Socha na tha-ff 4 Laksh,KT,Eklavya

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Posted: 18 years ago
#1
PART-1....Laksh is
a
middle class guy who is
crazy about music.his gr8est

ambition is 2 become a gud
playback singer.his friends r

Archita & nakul. A is the
daughter of a famous

music director Inderji{Ronit
Roy}.L's plan is 2 get
a
chance from him 2 sing 4 a
movie.A has given him

hopes.he stays in the outhouse
of a rich family.a smart

old lady called Arundathi

stays there with her
grandchilren Krishna Tulsi{19yrs
old } &

shamit{11yrs old}.her son
Om{KGGK}& wife naina r in

america.One day in the
morning,L hears a sweet

female voice :dadi,i'm going 2
college. L was eager
2
see her.he looks thru the
window.he sees a girl going

out on a bike.he cud see only
her back.short

top-jeans...silky hair.after a
few days,shamit comes 2

see L with a request:can u
do 1 favour? he:yes

sure. shamit:she told 2 take
the book thats kept on the

top of the cupboard. L:who
is this 'she'? shamit:my

luvly sister krishna tulsi
L
smiles.he remembers seeing her


back 1day .he wants 2 see her
face. he goes there &

takes the book from the top of
the cupboard.the shy

girl{kt} extends her arms
from the room 2 reach the

book. L smiles:cum out of
room. she cumes out

slowly.L was shocked 2 see
her.bcoz she was looking

horrible.she was in a pink
salwar.she hs worn a big

black framed spectacle.her
teeth were that horrible...as
if
its going 2 cum out of the
mouth.L gives her the

book. K smiles:thanku..
L goes out

immediately.he was feeling
awkward remembering her

horrible smile. K &
shamit in the room.shamit

laughs:that poor fellow ran
away with his life.he got

scared. K laughs. she
removes her spectacle & the

duplicate teeth she had worn 2
fool laksh. shamit:didi,u

wear it always.u look better
in it. K becomes

angry:u naughty boy.....they
dance 2 the song...its the

time 2 disco...suddenly
hearing dadi's voice they stop


the music & pretend 2 be
studying. dadi cumes:gud,u
both
r
studying.every1 knows that
u'l study well with gud

culture if ppl stay with me.
K-shamit felt funny.

