBBBBBBBBBB!!!!!!!!!!!
MARVELOUS!!!!!!!!!!

PLZ CONTINUEE OR I WILL KILL MYSELF>>!!!!!!!!!

Shifa

no hun please don't kill urself...šŸ˜•

šŸ˜†

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Posted: 17 years ago
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh shivi i'm like one of the last ones to comment 😭 😭 stupid me i didn't even sign on the day u updated!!! 😭 😭 😭 i'm so so so so so so so sorry... stupid me!!! r u updating 2morro? i'll be sure to sign on then!

ok here's my comments:

I LOVED ur update!! as always šŸ˜‰
wow yaar shivani ka raaz khool gaya!! awww shivi u made it so sad yaar!! why why?? i feel so bad for shivani...u can't let anything happen to her!! I love her!!! she has to be fine!! woh teek ho jayengi na? she better take her medicines!! or else aaliyah will come and give them to her!! šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜† man i want to see everyone's reactions when they find out! i loved how karan got the fax and then spilled coffee on it!! it made the whole raaz seem so much more mysterious!! great job!! šŸ‘

u kno everytime u put in tulsi's dialouge it is always correct!! i can imagine her saying exactly wut u put in her dialouge!! u kno how to portray her so well!! am so proud of u!! šŸ‘ šŸ‘

ooooooooooooooo ab kt ka raaz kolo na!!! come on come on yaar i'm waiting...... besabri se!!! šŸ˜† šŸ˜† who is this radha? (reminds me of woh kisna hai song) u kno i thought a guy was after kt...not a girl. hmmmm now i'm EXTREMELY curious wut this is all about!!! who is this radha? wut relation does she have to kt's past? maryam knos about it? wut is kt hiding? wut is she about to do? who is the mystery guy? wut will he do? ahhhhhhhh someone help kt!!!! šŸ˜† i love the fact tht laksh is also looking for her...and he's concerned... 😳 😳 awww he's cho chweet.. šŸ˜† i hope he finds her and beats up tht other guy for harming HIS kt šŸ˜‰ 😳

overall, I LOVED ur update and i will try to comment faster!! i'm sooooooo sorry for not commenting earlier!! (am holdin mah ears šŸ˜† ) Update soon!
love ya
aaliyah šŸ˜› 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: indigal07

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh shivi i'm like one of the last ones to comment 😭 😭 stupid me i didn't even sign on the day u updated!!! 😭 😭 😭 i'm so so so so so so so sorry... stupid me!!! r u updating 2morro? i'll be sure to sign on then!

ok here's my comments:

I LOVED ur update!! as always šŸ˜‰
wow yaar shivani ka raaz khool gaya!! awww shivi u made it so sad yaar!! why why?? i feel so bad for shivani...u can't let anything happen to her!! I love her!!! she has to be fine!! woh teek ho jayengi na? she better take her medicines!! or else aaliyah will come and give them to her!! šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜† man i want to see everyone's reactions when they find out! i loved how karan got the fax and then spilled coffee on it!! it made the whole raaz seem so much more mysterious!! great job!! šŸ‘

u kno everytime u put in tulsi's dialouge it is always correct!! i can imagine her saying exactly wut u put in her dialouge!! u kno how to portray her so well!! am so proud of u!! šŸ‘ šŸ‘

ooooooooooooooo ab kt ka raaz kolo na!!! come on come on yaar i'm waiting...... besabri se!!! šŸ˜† šŸ˜† who is this radha? (reminds me of woh kisna hai song) u kno i thought a guy was after kt...not a girl. hmmmm now i'm EXTREMELY curious wut this is all about!!! who is this radha? wut relation does she have to kt's past? maryam knos about it? wut is kt hiding? wut is she about to do? who is the mystery guy? wut will he do? ahhhhhhhh someone help kt!!!! šŸ˜† i love the fact tht laksh is also looking for her...and he's concerned... 😳 😳 awww he's cho chweet.. šŸ˜† i hope he finds her and beats up tht other guy for harming HIS kt šŸ˜‰ 😳

