Kabhi alvida na kehna-ff 4Joydeep-Bhoomi

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part1 Mandira cums 4 a virani party.All r shocked 2 c her. M:all mayb wondering why I'm here now.i came here 2 reveal the truth abt Ansh
All r shocked.M:2day no one can prevent me from telling the truth that Bhoomi is Ansh's daughter not karan's
Eklavya & Bhoomi r shocked. B shouts:wht rubbish!
M:if u hav any doubt u ask karan
B asks K:dad..i no u r my dad.but still..
K is speechless. B:tell dad
M:he cant open his mouth.bcoz that's the truth
B is shocked.he is going crazy:nooooooooo!
B remembers herself insulting Ansh & eklavya.K goes near her:eventho Ansh gave u b'th u r my daughter.i luv u more than my own son manthan
B moves away from him:go
M:I'vent told the whole truth.the shocking truth is tht Ansh is killed by Tulsi
Eklavya & bhoomi r shocked. E:no,dadi won't do tht
B:she'll do anything eklavya..i mean bhayya
T:yes its true,I killed ansh
E& B r shocked. E shouts with tears:how cud u do this?
M smiles with victory & leaves. E:I've always trusted u.but u..
K:enuf.plz blame my mom.do u no why mom killed Ansh?4 me
E&B r anxious.K tells the whole truth. K:now tell whether my mom is wrong
E&B r speechless.E cries:now I realize why evry1 kept a distance away even from my dad's picture
E falls on T's feet:I'm sorry tulsi dadi,I sinned by misunderstanding u
T cries & hugs him:no beta.anybody who's in ur position wil do the same
B rums 2 her room & weeps.B remembers calling eklavya & Joydeep orphans.
Joydeep cums near her:Bhoomi!
B:why did u cum here?oh!now u want 2 call me orphan.now u r happy no?yes,I'm an orphan
J:I did'nt cum 2 hurt u.bhoomi,u r not an orphan.bcoz u've evry1.Karan chachu is ur dad.plz don't hurt him.he luvs u very much.1 thing I want 2 tel u is tht I did'nt luv u seeing ur wealth & who ur parents r.after knowing the truth also ur position in my heart has'nt changed.stil I luv u.u r the queen of my heart
J goes.B is stunned

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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG NEAT STORY! šŸ‘ keep it up šŸ‘šŸ¼

but where iz abhir?!!?!?!? n why iz bhoomi starting 2 like joydeep??!!!??! lolz
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part2 Bhoomi goes 2 karan-Tanya's room.they r excited 2 c her.K goes near her:beta
B weeps:I'm sorry dad
K:don't say sorry beta
He hugs her.T becomes happy.Tulsi who sees it smiles.K:u've insulted eklavya without knowing the truth.plz apologize 2 him beta
B:yes dad

B goes near Eklavya:bhayya
E luks at B with wonder. B:without knowing anything I insulted u a lot.tht time I was unconscious.now I'n conscious.i'm sorry.plz 4giv me
E:its ok bhoomi.but I'm happy tht u've accepted me as ur elder brother.now I'm more happy tht I'v a little sister of my own
B smiles.T who sees it smiles.

B goes 2 her room.she sees joydeep struggling hard 2 bring a bucket of water 4 her.
J:bhoomi,ur water 4 bathing is ready.i've ironed ur dresses also.i'll bring yea 4 u immediately after ur bath.
B:no need of doing this anymore.there r many servants here 2 do this
J is wondered at B's change.J remembers B calling him many times Naukar.
B notices J's tiredness. B:rn't u well?
J:nothing like dat,I'm ok
B:no need 2 lie
B takes medicine& throws it 2 the bed:take it & hav if u've fever
B goes 2 the bathroom.J smiles.
B is walking fast. J:bhoomi,don't walk like dat.it'l not b gud 4 ur baby
B:just stop it.i'm not pregnant.i was lying 2 win
J is shocked.B goes.Slowly J smiles.

B wants 2 go out& luks 4 the driver.J:he is on leave 2day.i'll drive
J drives.B sits at the back.Abhir's car stops b4 their car.A cums,opens the door & pulls B out.B:wht the hell u r doing?
J goes out of the car:leave bhoomi
A:who the hell r u 2 ask this?bhoomi,I luv
B:but I hate u
A:is this ur last word?
B:yes A:then u don't liv,if u cant liv with me u die
B&J r shocked.J stands b4 B: u can shoot me but don't shoot bhomi.
B is shocked.A shoots & J falls down.A smiles:now u r a widow,u'l cum back 2 me
A goes.B:joydeep,why did u do this?
J:I cant c u dying.i'm happy tht I can die 4 u
B becomes upset:no

jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#4
Part3:Bhoomi takes joydeep 2 the hospital.J is in the operation theatre.B's eyes rose up.B thinks of her moments with J.song:kabhi alvida…
B:why tears r cuming 4 jodeep?
Dr cums:joydeep is alright
B smiles.B goes near J.J smiles.B smiles slowly.
J:now I'm very happy,not bcoz I'm alive,but bcoz..1st time u smiled at me
B is wondered.J:keep smiling like this bhoomi.u luk nice wen u smile
B smiles.B thinks:I've always wounded joydeep.but why does he luv me so much?
Song:shayad yehi..{LUCKY}