dadi:ur dad is online..they
become so happy that they

rush 2 take the Ph. shamit
talks.K takes the

reciever from him:hello
daddy,how r u?i'm fine...L


passes by...he looks at her
thru the window with a weird

feeling.he cud'nt see her face
.suddenly K turns

back .L was surprised 2 see
K's normal

appearance. K did'nt see
him.she continues talking:u

hav a surprise 4 me?whats
that?its a suspense? u'l bring

it
when u cum here next
time?o!daddy,u r so

sweet.....L
whispers:kt,u r also
sweet....
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Posted: 18 years ago
#2
PART-2...Laksh:kt u r also sweet like ur dad....the
next day when KT goes near
her bike,L was seen b4
her.she gets shy,bcoz her
identity is out now.
L:so.. were playing a
drama...K:what drama?what
did i do? L:why did u fool me?
K:u got fooled
easily bcoz u r foolish.what
can i do 4 that?
L
becomes angry.but he controls.
he becomes sweet
purposefully:why did u hide ur
pretty face? Kt gets
impressed by that statement.
she laughs:bcoz i wanted 2
tease u? L smiles:but why?
she:simply...she takes
her bike & goes away with a
smile on her face. ronit
tells himself:i'm going
crazy...is it luv?or simply an
attraction? he sings & dances
around in that spirit:dil
to paagal
hai...Archita:laksh,who is in ur mind?
L:music. A:no 1 else? he:who
else can take that
place? L:i can't believe it
seeing u singing &
dancing like a mad person.
ronit becomes embarrased.
Nakul laughs.
L:anyways,2morow,there is a song
recording.u cum with us.the
super singer Rocky
is the male singer.and the 1 &
only archita is the female
singer. L:u r so lucky
archita..A:1 day that
luck will cum 2 u laksh. he
smiles. he also goes 2 see
the recording.he sees the song
recording & enjoys.he
dreams -...L singing in
the place of rocky. A intoduces him 2 inderji. L:plz
giv me a chance 2
sing 4 a movie sir. inderji:i
can't tell u yes
immediately.1st let me hear ur
song. L gets
tensed.so his voice does'nt
cum out properly.he was very
weak in singing. inderji
becomes angry:this is ur song?&
u r so prowd.u want 2 sing in
my movie?rubbish.he
does'nt even listen 2 archita's
words. A:laksh,why r
u getting tensed?u were so
energetic. he:i dunno how it
happened. she:anyways,u hav 2
take practise. he:ok...
L goes 2 see inderji's
house.he becomes angry:why r
u here again?i told u no,u
can't sing,so no chance 4 u.
he becomes sad.but he does'nt
show that. he:no problem
sir.plz giv me sum other
job.i've financial problems.
inderji:can u do cooking?
ronit was confused. A
shows action 2 tell yes from a
small distance. so L
shakes his head. inderji:u no
cooking? L:yes sir.
inderji:so 2day onwards u can
do cooking here. he:ok
sir. inderji goes.A cumes.
L:archita,i dunno
cooking at all. A:its
ok,i'll help u.ronit,its a
gud chance 2 get close 2 my
dad.u'll get a chance 2
prove ur talent. L
smiles:thats my hope. L
serves food.he was tensed
about inderji's reaction.
inderji tastes it:u r a gud
cook. L:thanku sir.i'm
also a singer. inderji
teases:that i no.that day i had
heard ur song no.
L:sir...thats bcoz of my tension.
inderji does'nt mind it.he
feels funny. A consoles
him. L goes back.he sees
Kt's bike.he goes &
touches it smoothly.he kisses
it.he hears a laughter.it
was shamit's.L gets
embarassed:full of dust.i was
cleaning it.. shamit smiles &
goes out with his cricket
bat. K brings a plate full
of gilebies & ladoos
without others' knowledge &
keeps it on ronit's table
thru the window.she hoped that
seeing this he will
search 4 her.K hides
herself 2 see L's reaction
seeing it. L had seen
it,but hid himself from
A.he cud guess pooja's
plan.so he pretends 2 be
crazy about these sweets.he
does'nt look 4 her,instead
of that he eats it fast as if
he was starving 4 1
week.K becomes angry &
goes away.seeing it,L
laughs.he felt funny.K
keeps a paper piece on
L's table thru the window
& goes.L sees the
paper,takes it &
reads.."fool,bloody fool...." L
becomes angry.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#3
itz really gud 👏 !
plz continz!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey great job.............. 👏 ..plz post teh next part soon

love
ami_princess 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#5
Part-3....KT & harshini were cuming back from the
college. H:how was 2day's
class? K:oh,boring
yaar...i was not at all
listening.
Laksh with tuff face
stands b4 them. K whispers 2
H:this is that
fellow..H laughs.L
cud'nt stand them teasing.
L:kt,i want 2 talk 2
u.plz cum 2 the park.i'll
wait 4 u.
K:i'll think about it{with
headweight}..
L waits 4 K at the park.she does'nt
cum.he gets really irritated.
but after sumtime she
cumes. L was angry:why did u
becum late? K:i was
not late..accoding 2 me..i cum
only when i feel like..
L:ok..he takes out the piece
of paper K had kept
on his table:whats this?
she:can't u see?its a
paper.very funny..L:i no
that.but whats written
here? she:can't u read
english? he:yes,thats why i asked
u. she:i've written that u r a
fool,bloody fool!
L
loses his control:stop it.in
the beginning itself i new
that u r naughty.but i took it
as a funny thing.but now
u r crossing ur limit.u don't
no who i am.u no,when i
was in the college,i've done
many notorious things.
K laughs:so u r
adventerous.let me hear ur
adventures.tell me...tell
me....L:i won't tell u.but
i'll show. he keeps her
tightly close 2 his chest &
kisses her. K screams at him:u
brute!how cud u do
this 2 me?this is the way u
hav 2 behave 2 a girl?
L
becomes upset:i'm sorry..i did
this 4 fun. she:this is
how u shud hav fun?i'll tell
this 2 dadi...& 2
every1...she runs away.L
becumes upset & goes 2 see
Archita & nakul. he:i did a
blunder.
A:what did u
do?
L tells everything.they were shocked.
Nakul:lsksh,this is not a silly
thing.u hav insulted a
girl in a public place.if she
files a sexual harassment
case,u'll be put into the
jail. L gets tensed:then
what can i do? N:go there
during the nite.u take
all ur things & escape without
their knowledge.
L,A,N go
there.only L gets inside.he
goes 2 his room & takes all
his things.suddenly he was
shocked 2 see kt standing
b4 him. L gets
embarrased.
K:so,u r planning 2 escape from here.
L:no,i was arranging
everything. K:don't lie.u
can't escape now.i've called
every1 here 2morrow.let
them cum & giv u punishment.
L:its my request.plz
don't spoil my future.
she:this u had 2 think b4. he:i
did that,bcoz u made me angry.
K:so when u bicum
angry,u kiss others? L:no,i
kiss only u.bcoz i
thot u...K:what did u think
about me?u thot i luv u?
L:leave it plz..u can giv me
any punishments.but
don't insult me b4 others.
she:u're willing 2 accept any
punishment that i giv u?
he:yes. she:then u extend ur
right arm.
L extends his right arm after closing his
eyes.K felt funny seeinh his
tensed face. she kisses
his arm.L opens his eyes with
surprise.he cud'nt
believe it. k was shy.L kisses
her arm.then they
hug each other.
N:where is this laksh?i doubt
whether he is caught by them.
A:let me go & see.
she goes..she was shocked 2
see both of them hugging
each other.she smiles & goes
back 2 N:don't expect
him now.he won't cum.bcoz they
r n luv.
N was
surprised. k runs away from L
with shyness.L
smiles at her.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#6
awww it was such a chweet part 😳
nice ff 👏 👏 👏
continue soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#7
PART-4...Laksh tells kt:atlast u stole my heart.so
u
r a thief.
K:what about u?u r also a heart thief.i'd
noticed u watching me from the
beginning..they
laugh.
she:laksh..luv is a feeling...true luv can't be
hidden anywhere.it will
automatically cum out. L:if
ur dad opposes our marriage?
K:never!he can't stand
against my wish.
L smiles. while inderji & archita
were entering the house,L was
polishing inderji's
shoes & was also singing.
inderdji was surprised 2 hear
L's sweet voice. L stops
singing seeing him. he
goes 2 the kitchen.
A:I told u na papa,laksh sings
well. inderji did'nt mind
her.she becomes dull.
A song
recording of rocky ..Kt & also cum 2 see it
on the care of charu. rahul
came very late losing his
professionalism.K-harshini ask 4
autogragh,but
he did'nt mind them. inderji
scolds him:now u r having
headweight.
R becomes irritated.he leaves the place.
every1 becomes sad. inderji
was cool:laksh,u hav 2 sing
this sing...L,K & H
were surprised. L
did'nt get words 2 thank
inderji. L goes 2 sing.K
did some actions 2 giv him
best of luck.L smiles.he
looks at K & sings the
romantic song.
the song
becomes a big hit. when
k was dreaming about L
in her room during nite,L
cumes from back .k was
surprised.
L:u were studying?
K:no...i'll get a
big zero 4 the exam.bcoz while
i open my book,only ur
face is seen.
L:i'll giv u a medicine 2 study well.
he hugs her.
K:when u r becoming a popular
singer,i'm getting tensed
whetheru r moving away from
me.. he:never,bcoz real luv
can't go anywhere.my song
became nice ince u were there
with me.u r my inspiration
2 sing.
K:i feel that those romantic lyrics were
written 4 us.
L smiles.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#8
it was a cute part 😳 😳 😳
continue soon 😊
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awwwwwwwww such a cute part continue............soon. 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#10
PART-5....Archita arranges another house 4 laksh.kt


