Originally posted by: sonia054u
well, i read all the parts together today upon a sweet request....anyways, all i can say is that your fan fic is simply amazing...its so interesting that you cant stop...you want to keep reading it further.
though there are lots of ffs on laksh-kt, i have only read three of them so far..the third one being urs...and i can honestly say, all three are different in their own way.....the one thing i really really like about ur ff is its pace....others have the love stories in the first couple of parts....whereas your fan fic starts off with great bonds of friendship b/w laksh and kt....i really like that....its slowly building up to a love story....also, the mystery is a great touch...each part i read makes me more curious about whats gonna happen next.
its has all the great elements....friendship, family bonding, mystery, and hopefully romance very soon....your had a really great start by showing the family bonding between the two families.
another thing i like about ur fan fic is that even though its mainly about laksh-kt, the other characters also play a part....like shivani and the mysterious call...introudcing rohan and rahul....the friendly and supportive characters of maryam and wahida....i loved the way you built these characters as well.
also, one of the most funniest part that i can still remember laughing over is when laksh calls home to tell bout the contract....nandani picks up and karan falls off of his bed...that was so funny.
you guys in this forum are truly really good writers.....all of you three..(you, aishu_fan, and palchin) better be rocking your english classes since all three of you are such great writers.
cant wait to read the next part....so far this fan fic is totally awesome...i hope you keep writing and keeping your readers entertained....looks like you have so many fans...hopefully you wont disappoint us.
keep up the great work
waiting for you to post the next part
thank u so much for givin my ff a chance, believe me aishu fan and i simply would not be able to continue our ff without beautiful readers like u. The people who comment give us our inspiration to go on...thanks so much for a beautiful feeback, i really appreciate it....thanks once again...u r great person. Also if you like mine and aishu's ff u might like Zinu's too...it is called Anjana Safar....if i can find the link i will pm it to u. thanks once again......i will surely dedicate my next part to u. 😳
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