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Posted: 17 years ago
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it is 27 sep nyt n kt is thinking wat will laksh give her tom on her b'day
d same is wid laksh he's thinking abt d romantic surprise that he will give her tom.
next morning
k: getting ready in a pink salwar kameez and combing her hair(in front of d mirror) n luking abslutly so pretty
l:comes n hugs her frm back.
k:laksh ye kya kar rahe ho?
l:kuchh nahi
k:chhodo mujhe
l:kyun???
k:koi aa jayege
l:to?
k:to kya chodo mujhe
laksh leaves her
k:mujhe wish nahi karoge kya
l:wish kyun?????
k:laksh chalo mazaak chodo aur mera gift mujhe do
l: kt ye kya bole ja rahi ho kabhi wish to kabhi gift. aaj kucch hai kya???
k:tumhe yaad nahin hai
l:nahi to. kya hai aaj?
k:tumhe sach much yaad nahi hai(a l'il cryingly cuz she's realyy hurt)
l:nahi kt tum batati kyun nahi?
k:KUCHH NAHI HAI!!!!
AND she storms outta d room.
l: kt ....kt ...kt ruko to...kt. (laufing wen she goes)
................................
IN THE EVENING
kt is standing in the hall wid her arms folded still mad at laksh cuz he hasnt wished her yet.
k:kya khak pyar karta hai mujhse. aaj itna khas din hai aur use yaad tak nahi hai
laksh comes from baCK and hugs her
l:kuansa din hai aaj??
k:tum? tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?
l:tumhae pyar kar raha hoon aur kya??
k:mujhe tumhare pyar ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. tum chodo mujhe.
l:(leavez her n turns her to face him.)kya hua jaan itni naraaz kyun ho. subah se tumne mujhse baaat bhi nahi ki hai. baat kya hai
k:kucch nahi. tumhe kucch kaam tha kya?
l:main tumhain sirf itna kehne aaya the ki ki main office jaa ra ha hoon kisi kaam se. aane main der ho jaygi isliya mujhe yaad mat karna(naughtily)😳
k:main kyun bhala tumhe yaad karne lagi? tumhe jahan jana hai jao. mujhe koi farak nahi padta.
l:ok to main ja raha hoon. bye
k:BBYYEE!!!!!!!!
..............
WEN LAKSH'S GONE D DOORBELLRANG N KT OPEND D DOOR. IT WAS A PARCEL AND ALETTER 4 HER.
SHE OPENS D LETTER. IT READ:
KT
MAIN JAANTA HOON AAJ TUMHE BOHOT BURA LAG RAHA HOGA. PAR KUCCH DER KE BADD TUMHARA MOOD EK DAM THANDA HO JAYEGA. AAJ SHAM KO 7 BAJE HAMARE FARMHOUSE PER MAIN TUMHARA INTZAAR KAROONGA. WAHI WALI DRESS JO US PACKET MAIN USE PEHEN KAR TIME PAR AA JANA.
....................
ARCHITA WAS WATCHING ALL THAT BEHIND HER N D WHOLE HOUSE XEPT KT KMEW WAS LAKSH'S PLAN
A: YE KYA HAI KT??
KT TURNS
K: PATANAHI ARCHITA KISI NE LETTER OR YE PACKET BHEJA HAI.(A L'IL CONFUSED)AUR KAHA HAI KI AAJ SHAM KO 7 BAJE FARM HOUSE PAR PAHONCH JAUN. MUJHE TO KUCCH SAMAJH MAEN NAHI AA RAHA . PATANAHI KAUN.......
A: ARE TO CHALI JAO NA
K:PARR........
A: ARRE KT KISI NA ITNE PYAR SE TUMHE BULAYA HAI OR TUM USKA DIL TODOGI KYA??
K: THEEK HAI MAIN CHALI JAONGI.
...............................
AT 7 PM
KT GETS DRESSED IN D SAME DRESS DAT HAS BN SENT 4 HER
IT IS A WHITE BACKLESS BALL GOWN WITH ACROWN. SHE IS LUKING SO BUTIFUL JUST LIKE A PRINCESS.
SHE GOES AT D VENUE.
SHE OPENS D DOOR OF THE FARMHOUSE AND HER EYES R WIDEND AT D DECORATION. THR ALL RED AND WHITE BALLOONS ON D FLOOR N D MESSAGE "HAPPY B'DAY KT" IS WRITTEN EVRYWHR. ITS SUCH A ROMANTIC ENVIRONMENT. SHE'S SO HAPPY 2 C ALL THAT BUT IS A LIL UPSET ALSO CUZ SHE WONDERS IF THIS WUD HAV BN DONE BY HER LOVE .... HER LAKSH...