overall, I LOVED ur update and i will try to comment faster!! i'm sooooooo sorry for not commenting earlier!! (am holdin mah ears šŸ˜† ) Update soon!
love ya
aaliyah šŸ˜› 😊

aww it is okay....i might be updating today...so just to let u know...loved ur comment as always....it always cheers me up, as well maryam's does....😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
It was great šŸ‘ . Shivani's raaz is out finally, its so sad. I really hope she gets cured. Nw waiting impatiently for kt's raaz-the way maryam put everything together was superb. Plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: babybliss8

i am new to this forum and i read ur fanfic non stop
i was so hooked to it
loved it
it was awesome
update soon plz

hey welcome to the forums...im glad that u got hooked onto my ff, thanks for reading it and i hope u continue too....😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
helloo everyone. i just recently started going on india forums again because now im done w. my exams.
and ohh boy am i hooked on this forum esp. this ishq hua loove kahani. its sooooo addicting. i spent like 2 hrs reading this ahahaha =]
i cant wait for the nxt episodee. you hve truly done a wonderful job. i like fell in loove w. your storyy
great jobb yaar!
my fav. scene wld hve to be when laksh and KT first met at the airportt. ahh theyre both soo cute :D loll
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow yaar i just read the last part of r ff.....and seems very intresting.......will go back and read form the begining...... šŸ‘ very lovely.....oved it......

Sanju
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Posted: 17 years ago

Update 16

NJ, USA

Laksh and Maryam are pushing everyone that comes in their way trying to look for Tina. (while they are running, Pheli nazar mein from the movie race is playing).

Laksh while running and looking for Kt imagines Kt and himself dancing to the song that is playing.

Laksh's Imagination

The dance floor is white and the wind is blowing from the every side and the season of love fills the whole room. The stage is all white and all of the side dancers are all dressed in white. Suddenly Kt comes with a beautiful white Indian dress with pink embroideries on. She comes running right into Laksh's arms, and both dance to phehli nazar mein. As the wind blows Kt's hair flies onto her face and Laksh slowly lisping the song removes it slowly and kisses her on the cheek, then the forehead and then slowly moves to her lips, but Kt blushes and runs onto the other dance of the floor. When the part "baby I love u" comes in the song Laksh and Kt get extremely close while everyone is dancing around them. Both look into each others eyes with so much love.

Kt's dress:

Suddenly Maryam screams to Laksh—Laksh, chalo!

Laksh's dream shatters and he no longer sees Kt in this arms and the stage is now shown with others dancing, he quickly grabs Maryam's hand and walks out of the crowd. Tina on the other side is once again seen as they are making their way towards her.

Storage Room

Kt looks at the guy in fear and closes her eyes while her tears roll down.

Guy—No, these tears should not come down love…

He goes close to Kt's face and wipes her tears off. Then he kisses her on the cheek. Kt's moves her face with disgust as the man laughs manically. Kt starts move around to get out of the ropes and chair.

Man—Go ahead and try getting out of the ropes, cause you won't be able to. (he laughs) No one can hear you so don't even try to scream because this room is definitely sound proof.

Kt now makes a strong face because she knew that she was strong enough to take him. In anger she spits at the man, and the man goes and smacks her. Kt's lip starts to bleed even more and the man laughs aloud again.

Man—Now you only have a little bit of time, but before you leave this earth I would like to summarize everything and tell you what exactly I'm gonna do with you, so don't worry and don't be scared because you won't die that early and it will be painful I promise.

Kt—I won't die at all…ma…(Interrupted)

Man—shhhhh, I don't' want to here your voice it reminds of Radha's.

Kt—Don't even dare say her name out of your disgusting ugly mouth. You said you loved her….then why did u?? why did u kill her?? You thought you would get away with it, well not with me around, I will not spare you for what you did.