B's b'day party.J gives her artificial flowers:hapy b'day bhoomi.i made these flowers 4 u
B smiles & takes it. J:sorry bhoomi,I cant giv u costly gifts.but this I giv with full heart
J goes.B keeps luking at him.

A big party is arranged.B's friends cum.Seeing J serving drinks her friend:ur servant is so obedient
She calls him:bring me a drink
J:yes ma'am
B feels sad 4 him.B:joydeep,did'nt I tel u not 2 work like this anymore.there r many servants 2 do this
Friend:why cant he work?he's also a servant
B shouts:Joydeep is'nt a servant.he's my husband
They r shocked.all virani members luk at them.Tulsi thinks:finally bhoomi accepted joydeep as her husband.its a gud sign
Friends laugh & tease:so this is ur selection?tht day u were lying.wow bhoomi,after rejecting many handsome boys,u chose the most horrible boy in this world
B is speechless.J feels sad.he thinks:bcoz of me how much insulted Bhoomi is

B goes 2 her bedroom at nite.there she sees a letter.she reads it, "bcoz of me u've only worries.my face wil only irritate u.so I'm leaving"
B is stunned.
All virani members r shocked.they search 4 him.but there was no use.Nakul cums 2 B:wht did u do 2 joydeep?now u r happy no?if anything happens 2 him,u'l pay 4 it
J walks on the road with tears.1 car stops b4 him with sudden brake.A lady cums out of the car.WHO IS SHE?


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Posted: 18 years ago
#5
Part4 She was wondered:Joydeep?
J:who r u?i've seen u sumwhere
She hesitates:I'm… J:r u nandini mom?
N is silent.J:ur silence gave me the answer
N:why r u here during this time?
J is silent. N:is everything alright?
J's eyes rose.N:joydeep?
N takes him home.J tells evrything.

1 yr passed.Karan cums:we got the contract
All r happy.K:it's a well established company I feel tho its not so old.very powerful business man from dubai.i did'nt c him.2morrow evening there's a party.we can meet him

Very grand Party.Bhoomi has worn a silver sari.she was hot.She hears girls telling:he's so hot.very smart too
Nandini in a pink sari arrives.All r wondered.
N:I no I'm not the person who's expected by u ppl.i'l introduce the real star of this evening
All r eager 2 c him. The guy cums.very stylish & handsome.all r after him.Girls r overexcited.
B&other viranis feel strange. B thinks:his face luks so familiar
All the media ppl r after him 4 interview.1 person asks:how do u rate urself as a business man?
He had an impressive smile. N:wht a question!u al no dat he's the best business man u can c now
1 girl:the most handsum business man too
N& he smile. J:I can say 1 thing dat nandini mom is the secret of my success.
N smiles.all r shocked. Karan:nandini mom?
Tanya:nandini's son?
B:why is he calling nandini mom "mom"?
1 person:so madam,he's ur son?
N:he's my son eventho relation wise he's my son in law
All r shocked.K:son in law?
N:he's my daughter's husband
Again shock 2 evry1.al luk at him carefully.
N:don't u remember Joydeep who was neglected by evry1?
Joydeep's face cums 2 evry1's mind.al r shocked


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Posted: 18 years ago
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Very interessting ...keep it up šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yo,very cool,keep on going dont stop now plz
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Posted: 18 years ago
#8
Part5 Nandini:the same joydeep.cant u belive?
N goes near Bhoomi:u've insulted joydeep 4 his luks &…whatever.now wht do u say?
J's cell rings:mom,I've 2 go 4 an urgent meeting now.
N:ok beta
N moves 2 Tanya:i was always in pain wen I was away from my daughter.but stil I was happy tht she's happy with her mom ie u.u gave her happiness,but it was fake.u did'nt giv her the real happiness.REAL HAPPINESS GIVS OUT OF giving luv 4 others,not hatred.
N moves 2 karan:karan,u gave bhoomi everything,but u 4got 2 giv her culture& discipline.who knows the value of relationships more dan u?then also why did'nt u teach bhoomi tht?now u cant play with joydeep.bcoz he's not like b4.i sent him 2 dubai.he changed a lot.he got a new identity.
K-T r speechless.B is fed up & goes.
Tulsi:but there is a lot of difference in bhoomi now.she was'nt hating joydeep wen he left.she had realized her mistake.but joydeep moved away from her.u cant blame bhoomi
Bhoomi who was hearing this from upstairs thinks:1st time tulisi dadi supported me
N:joydeep left bhoomi 4 her happiness
T:but it gave her only pain

