could it be luv ff part 2 manthan & priya

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could it be love

fanfic part 2

hey guys

you all said dat u liked part 1 and u wanted me to continue soo dis is part 2 i hope u guyz like it

love story between manthan and priya

could it be love

fanfic part 2

hey guys

you all said dat u liked part 1 and u wanted me to continue soo dis is part 2 i hope u guyz like it

love story between manthan and priya


priya manthan

she cant stop dreaming bout manthan jokin 😆

the next day priya and her dad come to shanti niketan

priya and her dad - hello everyone

tulsi - hi im soo gald too see both of you

priya- umm ill just go and say hi to everyone tulsi says go ahead priya goes to bhoomi room

priya - hi bhoomi

bhoomi - hi wow you look nice today

priya- thanks so do you so wheres umm

bhoomi - who manthan ???

priya - yeh

bhoomi- his sleeping

priya- at this time

bhoomi - yeh he would prob wake up in about 2 hours why dont you go and suprise him and wake him up tanya mum was trying to wake him up but you no

priya - okay

priya enters manthan room manthan wake up

manthan - ZzzZzZzZzZZZ

priya goes on top of manthan but manthan grabs her and she gets stuck in his arms

priya - manthan

manthan keeps holding her and and finds himself on top of her he keeps on sleeping and moving around and falls down the bed when he wakes up he finds himself on top of priya

manthan - priya umm

priya - ahhh manthan get off me

manthan - na i fink ill go asleep for a bit longer

priya - fine bt atleast get off me

manthan - ohh anyways what was you doing in my room and why was you under me huh huh

priya - umm woh bye

manthan smiles and holds her hand

manthan - you still didnt answer my question

priya - umm well i just came to wake you up and then you was out off control and grabed me

manthan - what like this (manthan grabs her wastte)

bhoomi enters

bhoomi - ahh um 😉

manthan lets go

priya - bhoomi woh

bhoomi smiles at manthan

bhoomi - no need to explain your dads calling you downstairs to go i didnt even get anytime with you spent it all waking up manthan anyways bye (bhoomi and priya hug )

manthan - bye priya

priya waves at manthan and leaves

bhoomi - umm so manthan i guess this means you both are friends

manthan - i guess you can say that

manthan cant stop thinking about priya soon manthan gets a phone call

manthan - hello

amar - hi you want to met me and the guys are going out

manthan - kya yaar why did you have to pick dis time when i was just dreaming about

amar - dreaming bout who 😃

manthan - no one yeh im coming let me just get ready

amar - okey yaar

manthan and his friends go out and are just on there way of going back home manthan is sitting at the back

manthan - wait stop the car priya tum

priya - oh hi manthan

manthan you need a lift

priya - no its okey manthan ill manage

amar and the guys - oh come in we got a lot of room and those bags look heavy look you can sit next to manthan at the back

priya - umm

manthan - come on yaar if you dont come ill think that you havent still forgiven me

priya - okey

manthan- YES!!!😃

everyone looks ant manthan

manthan - what i said yes and start the car

manthan and priya sit together at the back soon all the friends leave leaving manthan and priya alone but someone driving amar is driving the car fast and priya falls on manthan

manthan - are you okay

priya - yeah

manthan - oy stupid drive the car slow

amar - cant too much traffic but ill try

later priya keep on banging into manthan

priya - sorry this traffic oouch

manthan - what happend

priya - this amar keeps on banging into cars and it hurts me

manthan puts his arm around priya

manthan- dont worry we just have to be really close

priya - umm okay i guess oh theres my house bye manthan byt amar

manthan gets out of the car priya umm you forgot your bag anyways whats in it priya - vegatables and bindi and goshed and ...

manthan - okay i get it

priya- yeh i have to go and make food for my dad and me you should go but one day you will have to taste my gajar ka halwa

manthan- gajar ka halwa thats my favourite wow cant wait 4 dat day anyways see you

amar - presses his horn yaar kitne deer lagow ge jalde karo

priya - you better go bye

manthan - bye and come init down my yard

priya - yeh i will im coming tommorow

manthan - kool well c ya

amar - ahh kitne bhati karogi yaar kitne minute hogiye hai tum douno bhat kariho

the next day priya goes shanti niketan and enters the house

bhoomi - hi priya

priya - hi

bhoomi - whats that in your hand its gajar ka halwa ooh for me you shouldnt have

priya - umm sorry but its not for you its for manthan

bhoomi - oh

tanya and tulsi and karan come

tanya , tulsi , karan - hi beti how r u

priya - im fine umm manthan kider hai

tanya - upstairs (priya goes upstairs)

