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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: indigal07

^^^ omg Aishu u've been giving me such wonderful comments i'm seriously going to cry yaar! (out of happiness of course 😉 😆 ) awwwwwwwwwwww luv u aishu and ur welcome! u and ur ff deserves the vry best b/c ur a vry talented writer and i love reading everything u write! warms my heart! 😊

thnk u soo much aaliy!!ur sooo simply ther best..tht i dunno wat to say 2 u....except thnk u!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago

part 19

Kt looked from the banister and saw something unexpected…..she saw Shivani downstairs arguing with manthan and manthan screaming back at her…
**********a few minutes back*******
Shivani got out of her car and walked torwards shantiniketans entrance,right when she was about to enter she bumped into someone really hard…and spilled her wallet,some gum some change and some other stuff out of her purse..
Shiv-andhe ho kya? Dekh ke nahi chal sakte?
g-main andha? Tum to aise chal rahi ho jaise ankho pe patti bhandi hui hai aur mujhe anhde bula rahi ho?
Shiv got up and saw who the mannerles person was and wasn't very shocked..
Shiv-tum?
Manthan-tum?
Shiv-tum yahan kya kar rhae?
Man-excuse me!ye mera ghar hai?
Shiv-tum yahan rehte ho?no way!yahan to sirf sharif lof rehte hai!
Man-tameez se bat karo!main karan virani ka beta hoon aur--
Shiv-itna acha ghar,sanskari parivaar,rahees khandan,aur tum inke bete ho?
Man-u just shut up and get lost!tum hoti koun ho mujse ye sab kehne vaali?aur vo bhi mere ghar pe?
Shiv-main yahan tumhari shakal nahi dekhne aye thi,main to yahan kt se milne ayyi thi
Man-omg!to vo gavar abhi tak yahi hai?mujhe laga kai hadse main yaha to ghar gaye hogi yahan to uppar
Shiv-how dare you say that about my friend! aur agar kuch hota bhi to vo tumhare dost ki vaja se hota...
Man-to?kya karoge?kya karoge?
(baatein karte karte eventually they went into the house)
Shiv- jaise maine tumhare uss dost ko teek kiya tha bilkul vaise tume teek karoungi.
Manthan-eew!chuu(touch) kar dekhao agar himat hai to
Shivani poked him-touched ya!
Manthan got raging mad and was about to slap her when kt got downstairs and got in the middle of them and with great difficulty pushed manthan away
Kt-manthan tum kya kar rahe ho?yahan kya ho raha hai?
Manthan--tum abhi tak yahan ho?
Kt rolled her eyes and turned to Shivani-shiv ye ho kya raha hai?
Shiv-nothing kt hes just being an A$$ as usual…!
Manthan--you F***in ----and he was about to pounce on her while someone shouted
Kt-manthan stop!!!
Manthan-you bemari tell ur chamchi to get loss! Varna main --
Shiv-kya karega tu?huh?kya?maar ke dekha! Im right here
Kt was still in the middle trying to make manthan back off
Shiv-your just mad because I punched your friend in the face! Wat a loser getting punched by a girl
Kt looked at Shivani in shock-noo way!
Shiv-yup! Take me to ur room,ill tell u aaall about it

Shivani hit manthan hard on the head which made manthan furious,manthan raised his hand to slap Shivani on the face but kt intervened

Kt-nandini chachi!manthan aapse kuch kehna chachta hai!

Manthan looked back and saw nandini enter the room

Nand-kya kehna tha manthan?

Manthan-nahi kuch nahi-main abhi aya ---and manthan left to his room

Kt and Shivani giggled at how he got scared when nandini came and Nandini left the room shakin her head--ye bache bhi!


***********in the room********8
After hearing all the details kt's mouth hung wide open
Kt-wow good job Shivani!
Shiv-yea I no…! I mean messing with my friends is one thing but then talkin bout my m ioms another!!
Kt-I no wat u mean, if anyone talked bout my mom or parents or friends like tht,well I wouldn't punch them…I would have u punch him for me
Shiv-and I would gladly do it ;)
Kt-aarre haan,neeche manthan ke saath kya ho raha tha?
Shiv-vo?that was nothing..acha hua tu aagaye varna main usse --
Kt-I know!I know!
And for about half an hour they kept talking and talking about designer shopping, new stuff in stores….movies… Guys
Shiv-mujhe to jaana ho ga,main to chali!bye!