The man grabs Kt's hair and pulls it hard as Kt screams from the pain.

Man—tsk tsk…dono behane ek hi jaise….baak baak bohot karte ho tum dono. Your voice is the same as her, and so is you face. See that is why I love you Kt, because your face reminds me of your lovely sister Radha. The sad part is that I didn't want this to happen, but you had to be there the time of her rape and murder as a witness…so now I have to kill you. I will kill you the same way I killed her.

Kt—Mein tumhe nahin chodongi!!

Man—Radha and I both loved each other…a lot….but she didn't want to be with me after….she left me!!!! What would you expect me to do Kt? I loved your sister and she left me….why? She asked for it…she deserved it. So that night I lied to her and called her to meet me. She was leaving the next day remember? Then I called her and before she left this world I made her mine!!! I took every part of her and it became mine….but then she said she hated me, and so I KILLED HER!!! But why am I telling you this?? (laughs) Tum to thi waha, jab maine usko mera banaya aur jab maine usko mardala. (laughs louder) Then I thought that I would get away with it but then I saw you run out of the apartment. What I love about you is your face Kt, because your are obviously the twin of Radha. Aur aaj mein MANTHAN OBEROI tumhe bhi nahin chogonga. I will do exactly what I did Radha to you. Ahhhhh the memories…..of Radha are still so fresh in my mind.

Kt—Nahin Manthan stop! (Kt takes a deep breath) please don't kill me! I love you, I always loved you!

Manthan—You are lying.

Kt—No, no I'm not, why would I? I just didn't know what or how to tell you. Please take these ropes off of me…I want to marry you right now.

Manthan laughs manically—You think I'm gonna believe you….

As he gets closer to Kt's face….kt closes her eyes then grabs Manthan's face and kisses him on his lips…..Manthan then laughs louder.

Laksh and Maryam

Laksh—TINA!

Tina turns around and sees Maryam and laksh standing in front of her.

Tina—Yea?

Maryam—Tina, Kt…where is she?

Tina—You mean she is not back yet.

Maryam—Can you just please tell me where Kt is?

Tina—She…..uh..ummm went to the storage room.

Before Tina said anything else Maryam and Laksh made their way to the storage room.

Storage Room

Manthan gets happy and quickly unties Kt, as soon as Manthan has untied Kt she grabs the knife from Manthan's hand and stabs him. She stabs him in the arm, then on the legs, then the back. She drops the knife running. Manthan however was very strong, and so quickly got back on his feet and pulled Kt, and her dress rips a little. He pushes her to the floor and goes on top of her. She quickly bites his arm and gets up. She reaches to the door, when Manthan once again jerks her and smashes her head right into the glass window. As the glass shattered everywhere, Kt began to grow dizzy, Manthan laughs manically and begins to rip the bottom of Kt's dress and pushed her to the floor. Kt did not want to lose this fight as she remembered what happened to her twin sister Radha and how she was raped and burned alive….it felt as if the same had happened to her. She screamed angrily and pushes him off of her again. This time she runs to the door but someone else swings it open, and in comes Laksh and Maryam. As soon as Kt sees Laksh, she smiles weakly.

Kt—I knew you would come….(then she faints right in his arms)

Laksh catches Kt before she fell down and then gave her to Maryam. He then picked up the guy he saw on the floor and started to kick him. He picked Manthan up and punched him really hard, but Manthan once again got back up again, but this time Laksh got angry and punched him even harder than the first and knocked him out cold. He then walks out of the room, and sees Maryam call the police. Laksh took his coat off of him and covered Kt up, since her dress was completely ruined and was ripped a lot. He looked at her; she was bleeding excessively from her head and was bleeding all over her arms. Laksh held his tears back and immediately carried Kt out of the hall where the ambulance was waiting for her. Another Ambulance had arrived to pick up Manthan, and right after he recovered he was going to be locked up.

