FF * Bhoomi & Abhir --- Updated

Well I have seen a lot of fanfic's but haven't seen one on Bhoomi, & I know how many people are her fan-even I am one, so I decided on writing a fanfic on her & Abhir.

I will display the Parts & Pages in this post.

Part 1 - Page 1

Part 2 - Page 1

It was the last day of college for Bhoomi. She was so glad she dosen't have to put up with all the "bakwaas". She was releived that now she dosen't get embarrasses with all of her cousins doing stupid things. She was sitting in the car on the way back to Shantiniketan.
B: Ehh driver, tumhe gari chalani nahi aati?
D: Kyun beta. kya hua
B: BETA, beta my foot, gari tez chalao
D: Nahi, mein itni jaldi nahi chala sakhta
B: Gawaar kahi ke, papa bhi kaise logo ko kaam pe rakhte hain
When Bhoomi reaches home she's shocked to see that there isn't a party thrown by Karan. Tulsi comes down the stairs & sees Bhoomi.
T: Arre Bhoomi beta, agayi college se?
B: Andhi ho kya, tumhare samne khari hoon aur phir bhi poochti ho
T: *rolls eyes* Maine to sirf ye bata ne ke liya ayi thi ke Karan ek hafte ke liye America gaya hai
B[thinks]: No wonder there's no party
B: Thik hai
Just then Manthan comes.
M: Ehh dadi, yahan khari mera mu kya dekh rahi ho, jao naa
B: Hehe
Tulsi leaves.
B: Kuch kaam tha?..
M: Haan woh aaj tum dance pe jaa rahi ho naa?
B: Of course
M: And Baawri Bua?
B: I think so..
M: Toh limo wale ko bula liya naa?
B: Nahi, woh to har saal dad karte hain
M: Okay then I'll go call them up
Bhoomi & Manthan both leave to go find something to waer to the college dance. Bhoomi rwaches her room with a million things going on in her head..What will I wear?, Who should I dance with?..She went through her whole wardrobe but couldn't find something she'd like to wear to the dance. Bhoomi calls for Tanya & she comes in.
B: MAMMA, kaha hai aap?
T-rushes in to the room: Haan beta, kya hua
B: I can't find anything to wear to the dance today..
T:*smirks* Achha to ye baat hai..
B: Huh? what do you mean?
Tanya leaves the room & comes back with a beautiful black sleevless dress for her. She was so happy that Bhoomi will get something like this to wear to the dance. She holds it out for Bhoomi. Bhoomi grabs it & says..
B: Ohh, Mamma thank you, I love you so much, your the best mamma in the whole world.
Bhoomi hugs Tanya so hard but just then Tanya says something..
T: Bhoomi, if you want to say thanks to someone say it to Karan. He's the one who left the dress for you.
B: Dad, really? since when is his choice so good?
T: Excuse-moi, what do you mean? *flatters herself*
B: *Laughs* I didn't mean that, of course he has a great choice, he did choose you after all
T: Sure, now you get ready Manthan has already called the limosine people they said they will be here in a while.
B: Oh, okay, bye mom
Tanya leaves the room & Bhoomi gets dressed. After a couple hours of getting dressed up she goes downstairs. Manthan sees her & runs up to her.
M: Sis sis..major problem
B: What now, nothing can go wrong today
M: Sorry to say sis, but something already has, the limosine people only had one free limo
B: KYA, OMG, great, just what I needed, now we have to ride with that gawaar *points at KT*
M: Don't worry sis, hum usse gari me aisa mazaa chakange woh bechari sharam se jhukh jayegi
B: What is wrong with you, you sound like Tulsi
M: Chii, woh Tulsi..*makes a sour face*
B: Just kidding, I would do anything for that expression *cracks up*
M: SIS, what kind of joke was that, especially in this time..
Bhoomi, Manthan, Baawri Bua, Lakshya, Nakul, Archita, Pari & KT all go to the limo. The limosine was stunning, it looked spankin' clean. It was a rich black color. They all climbed in, it felt a bit stuffy in there for a while but the ride wasn't that long.
B: Ehh KT, don't sit beside me, I don't want your germs
Manthan cracks up. So KT dcides to sit by Archita & Pari but they don't let her, she makes a puppy dog face & the two point at Lakshya. So KT went & sat by him. Bhoomi was sitting between Baawri & Manthan.
B: Baawri Bua, Saawri Bua kahan hai?
BB: Who Di is actually feeling a bit sick, so she isn't coming.
The driver starts to drive, just when.....
Please comment..

hey dis is great. plzz continue.

