Kisna KT love destruction thnkx to tripti - Page 6

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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
that's called being observany girl.
anyways when are you continuing?
can't wait to read the next part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52
CONTinUE pArt 7

the song Kya yeh hi to pyare hai iz playing

Manthan-KT n' lakshya- Poonam r dancing..poonam n KT both spin..so now KT ends up in Lakshya's arm...
L:(joyously) i told u one day u'll end up in my arms if u lyke it or not
KT: i hv to tell u sumthin
doesnt listen to her....keeps lectureing her...abt how smart he iz n how selfish, n rock hearted she really is. he keeps repeating da fact dat she'll neva b happy with manthan n all dat shit
KT: shuit up Lakshya ...i hv to tell u sumthing...
before she can finsh saying ... she iz spun...
then the finalkly say
KT: I LOVE U!!
i love u too teh voice replies....n the voice waz
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MANTHAN...the music stops n ...KT's in manthan's arm...
pari n archita...proudly announce the winners...which were...bhoomi-joydeep, n pooja-eklavya..since they had switched partners...

anywyaz...the party continues...lakshya wonders wat KT waz gona tell him...
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after the part....in KT's bedrroom...Pari, n archita help her undress herself with all the jewellery n other stuff.
P: did u say it???
KT: wat??
A: I love u
KT: (her head down) yes
P: WOW wat did he say
KT: i love u too??
A: i can belive lakshya said dat!(excited)
KT: he didnt i said it to manthan!!
pari, n archita's shocked face make them drop their djaw....n try crunching the jeweellery in their hand
P: wow ///u must b soo happy...now
jus then ganga cums in
G: girls can u all goo plzz i hv to tk to KT privately
P: k... (both archita, n pari leave)
G: KT r u happy with this engagemnt
KT: ofcousre i m happy...wat kinda question is this...manthan luvs me dearly...
(ganga interrupts)
G: do u love him...
KT: (her eyes turning red) dats impossible... remeber u told me...u can only fall in luv once n i already did
(she huggs ganga tightlyas if she found her long lost mother, n cries in her arms)
G: dunt cry hun
KT: wat do i do ... my only love i hv hurted him...even though i love him soo much...he has cursed...me...how can i live....n i can evn tell lakshya dat i luv him soo much...because of his retarded soo called mom...i wish u vere his mom...u cud hv understood me....
g; stop crying hun...i m his mom.. 😭 😭
KT: not in his life....because of me u had hear his..curses...i feel like dying....wat do i doo ....tell me!!!(she sobbs...n brings tears in ganga's eyes) 😭 😭 😭
i knew it!!!!!a voice calls....
ganga n KT turn n c lakshya at the door...
KT n ganga r shocked to c him their
lakshya w/ a regreting face cums close to them
L: thank god amisha (bhoomi n joydeep's daughter who is 3yrs old) brought me here...i waz playin with her,...n she forced me to take her to ur room... n if i hadnt came i udnt hv figured this gr8 sacrifice u made... (his face turning red)for my so called mom tripti. (bowed his head) n i m sorry mom....
tears came into ganga's eyes.. she tried controlling them...bu tthey jus cudnt stop... since they heard the word mom after soo many years
Lakshya continue
L:: i m soo sorry mom....i alwayz thought u were my enemy...i neva knew this..
G: dont appologised to me son...apologise to KT
KTruns to the bathroom... she didnt want anyone especially lakshya to c her like this...crying..sobbing
L: ok mom ...i luv u...n huggs her
lakshya gets up...goes whr KT was..in the bathroom...he cud here her tears....he opened the door..saw KT with all the love he had for her
KT oh the other hand.. was crying her eyes out...her face, eyes all red
Lakshya put his both arms on KT's shoulders, held her tight
L: KT, i knoe wat i did waz soo insane...can u , i mean will u ever forgive me!!!
Lakshya got on his knees...held his arms out...
L: plz...I LOVE U!!!!!!!!! 😳
KT then huggs him tightly ... thinking finally my dream came truee.
Pari n archita cum in...n see them hugging..........n smile...Ganga hushhhes themmm n they rleave lakshya n KT alone in the room

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end of part 7...hope u liked it....THEY ARE TOGETHER as ppl wanted happy..but there iz still the problem...both r engage to different ppl...wat will hppen next....wat will hppen to KT's promise made to tripti dat she wont tell this to Lakshya,........wat will happeen to manthan. stay tuned...i'll write it next week!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

luv rani ....plz help me out by commenting...good or bad ...or improving comments wud b helful tooo
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Posted: 18 years ago
#53
taht was great! anyways they are going to end up together! i think... excellent job on your fanfic rani.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
👏 ppl cum on give me sum ideas...................
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
hey guys isnt that quite sad i feel for them plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz make some happy ending making kt and lakshya together 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#56
I love part 7,all parts are nice!! please continue soon and get them together😛!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
Yeah i like all the parts too. specially part 1! I just loved your introduction and stuff. plz continue soon 😃 .
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58
It was too good. continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59
thnkx for awesome comments guys!!!!!!....this tyme i m gona try writing in hindi...(i m not good at it...so...bare with me)
part 8
in KT's room
Lakshya n kt hugging!!n oh ya...KT crying at da same time 😛
L: uhh KT..kya tum itna hi roti ho..yaa kubhi kabar jyada
KT punches his chest...
KT: lakshyaaaa!!(n smiles in anger,n playfully)
lakshya laughs...
L: sirf mazak kar raha tha....tum har baat itni serious kyun lati hau jaan 😆 😆 😆 (OMG...he said JAAAN)
KT: kya kaha tumne???
L: kya...tum ne suna nahi kya...ok let me repeat it:sirf mazak kar raha tha....tum har baat itni serious kyun lati hau..ok khush
KT: uske baad
L: uhh...(thinking) jaaaan (n smiles)
KT lets her self out of his arms...n runs to the windows shyly..
now ganga cums in with pari...n archita
G: uhhh lakshya...hogaya...
archita n pari giggle
L: han
G: thek hai tau tum yeh ring kt ko pahena dau abhi
KT takes out the ring from her left hand..n gives it to lakshya n put the rite hand in front
Lakshya looks at the stip of cloth tied around her fingers shocking ly
L: kt kya huah tumhe yaha
G: oh hoo KT...atleast abh tau yeah fake cloth nikalo
KT: oh ya....mai tau bholgayi
L: (confused)...lakin maa..KT neh yeh kyun pehana tha...
G: (got very emotional for lakshya callin her maa)woh tumhe KT hi samjayegi 😳
Lakshya finnaaly puts the ring in her 3rd finger of her right hand...n kisses hebakside of the hand!! n kt shyly shivers. archita n pari applauds...n all smile...
A: finally...abh humm tumhe KT bhabhi bula sakte hai...
p: alrite bhabhi...hum ko to bohot nind arri hai...hum tau jahre hai...
G: oh ya...aur mujhe bhi office jana hai kal..toh phir main bhi chalti huan
pari...archita...n ganga...leave...leaving kt n lakshya allone once again
KT: ab tum yaha kya kar rahe ho...leave now
L: kyun...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
that was a good story with chori chupe engagement. but what about poonam and manthan?

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