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Posted: 18 years ago
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😃Heya guys!! Well i had this idea in my head and i thought why not put it into a fanfic!!! It is preety sad but maybe things might brighten up....

Part 1:

This starts when it time for Lakshya and KT to get marrid. The whole Virani paarivar is sitting down discusing this. Nearly every young virani is marrid except for Pari, Arcita, Manthan, Lakshya and KT. Manthan now really and truly loves this girl(Piya) he met and her parents were Sahil's best friends!!Piya's family were ther too! They are all discusing about Manthan's, KT's and Lakshya getting marrid to someone. Everyone is saying that KT and Lakshya should definitely should get marrid and Manthan should marry Piya because he love her....

Baa: BAAS!!

Everyone becomes quiet

Tulsi: Tho Kt aur Lakshya khe shadi paki...😃

Mihir:... aur Manthan aur Piya shadi bhe paki!!!😃😃😃

Everyone is really happy!!!😃 Lakshya and KT, and Manthan and Piya give loving loooks to each other😳😳 At that time time pundit comes...

Baa: Arye pundit ji aho...

Karen: Baa, yeh pundit kishlye???

Baa: Kundeli dekhane keleye

Gautam: Paar Ba....

Mihir: Gautam, Baa kho jho kar na hai tho kar ne dho...

Pundit ji is macthing up the horoscopes while everyone is murmmering to each other. Then the pundit ji freezes and caths everyones attention!!!!

Baa: Kya hua pundit ji???

Pundit Ji: Yeh tho.....

Well that is part 1!! I hope you like it!!!!! Part 2 comming up tomorrow?? I know it was bad!!! I had a go at writing it out at hindi but i guess i am bad at it!!

Love

Radika

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babygirl thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow wonderfill is der a piya in dis drama or u made hr up coz we r quite behind in dis drama anyways great job 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it's a good story. what was punditji saying anyways?
YEH TOH 😕 . a great way to stop a part 😆 . well can't wait. don't don't don't separate kisna and kt, because they are the only main people, well manthan and piya too, butkisna and kt are the BEST!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thank-you guys for the comments!! Here is Part 2
Part 2...

Pundit ji: Yeh tho anath hai
Baa: Kya????

The whole family stand up schoked by hearing this news

Pundit ji: Yeh dono shaddiya nai ho shak thi
Tulsi: Par kyu nain pundit ji???
Pundit ji: Agar Krishna Tulsi, Lakshya se shaadi ki tho Lakshya ki jaan kho kaatra hai aur agar Manthan aur Piya se shaadi ki tho Manthan ki jaan kho kaatra hai...
Lakshya and Manthan: Kya???
Manthan: I don't believe in this. Meri shaadi hogi tho sirf Piya se hogi
Lakshya: Me bhi sirf KT se shaadi karo!
Mirhir: Manthan, Lakshya zidd maat karo
Pundit ji: Krishna Tulsi aur Piya khi khundli yehi battarehi hai khe ek insane hai jho yeh dho shaadi karshk thi he aur who admi kho kohi kaatra nain hoga. Krisna Tulsi Manthan se aur Piya Lakshya Se
Piya, Manthan, KT and Lakshya: KYA!?!?!?!?

Well that all now for part 2!!!! Will write part 3 tommorw and maybe even part 4!!!!! Enjoy!!
Love
Radika
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow! wha a great twist! everyone's heart are broken! I hate that punditji! 😡 🤢 anyways where did you get that pundit kaka from? 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: uru_hershey

wow! wha a great twist! everyone's heart are broken! I hate that punditji! 😡 🤢 anyways where did you get that pundit kaka from? 😆

great part👏👏

omg yah that kaa punditji i hate him😡

Edited by Rock_Star - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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good job keep up the great work 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome job! 👏
Ugh..I hate Kundelis 🤢 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Everyone is preparing for Nakuls wedding. Nakul is getting marrid to a girl called Soniya Sharma. She is from a high class family but is very sweet and simple.Today is their sangeet. Lakshya forgot his wallet in KT's room so he went to her room. But when he got there he saw that KT was crying...
L: Arye, KT thume rohriya ho???
Lakshya wipes her tears
KT: Lakshya thume jayho
L: Par...
KT: Lakshya please
Kt walks away from Lakshya. Lakshya follows her. He grabs her shoulders and turns her round
L: Muj kho patha hai thume naraz ho. Paar hum shaadi karyge. Yeh Khundli Vundli kho mein nain maan tha. Hum dhono shaadi Karyge 😳 . You know KT your the only girl who I have loved😳 Now give me a smile
Kt gives a small grin
L: Now that's like a good girl
He kisses her on the forehead. She smiles!! 😳
Mihir and Tulsi are in their room gettting ready for the Sangeet! Tulsi didn't know what saree to wear...
Tulsi: Mihir, Mein yein saree perho yah yeh saree???
Mihir: Hmmm.... Yeh Saree....
Mihir pointed out to a saree which looked like the saree tulsi wore when she got marrid
Tulsi: Achya tho may yhe saree pehro????
Mihir: Haa, kyu nain???
Tulsi: Mein ek javaan larki nain ho... Mein ek Dadi ho!!!
Mihir: Tho??? Thume meri javaan Tulsi hamesha kiliye hogi!! 😳 😳 😳
They both laugh!!!

Well i hope you liked that part!!! Part 4 comming up soon!!
Love
Radika
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Posted: 18 years ago
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That was a good story converse_chick! What is that pandit kaka going to do???? I am eagerly waiting for another part. 😉

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