Mumbai, India

Shivani came out of the hospital and had fainted, but someone grabbed her before she fell. The guy looked at her weak face and the bags under her eyes. He lifted her back to her feet, when her eyes opened.

Shivani—TUM!

Rohan—Ha mein. (he smiles at her sweetly)

Shivani—Please let go of me.

Rohan—As you wish.

As soon as he let's go of Shivani she again falls almost to the floor but once again is caught by Rohan.

Rohan—Why r you so stubborn, come on I will drop you off.

Shivani pushes Rohan away from her with whatever strength she had left in her.

Shivani—I can go on my own, I am not handicapped.

Rohan—Woah, relax….why are you girls always so angry.

Shivani—and why are you guys always looking to see a girl faint so that you can have the chance to touch them?

Rohan looks at Shivani shaking his head and smiling at Shivani's comment. Shivani once again turns around when she goes dizzy again, but this time she grabs a hold of herself.

Rohan now gets angry and walks towards her, grabbing her hand and turning her around.

Shivani—Tum kyun mere peechne pad….(interrupted by him)

He puts his finger to her mouth shutting her up. He then carries her off the ground and puts her in his car, but she quickly gets out of the car and runs into her car, and locks it. Rohan looks at her without any expression. As she drives away he gets into his car to follow her and to make sure that she gets home safely.

Shivani in her car talks to herself angrily.

Shivani—What the hell does he think of himself? Always fricken following me, and tryin to make stupid escuses…stupid guys…I hate them….uffff….i hate HIM!

Rohan in his car

Rohan—This girl is so crazy….(scratches his head) she will get into a big mess one day because of her stupid stubbornness. What the hell is it about her that is bothering me? Why am I so concerned about her? Whatever either way she is my brother's Sali, so I have to take care of her, or else why do I care?

He drives behind her the whole time when suddenly Shivani pulls her car by the high mountains.

She quickly gets out of her car and runs to the mountains angrily.

Rohan—Oh man, what the hell is she doing, I hope she doesn't do something crazy…..

He runs out his car to catch up behind her, as his heart starts to beat faster hoping that Shivani doesn't jump off or something. He finally reaches to the top and hides behind the bushes. Shivani gets by the cliff and screams really loud…..she screams about 4 to five times and then falls to the floor at the very edge of the mountain.

Shivani crys—Why do I have to deal with this?? If I had to deal with this then why was I brought in this stupid world? I hate this…this pain its killing me!!! Why can't it go away….

She looks at her hands, and starts to bang them onto the hard rock breaking her bangles.

Shivani crying while banging her hands—I hate this!!! Why can't it go away?? So tired of life….so tired of lying to my family!!! For five years, five whole years I have been a liar, a big liar!!! I hate myself….I don't want to tell them!!! They will die if I do, mom, dad, Bhoomi, Dadi, and everyone will be so sad….i can't tell them.

She gets tired of banging so she puts her head to the ground crying. The wind starts to blow really hard and her sobs are no longer heard. Her dupatta suddenly flies and lands on Rohan's face, it has blood over it and he goes running towards Shivani. He even has tears in his eyes from hearing Shivani in so much pain. He didn't know what was causing it, but he just wanted to hold her….as soon as he gets close to her he stops himself, and walks backwards thinking that she might get mad at him, he clutches his hands back even wanting to just hold her in his arms. He once again goes behind the bushes.

Shivani after a couple of mintues, wipes off her tears and looks at her hands all bleeding.

Shivani—oh no, what did I do? Now they will all ask me what happened.

As she turned around she sees someone, so she hides her face and starts to walk away. Rohan looks at her with painful eyes and watches her go into her car. Shivani drives away from the cliff and Rohan is left there looking at her duppata covered in blood, and his cheek that had a speck of her blood on him.

Sorry if it wasn't what you all expected!! I tried to make it as interesting as possible but for some reason i thought it wasn't so great...well i hope u guys like it.

Edited by mysterygurl1427 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
noo i liked it! everything was happening all at oncee..it was so intensee lol

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