After Shivani left kt was combing her hair thinking about laksh..how he made her feel…how she felt as if she was about to faint when he touched her…when she felt her heart would burst out of her chest when he kissed her
Just thinking about laksh made kt's heart beat faster and thinking about laksh's kiss and tocuh made her blush…lost in laksh's thoughts she dropped her brush when she picked it up and put it on the dresser someone put their hands over her eyes
----mere bare main hi soch rahi thi?
Kt' heart skipped a beat as she realized who's voice it was……(of course it was laksh's)
she felt a tingle creep up her skin as she felt his warm breath on her neck..
She looked back into his beautiful eyes and then snapped out of it and started combing her hair again
Kt-main bhala tumhare baare main kyun sochon?
Laksh-kyunki agar itne pyaar se kisi ki khyaalon main khoye ho sakti ho…..zahir hai kai mere khyaalon main khoy ho
Kt smiled-aur agar vo koi aur ho to?
Laksh-aisa ho hi nahi sakta,kyunki mere jaise handsome aur sexy banda nahi mil sakta
Kt-acha?
Laksh-of course
Kt got up and challenged him-aur agar ho to?
This time laksh got curious-kt…?
Kt-nahi main to bas keh rahi hoon….
Laksh-tum kisi aur ke baare main soch rahi thi?
Kt had a smug smile on her face and didn't say anything
Laksh felt something inside him snap,he couldn't even think about kt with somebody else
Laksh roughly turned kt around by the shoulder and backed her upto the wall and looked her in the eyes
Kt took Laksh's sudden action as a shock ,she didn't think hed actually get serious
Kt-laksh?…laksh..main….main to mazak kar rahi thi..tum to…serious…
Laksh-tumhe koi buri nazar se bhi dekhe to mere se bardasht nahi hota
Kt-im s--
And Laksh left after saying that leaving kt feeling torn up inside
What was supposed to be a joke ended up hurting Laksh…
Kt-man I guess I gotta say sorry now!
She went downstairs and saw nandini there…
Nandini--arre kt?kuch chiayya tha?
Kt-nahi-vo-laksh…kahan hai?
Nadini-apne kamre main hi hoga,kyun?
Kt-nahin-kuch nahin

Kt walked up stairs to laksh's room and knocked
Kt-laksh?
She knocked again but no answer,
She called out again-laksh?
Again no answer..she was getting frustrated ,why isn't he opening the door? Kt thought
Kt-fine!main to aye thi sorry kehne,par vo to darwaza hi nahi kol raha!
Kt was about to leave when suddenly the door opened and was dragged inside the room
Kt-what the--
His hand over her mouth laksh pinned her to the wall,kt's eyes were wide with surprise
Kt looked into laksh's yees with surprise and she felt her heart beat faster
After a while of staring kt lowered here eyes and tried to struggle but laksh's hold on her was too strong
Kt somehow got laksh's hand off her mouth and gasped-laksh!kya kar rahe ho? Choro mujhe!
Laksh-tum hi to aye thi pehle mere kamre main,bolo kya baat hai
Kt-pehle jaane do mujhe
Laksh-nahin,itni mushkil se tum haath aathi ho,itni jaldi nahi chorne vala,au r vaise bhi tum pehle mere paas ayi thi
Kt-haan aye thi,par main aise baat nahi kar sakti………fine!laksh…maine sorry bol na tha
Laksh-sorry?
Kt-haan..vo..jo miane tumhare saath mazak kiya tha vo acha nahin tha,im sorry
Laksh smiled at her softness and innocence and started putting his face closer to hers
Kt got nervous and tried to leave but laksh held on tight kt struggled
Laksh ignored her and nuzzled her neck,he caressed her back and slowly worked his hand behind her back
Kt felt as if her heart would jump out her chest,she closed her eyes and felt chills down her spine
She felt laksh open her dori and gasped she was scared how this would end, laksh put kt's kameez down just a bit under her shoulders
She couldn't tell laksh to stop she felt as if her mouth was glued shut ,She opened her mouth to tell him to stop but no words came out ,laksh kissed her neck and gently bit the nape of her neck
Kt bit the corner of her lip as laksh kissed her neck then he gently kissed kt on the lips
At first kt didn't respond but after a bit kt felt her self respond to laksh's passionate kiss ,just then a knock startled them and they broke off their kiss
Kt felt her face grow really hot and fixed her shirt and dupatta ,again they
heard the knock which startled kt really bad
It was Archita -bhaiyya! Chachi tumko neeche bhula rahi hai
Far away voice-arre achita!!
Archita-ayii!!
Kt felt embarrassed,nervous,shy,flustered,kt nervously tried to open the door knob,but she was too flustered
Laksh came behind her and tightened her in a tight hug kt turned around and buried her face on his chest
Laksh stroked her silky hair and kept apologizing
Laksh-im sorry kt,I didn't mean to-please mera vishvas karo
Kt's throat escaped a low sob and turned around,opened the door and ran to her room
Laksh-kt--!
Kt ran to her room and slammed the door behind her,she felt her face burn,she felt every part of her body tht laksh touched on fire
Kt felt guilty and confused and scared
Kt (in her mind)-mujhe aisa nahi karna chaiyya tha…agar kuch ho jata -agar Archita nahi aa jati to--to kya hota--nahi kuch nahi hota,par agar hota to?
Kt felt guilty,she wasn't supposed to do any of this sort,she wasn't a person who would go in a guys room and then--
Kt-nahi,mujeh laksh par pura vishvas hai,who kuch bhi nahi hone deta
Kt remembered how laksh pinned her to the wall ,how she tried to get away…but laksh held on
Kt washed her face and flopped on the bed and sobbed,she didn't know why she was crying,maybe because she wanted laksh to continue,maybe because she was feeling guilty,kt knew it wasn't right but something deep inside her wanted to be close to laksh,for him to hold her tight for him to kiss her