A VOICE COMES AND SPKS:"BOHOT SUNDAR LAG RAHI HO.BILKUL EK RAJKUMARI JAISI"
K: KAUN HO TUM AUR MAUJHE YAHAN KYAN BULAYA HAI?
N THEN LAKSH WHO IS STANDING BEHIND A PILLR AND WATCHING ALL THAT COMES OUT WITH HIS ARMS DEMANDING HER N SAYS"HAPPY B'DAY JAAN"
KT IS OVERWHELEMED 2 C HIM. AND RUNS IN2 HIS ARMS AND HUGS HIM SO TIGHTLY. LAKSH HOLDS HER EQUALLY TYT.
HE WHISPERS ONCE AGAIN IN 2 HER EARS" HAPPY BIRTHDAY"
N SHE WHISPERS "THANKYOU SO MUCH". THEY PULL AWAY FRM EACH OTHER RELUCTANTLY N LUK INTO EACH OTHER'S EYES ENDLESSLY. AFTER SOME TIME.................
K:YE SAB KARNE KI KYA ZAROORAT THI???
\L:KYUN TUMHE PASAND NAHI AAYA KYA??
K:NAHI AISI BAAT NAHI HAI.(N HUGS HIM AGAIN. THEY BOTH SWAY INTO EACH OTHER'S ARMS AN TALK)
L:PHIR???
K: MUJHE LAGA KI TUM MERA B'DAY BHUL GAYE.
L:MAIN US DIN KO KAISE BHOOL SAKTA HOON KT JIS DIN MERI KT SIRF MERE LIYE IS DUNIYA MAIN AAYI THI??
KT SMILES WID HER EYES CLOSED.
PULL AWAY FRM EACH OTHER.
K:(NAUGHTILY)MERA B'DAY PRESENT KAHAN HAI?
L:AH ABB WOH BHI CHAHIYA KYA????😉
K:NAHI NAHI MAIN TO MAZAK KAR RAHI THI. MUJHE SIRF TUM CHAHIYA HO.
L: PAR MAIN TOH TUMHARE LIYA TOH KUCCH LAYA HOON
K:KYA??
L:AAO MERE SAATH
LAKSH MAKES HER SIT ON A SOFA NEARBY N HIMSELF SITS ON D KNEES DOWN.HE GIVES HER A SMALL BOX PERFECTLY WRAPPED.
K:ISME KYA HAI??
L:KHUD HI KHOL KE DEKH LO.
KT OPENS D BOX 2 FIND A BUTIFUL DIAMOND RING
K:LAKSH YE.....LAKSH PUTS HIS FINGER ON HER LIPS
HE TAKES OUT D RING TAKES HER HAND AND FITS IT INTO HER RING FINGER AND KISSES HER HAND.
L:KAISI LAGI??
K:BOHOT SUNDAR HAI.
L: TUMSE ZYADA NAHI HAI.
KT SMILES TAERFULLY
LAKSH TAKES HER 2 TO D ROMANTIC CANDLE LYGHT DINNER WCH HE HAD HIMSELF PREPARED.
THEY FEED EACH OTHER WITH THR HANDS
THEN LAKSH TAKES HER TO D DANCE FLOOR AND THEY DANCE TO THE TUNE OF"TU HAI ISHQ MERA" (REMEMBER D SONG OF UNNUPARI SITE")
THEY ENDLESSLY STARE AT EACH OTHER AND AFTER SOME TIME KT SLOWLY PUTS HER HEAD ON LAKSH'S CHEST AND THEY SWAY INTO EACH OTHER'S ARMS AS A SILENT NYT TOOK AWAY.
\
ESHA
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THNX THIS WAS MY FIRST ATTEMPT. I M NEW MEMBER. PLZ TELL ME HOW IT WAS.


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o wowowowowow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i luved it!!soooooooooooooooo sweeet!!
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wooooow greatt lurvd iit
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OMG!!!!!!! ur such a good writer yaar totally romantic 😉 but anyway fab part and i love it so much im waiting eagerly for the next part update soon and welcome to IF 😃

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wow! that was great so interesting. I am eager to see your next fanfics. WELCOME TO I-F ESHA!
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plz plz plz plz cary on your an really good writer
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hello guys i m so glad u luved my scene. i wanna know 1 thing whether thz cns get deleted after a few daz 1ce th'r posted? if yes then how 2 make them safe???
plz tell me. n yea i m soon gonna ryt d next cn
bye
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cool plz plz plz do continue it
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plz update soon
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