Recap:
Bhoomi, Manthan, Baawri Bua, Lakshya, Nakul, Archita, Pari & KT all go to the limo. The limosine was stunning, it looked spankin' clean. It was a rich black color. They all climbed in, it felt a bit stuffy in there for a while but the ride wasn't that long.
B: Ehh KT, don't sit beside me, I don't want your germs
Manthan cracks up. So KT dcides to sit by Archita & Pari but they don't let her, she makes a puppy dog face & the two point at Lakshya. So KT went & sat by him. Bhoomi was sitting between Baawri & Manthan.
B: Baawri Bua, Saawri Bua kahan hai?
BB: Who Di is actually feeling a bit sick, so she isn't coming.
The driver drives, just when.....
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The drivers driving the limo very smoothly just when a car comes up right in front of the limo. The car & the limo crash causing the limos front lights to break.
B: Oh great, another problem
L: Another problem?, what other problem did we have?
Manthan nudges Bhoomi indicationg her to be quiet. Bhoomi imidietly got the signal & changed the topic.
B: Umm..why do you care, mind your own business..
L: But...
M: Arre, Sis said to shut up, now will you?
Lakshya doesn't bother to say anything after that. They all climb out of the limo to see who was driving the car so crazily. Someone climbs out of the car, he was wearing a black tux. Bhoomi was really angry & took out all of her anger on the man.
B: Hey you, do you not no have to drive? are you drunk or something? can you not see we were behind you? are you blind?
The man tries to say something but Bhoomi won't let him.
B: What, what can you do now..ufffffffffff..how will we get to the college now?
The man say:
Well, umm, I'm going there to, if you don't mind can I drop you off?
Bhoomi was about to say no when Nakul interrupts.
N: Sure, but I don't think we will all fit in your car.
The man say that he can call his driver & tell him to bring another car over.
N: Thanks, my name's Nakul, & you?
Abhir, Abhir Bhasin.
Everyone introduces them selves except Bhoomi.
Abhir brings out his hand for her to shake but Bhoomi just turned around & started to walk. Abhir cathes up with her.
A: Excuse me, I'm really sorry for what I've done.
B: Whatever
A: Well, I wouldn't want you to walk to the college, so can you please just get in the car
Bhoomi was about to day something really rude & changes her mind as she didn't want to college herself. She gets into the front seat of the car besides Abhir. She was so furious, she just turned and stared out of the window for the ride there. Abhir tried to talk to her but she wouldn't turn. In a bit they get to college, Bhoomi gets out of the car as fast as she could & runs for the door. She was so glad that she wasn't around him anymore. Manthan turns to Abhir to talk to him.
M: Well, sis is a bit arrogant, thats why she's acting like this
A: Hmm..don't sweat it, I'm normally like that too.
M: Hehe, I haven't seen you before, are you new?
A: Nope, I have been going here since my junior year.
M: Really, haven't seen you..
A: Probably, I'm usually skipping
M: *smirks*
They both go in. Bhoomi just tries to pretend she's not all perked up about what had happend today, so she goes up to Manthan, who was at the bar getting drunk.
B: Ufff, thank god he's not here!
M: Ohh com'on sis, he's not that bad
B: You'd think that
Bhoomi orders a tekila hoping she could get over what happened. After a while Manthan realizes what has just happened.
M: SIS, that's your 20th drink, you're going to get high, very high
B: You're saying this, you, you've had more drinks than me
Abhir comes & sees both of them half drunk.
A: You two okay, you seem a bit drowzy
Bhoomi leaves & Manthan just acts if it's normal.

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hey great. i fink im da 1st one 22 comment on da 2nd part. 👏 👏
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