kisna kt love destruction p:51pg:56 - Page 30

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Posted: 18 years ago
hmmmm.... DIVORCE>...not a bad i dea uru....but not exactly....lol....U'LL C
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Posted: 18 years ago
PART 44
lakshya and kt hv reached their hotel...
they got off the taxi ....the driver takes off their luggage from the trunk of the car...
kt gets out of the taxi with a thrilled , shocking face..her hands covering her mouth
kt: OMG lakshya.... yeh hamara hotel hai....
lakshya...who waz helping the driver take out the luggage...takes another glance at the hotel...n then smile...
L:( sarcastically) nahi kt...woh hamare padosi kah hai...hum toh yaha bahar joh beach hai na wahah rehane walle hai....
kt sarcastically smiels
Kt: very funny.... theek hai tum samane lehkare aao... mein tumhara andar wait karti huan....
kt begins to walk towards the entrance of the hotel...
lakshya with a shock stares at her....
L: (yelling) ARRE HOOO...HELLO MADAM....SUNNOOO....
kt stops...n turns....she begins to walk towards lakshya
kt: kya hai...kyun roka muhje....( n she crosses ehr hands)
L; excuse me miss kt...apkeh liye mein kya ek coolie huan....keh sara saman utthao....help karo nah....
kt:theek hai... ( she picks up the lightest bag....n walks into the hotel)
L: loh...sabse bhari saman uthaya hai....n follows her with the rest of the luggage.....
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end of part 44
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rani
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 45
the reach the chek-in desk...
kt tum yaha ruko...mein apna room confirmation check kare kar aaya....
kt doesnt listen....n instead decides to follow him
L: yes i hv a confirmation here....
P: oh yes...( he looks into sum book...) mr n mrs lakshya virani...am i rite...
lakshya slightly grins...n nods....
jus then the kt cums and stands beside him
P: oh that must b ur wife....
lakshya turns... n sees kt
L: oh yess....
the guy smiles at kt....n kt smiles bak...
Lakshya continues
L: we are newly wedds...
P: thats great...congratulations...lets see wat i can do for u....
L: wat do u mean....
the guys sstarts surfing through his computer...
P: v hv a special honeymoon ensuite......oh thr u go... today is our hotel's annivarsary....n as a gift to u ...we will give u a beautiful...exotic... honeymoon ensuite with a large beach view n a private pool...
kt n lakshya widely smile
L: thats grat...thanks u...
he searches for their room keys.... n then gives them to lakshya...
P: room 512...and wud u please jus sign here.....( giving lakshya sum papers)
the guys tells the room service servent to take the luggage....
lakshya gives bak teh signed paper...
L: thak u....n by the way... whr are the stairs...
P: u dunt need to use the stairs v hv an elevator...
L: oh i c...but can u jus tell me whr they are...
P: to the left....
L: alrite...
kt stands their wondering wat he waz upto
lakshya gives teh room key to the servent....
kt: lakshya hum kaha jah rahe hai....
L; apne kamreh mein...
kt gives him a confused look...
kt: elevator toh waha hai...
L: tumhari bohot bhuri aadat hai....tum sawal bohot pooch ti ho....
kt; OUUFF....
suddenly... kt feels her self being swept off the floor...
kt: AAAH....yeh kya kare rahe ho lakshya....chodoh muhje
L: hamare hyaha ek riwaz hai.... keh hum apni nayi dulhan koh god mein utha karepeheli baar leh jate hai...
kt: (shyly smiles) aacha....
lakshya begins to walks...n then suddenly stops...
kt: kya huwa
L: lekin iskeh liye...hamari nayi dulhan koh bhi kuch karna padtah hai....at the end of every floor...they hv to kiss us...for the hard work ve dooo...
kt grins n look away....
lakshay starts to walk again....
every floor they pass...kt gives him a kute kiss on the cheek....
they were now on the reaching the fourth floor...
kt: lakshya...
L:hmm
kt: tum thak gaye hogai....
L: bilkul nahi... koi kuch kimti ( expensive...precious) utthaneh mein thaak jata hai kya.... ( smiles widely)....
kt; OMG
lakshya stops n freaks out....
L: kya huwa....
kt: oh meri sandal...gir gayi...
lakshya sighs...
L: pheew....tum neh toh muhje daara hi diya....
lakshya walks bak down.....bends down slightly...still holding kt in his arms....grabs her sandles...n puts it on her foot....
KT: thanks...
lakshya stands their silently...
kt: kya huwa chalo....
L: humne joh deal kiye thi juska kya.... ( he point his finger at his cheek)
kt kutely smiles....
she gives him a slight kiss....
Lakshya still stands their...
kt; abh kya huwa....(lakshya does the same isshara(hintings)....)aarre yeh theek baat nahi...tumneh toh kaha tha... ek at teh end of every floor...
L: aur yeh muhje fir seh neechai jaana padah woh....usse kahetai hai...overtime....
kt begins to blush....n gives him another kiss...
L: good....
lakshya continues his journey.......
n the scene FADES........with them smileing n staring ino each otehrs eyess..
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end of part 45
hp u liked it
rani
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Posted: 18 years ago
WOW! The hotel's dscription and stuff was soo good. But are you still going to use **HINT**HINT*** in your story? You mentioned something like that, but I am scared about the love birds future. Dont make it really bad. But a great twist will make lots of people adcited to your story. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Phew ! Finally caught up ! I seem out of breath , LOL!! Just Joking ! Tee Hee .. 😆 !! Continue Soon Di ! Wow , you write lots in a day ! I have no time to do that ! 😆 Continue Soon , waiting eagerly for the next part ! Yep , i agree with my sweeto (uru) 😛 😉 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome part rani.....it was just perfect....i loved it.......i bet next part is going to be wayyyy romantic.........right?????????? 👏 will be waiting eagrly.......

Shona 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow !!!!!! the ff is great!!!!!! plzz continue!
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Posted: 18 years ago
finally i caught. awesome parts. this part was really nice. countinue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow itz great
keep it up!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Its great 👏
Continue soon

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