Laksh inside his room was pacing back and forth
He felt guilty and ashamed of himself,he felt agitated and torn up…
Laksh-gosh!kt probably hates me now!!
Laksh banged his head on his closet in frustration
Archita came in--bhaiyya!!aap abhi tak tyaar nahi hue!?!
Laksh sighed-tyaar?
Archita-haan!baa ne pooja rakhi hai
Laksh-pooja kisliye?
Archita-plz bhaiyya don't ask me!!I have no idea..just get ready or ganga chachi mujhe daante ge!!
Laksh-teek hai…ab tum jao
Laksh got ready all the while feeling guilty and thinking of a way to console kt
Archita also told kt about the pooja to get ready
Archita-kt come on!pooja ke liye tyaar ho jao!
Kt-pooja?
Archita-haan,humare baa ne ek pooja rakh vai hai
Kt-nahi Archita,mera sar dard ho raha (kt's head was truly hurting because of stressing so much over nothing,well not exactly nothing but still!)
Archita-no excuses kt,pooja main beto gi to sara sar dard door ho jaye ga,ok?
And Archita left without giving kt a chance to reply
Kt got ready in this suit and went downstairs and quietly sat in the pooja in the back not wanting any comments from mantahn,or anyone acknowledging her
Kt prayed to god to help her with her problems and help her make the best descions in life in the future.
Ganga and sahil did the arti,so did gautam-damini,karan-nandini,nakul-Sanchi,Archita,mohini etc
Ganga-arre Archita,maine tumse kaha tha kai kt ko iss puja main bulane ke liye,tumne bukaya kya?
Ar-haan,vo---after scaning the sitting guests she spotted kt--vahan hai
Ganga-arre kt tum vaha kyun beti hui ho?yahan aake beto--pointing to an empty place by laksh,at first she hesitated but then went and sat by laksh
After the pooja kt went outside in the garden for fresh air,she didn't feel so good,she felt drowsy and her head hurt…
Kt-I dotn feel so well..hopefully this fresh air will make me feel better,ive been so depressed lately,the attacks,mom not feeling well,kajjal getting sick…today…
Kt sat down on the swing and started to read after a while laksh came and sat by her,kt ddint notice at first but then laksh made his presence noticed…



IM SOOOOOOOOOO SORRY FOR THE DELAY!! U GUYS CANT BELIEVE HOW BUSY I WAS!i had to got picincs..graduations..work..babysit..gym...plzz accept my apology ill try to update faster...! i tried to make it a bit funny..im not sure if tht turned otu well...i also tried to make it a bit romantic...im soo sorry its not soo good but believe me itll get much better

Edited by aishu_fan - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
u dont need to be sorri
studies first
it was awesome as usual
loved it
manthan is soooo annoyin
thumbs up 2 shiv
laksh feelin guilty n kt uncomfortable
hope it becomes okay between dem soon
cant w8 for da nxt part
update soon plz
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Posted: 17 years ago
***space reserved*** aishu i dont have time right now im soooooo sorry 😭 , but i promise as soon as i get time, i'll read ur update!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
no prob man! cant wait to read ur comment! ILY
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow..this was totally worth the wait...and plz dont be sorry as study always comes first.

what i really liked about this part was how you made the emotions so intense....you described every detail so well...that made the laksh-kt scenes more romantic.

kt's dress was absolutely awesome and breath-taking....really good choice.

take care and have fun...and we cant wait till you put up the next part...dont make us wait too long.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sonia054u

wow..this was totally worth the wait...and plz dont be sorry as study always comes first.

what i really liked about this part was how you made the emotions so intense....you described every detail so well...that made the laksh-kt scenes more romantic.

kt's dress was absolutely awesome and breath-taking....really good choice.

take care and have fun...and we cant wait till you put up the next part...dont make us wait too long.

thank you soo much sonia im sooo glad u noticed that i tried to make them really descriptive and intense..im soo glad u noticed and u liked! yea i know i luvvved tht dress so im like its not soo dressy but its beautiful so y not!

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Posted: 17 years ago
very good part👏
no need to be sorry😳
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
Nice comment
I can't wait read next part 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
very lovely part yaar 👏 cont. soon....just finished reading all of them... 👏

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