karan - she wants to meet manthan manthan wasnt they fighing about 3 days ago

bhoomi - well now there friends priya made something speacial for manthan like gajar ka halwa

everyone smiles and says manthans fave

karan- huh i like gajar ka halwa

bhoomi - sorry dad but she made it speacial only 4 manthan hheheheh

priya knocks on the door

manthan - come in priya wow how nice to see you

priya - hi look what i got for you gajar ka halwa

manthan - no way yum lets go into the kitchen come

manthan sits and is munching on the food priya laughs

priya - so do you like it

manthan - yeh its da best gajar ka halwa i ever tasted

tanya - accha tou mera gajar ka halwa ka kabhi ni tarif kiya

manthan - umm

tanya - heheheh just jokin kalow she made with love for you

manthan -

priya - ah hum with love ah hum i just made it coz he likes it

tanya - okay i get it

manthan finnish his food and he and priya go upstairs

priya - wait i just need to go to the bathroom okay

manthan okay

priya goes into the bathroom and sees the biggest spider ever

priya - ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhh mujhe bachalo

manthan - runs to the bathroom kya hai

priya ------ ahhhh and jumps on manthan save me ahhh its coming closer pick me up (manthan picks her up)

manthan -where is it omg your scared of that tiny spider ha hah hahah

priya - let me go

manthan - fine and drops her on the floor

priya - ahh pick me up look its coming closer

manthan - ahh yeh ladki (and picks her up again ) and takes her to bhoomis room

bhoomi - umm bro why r you picking her up

manthan- please take her ahahahhahahahaahahah

bhoomi - whats soo funny

manthan - she got scared of a tiny spider and jumped on me

bhoomi brust out laughing hehhehheheh

priya - manthan tum kya sab ko baato gi

manthan drops her and says yes manthan tells everyone priya goes downstairs and everyonre starts laughing at her

priya - manthan meh tumhara gala doubadogi fine im not talking to anyone in this house

manthan - okay sorry baba and bends down and pulls his ears ab math karoge

priya - nay teack hai maf kardiya

manthan - fine im going sleep now i feel really tried

priya - its only 7

manthan - yeh but its better then to listen to you talking omg your soo boring

priya - what

when manthan is asleep priya goes into his room and puts lipstick on him and paints on his face manthan hears her laughing and wakes up

priya - look in the mirror

mantan - what (priya gives him the mirror and runs)

manthan- ahhhhhhhhhh

manthan s running after priya and everyone is laughing at manthans state priya is running too fast and suddenly falls and hurts her leg and blood is pouring

priya - ocouch manthan

manthan - r you okay see thats what you get for making me look like a girl even that i look quite dashing

priya - manthan !!! (manthan picks priya up and takes in inside and lays her on the sofa)

manthan- gosh man how much do you weigh (priya chucks a pillow at manthans face) everyone rushes to priya

tulsi - yeh kya howa you got hurt really bad

laksh - sits on the sofa and comforts priya and says are you okay and give her a hug manthan gets soo jelous

tulsi - laksh beta get up 4 a second take her to manthans room

manthan- my room

tulsi - your staying here today ill inform your dad and call a doctor

priya - doctor no no ba its okay my legs fine ( she gets upp ) owww

tulsi - r you sure okay bhoomi take her too manthans room

bhoomi tries to put the medicine on her leg

priya - oww dont worry ill be fine ill do it my self (bhoomi leaves and manthan comes inside

priya - oouch

manthan - come let me do it

priya hids her leg no its okay manthan

manthan- look dont worry i wont look

priya - okay

manthan puts the medcine on her leg is that better

priya - hey you opened your eyes

manthan - opps anyways umm tulsi ba said you should move into the guest room so i can have my room back

to be continued .....

hey guys sorry i didnt have that much time too doo all of it soo i guess im making part 3 soon only if u want me to continue it was a long story i wrote it up really good den my bro wanted to go on it and he saved it and some bits r missing i fink anyways ill make part 3 and i hope u guys like it sorry if its bad but i only had time to do a bit

love madz aka madiha

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babygirl thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plz reply it took really long to do dis but dont worry im making part 3 4 all of u 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 WOW!!!
COntinue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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some1 plz post part 1 here...i can't fine it...nd it's great plz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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go to the fanfic section u will find part 1 wid part 2

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