N enters J's room.J:whts up mom?
N:Tulsi ma said dat Bhoomi is having some change.she won't insult u anymore.u meet her.mayb she'l accept u
J:mayb.bcoz my luks r changed.mom,luv changes according 2 the luks?is tht true luv?
N is speechless. N:don't u luv bhoomi now?
J:I've aways luved bhoomi.but she does'nt luv me mom.then why shud I go 2 her?
N is speechless.

Tulsi goes near Bhoomi:u'vent told anything.but I no dat u were waiting 4 joydeep
B:wht r u planning 2 say?i don't luv joydeep
T:I did'nt say dat u r luving him.i just told u r waiting 4 him
B:never,I don't hav 2 wait 4 any1
T:now I dunno whts ur feeling 4joydeep.but I feel u don't hate him. joydeep left u 4 ur happiness.bcoz u hated him.but mayb he has cum back 4 ur happiness
T goes.Nakul cums 2 B:how's our boy joydeep babe?now all say dat he's much better dan u in everyway.i don't think u can reach his level in business.4 dat u need 2 b clever.but u..?hav u ever succeeded in ur business?u've only ur so-called dad karan virani's name
B is irritated.N goes with a naughty smile.

B goes 4 a party.All r dancing with their spouses.1 girl:arre bhoomi,why r u alone?ur husband did'nt cum?
B is embarrassed.suddenly she sees joydeep coming

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part5 Nandini:the same joydeep.cant u belive?
N goes near Bhoomi:u've insulted joydeep 4 his luks &…whatever.now wht do u say?
J's cell rings:mom,I've 2 go 4 an urgent meeting now.
N:ok beta
N moves 2 Tanya:i was always in pain wen I was away from my daughter.but stil I was happy tht she's happy with her mom ie u.u gave her happiness,but it was fake.u did'nt giv her the real happiness.REAL HAPPINESS GIVS OUT OF giving luv 4 others,not hatred.
N moves 2 karan:karan,u gave bhoomi everything,but u 4got 2 giv her culture& discipline.who knows the value of relationships more dan u?then also why did'nt u teach bhoomi tht?now u cant play with joydeep.bcoz he's not like b4.i sent him 2 dubai.he changed a lot.he got a new identity.
K-T r speechless.B is fed up & goes.
Tulsi:but there is a lot of difference in bhoomi now.she was'nt hating joydeep wen he left.she had realized her mistake.but joydeep moved away from her.u cant blame bhoomi
Bhoomi who was hearing this from upstairs thinks:1st time tulisi dadi supported me
N:joydeep left bhoomi 4 her happiness
T:but it gave her only pain

N enters J's room.J:whts up mom?
N:Tulsi ma said dat Bhoomi is having some change.she won't insult u anymore.u meet her.mayb she'l accept u
J:mayb.bcoz my luks r changed.mom,luv changes according 2 the luks?is tht true luv?
N is speechless. N:don't u luv bhoomi now?
J:I've aways luved bhoomi.but she does'nt luv me mom.then why shud I go 2 her?
N is speechless.

Tulsi goes near Bhoomi:u'vent told anything.but I no dat u were waiting 4 joydeep
B:wht r u planning 2 say?i don't luv joydeep
T:I did'nt say dat u r luving him.i just told u r waiting 4 him
B:never,I don't hav 2 wait 4 any1
T:now I dunno whts ur feeling 4joydeep.but I feel u don't hate him. joydeep left u 4 ur happiness.bcoz u hated him.but mayb he has cum back 4 ur happiness
T goes.Nakul cums 2 B:how's our boy joydeep babe?now all say dat he's much better dan u in everyway.i don't think u can reach his level in business.4 dat u need 2 b clever.but u..?hav u ever succeeded in ur business?u've only ur so-called dad karan virani's name
B is irritated.N goes with a naughty smile.

B goes 4 a party.All r dancing with their spouses.1 girl:arre bhoomi,why r u alone?ur husband did'nt cum?
B is embarrassed.suddenly she sees joydeep coming

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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh nice angle.. i love it.. please continue...

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