feels sad:laksh,plz don't

go....A:whats this


kt?its 4 laksh's

career.its true that this
house was


lucky 4 laksh.but he has 2

change his house.there diff


producers & directors

cum.it'll bring favour 4
laksh.


K:ok...L:i'm going from

this house,not from ur


heart. K smiles. K's

dad Om & mom Naina plan 2


cum.that eagerly waited day

cumes. Kt-dadi-shamit go

2
the airport 2 receive

them.they were very


happy.surprisingly Raj Uncle &


devika aunty{their family


friends} were there with their


son.K is seeing them


after many

years....Om:kt,can u
recognise who this


is? K looks at the guy

{their son}. she was


surprised:eklavya!what a gr8

surprise. E:wow!so u


remember me? K after

reaching home tells Om:dad,i


want 2 tell an imp matter.

om:whats that? she:i'm in


luv. om:wow!u r in luv?how did

it
happen?may be ur luv


was at 1st sight..bcoz i had

told him not 2 contact u


till we reach here.bcoz i was

planning 2 giv u a


surprise. K:dad, whom u r

talking about? om:about


tushar,he is the surprise gift
u

were waiting from me.


K was shocked:no,this

can't happen. om was


shocked:why? K:bcoz i luv

laksh. om:who is he?


she:he is a famous playback

singer. om:i'm sorry beti,i


can't agree with u. K was

shocked:is it my dad


talking like this?i can't

believe this. om:bcoz i


promised them that i'll

conduct this wedding.plz


kt ...she cries:no papa,i


promised laksh that i


won't leave him. om:when i

told u about my surprise 2


u,if u had given me a hint

about laksh,i wud'nt hav


continued going with this

idea,but now its too late


...it'll harm my reputation.if

u
don't mind ur dad


getting insulted b4 others

i'll conduct ur wedding with


laksh. do u want that? he

cries:i beg u kt...K:no


papa,i wont allow u 2 get

insulted b4 others.i'm willing


2
marry eklavya. om was

relieved.K was upset.she
lost


her sleep.

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