Originally posted by: indigal07
i don't have time to read rt now tho i'm dying to 😉 😃 so i'll reserve this spot!!
haha, i was going to update at the end of the week, but i couldn't help myself soooo😃.....
Here I start my lamba (long) msg!!!!😆
Maryam this ff is PHENOMENAL!!! Ahh I LOVE IT!!! Lagta hai duniya ke sabse ache writers hi LKt ke ffs likhte hai, like you and shivi and all the others (yet the only 2ppls lkt ffs I've read so far r urs and shivi's) I LOVE this ff!! You have to continue! Nvr stop ok? Because I love love love it!!! It's different than all the others I've read so I rly enjoy it! Plus I love ur writing style and the parenthetical comments u put here and there. It's as if ur actually talking to us and tht makes reading more fun! Ok on to the story:
I totally love the title! Pyar kar completely matches with the story! I love the fact tht lkt have confessed their love for one another. Awwwwwwww laksh is shooooo cute!!!! I love how he protects kt from the world!😳 1 of my fav parts is when its raining and kt is getting wet unaware of the guys looking at her and laksh puts the jacket on her and holds her…. Ahh…sigh… so sweet.😳
I love the mystery tht you've created with this killer. It makes it so suspenseful and fun to read. I like the nice dramatic scenes when kt gets into trouble and laksh blames himself for it… awwww laksh… of course its not his fault but his guilt shows tht he cares!😊
Next, I love the scene where laksh goes to kt's room when she is changing and both get embarrassed and he goes out! It was sooooooooooooo funny!😆 😆Haha! I loved it! Oh and the part where manthan stares at kt…(shivering) tht was freaky…but juicy and enjoyable at the same time! These r my fav parts too! Btw, I love how laksh protects kt from manthan as well…so sweet!!😳
I love how all the girls r nice to kt, even bhoomi. It makes the atmosphere so nice and friendly.
Ahh..now moving on the one ….the only…ROCKY!!! Wow tht guy is one mysterious dude! He must be the killer! It's either him or manthan…my guess. It could be manthan and rocky his accomplice….or the other way around…or just rocky working alone …. I rly love the suspense created there! How thrilling!
Now moving on to ur latest part 17 (I kno yaar I skip around a lot but I write wutever comes to my mind at tht moment) The hospital scenes were very good! I felt bad for laksh…bechara kuch kaya na piya…he's so concerned for his love…awww and poor ganga was also worried about him! Laksh keeps telling kt to stay at his house and his mom says the same….and poor kt thinks she is a bhouj on them…any grl would rly…but I wonder when kt will permanently live in his house without feeling like a bhouj😉. Tho I'd rather much enjoy college life/unmarried scenes rt now, marriage can come later of course. Waise bhi in dono love birds ko kabhi na kabhi shaadi to karni hogi na?😆 I love kajjal in these scenes yaar! The girls got guts! My kind of girl! I love it! Aha! The strong Shivani once again huh? Fun! Cant wait to see Shiv's and kaajal's confrontation with rocky! Will he fool them? Try to kill them? Or will they succeed? Building suspense yaar you must continue! Can't wait for the nxt part!
Btw, I kno u want more comments b4 u cont. but u kno I think if u want more comments u should move ur ff to the ff section. More ppl will read it tht way. I think someone suggested this b4….was it zinu? Hmmm…I don't remember properly but yea, its good advice. Ur choice tho. I might start my own lkt ff but I think I'll put tht in the ff section… where my other ff exists (it has lkt in it, they're one of the couples) which is called Love in Calli… u can tell me if u want the link, I'll send it to u..😳😊
Luv ya
Aaliyah
ps: forgive any typos...was typin this fast..😳
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