Live Life as it goes - Fan-fic

Hello everyone😛

Well after watching recent episodes I have become even a greater fan of manthan and was thinking of writing some story on him. I know I cannot be great writer as soha, (the other writer of manthan fan-fic) But I could not resist the urge to write.😆 Hope it is at least readable. The story more or less continues from the current track.

This post is not made to hurt any fan.

He sat there in silence in the dark room… It was past midnight, as he sat there depressed, angry and hurt. He could not believe his father hated him so much, to leave him and his mother for the other woman… he hated himself for loving his sister bhoomi, who acted so rude to his mother… 😡He hated to be born out of such a relationship, where his parents had no love between them….He did not feel sleepy but angry and frustrated at everything that was in front of him…He recalled everything.. his father's slap…nakuls's harsh words, who had heard everything.. Despite having the money, he did not have his own father's love .. His right…He felt suffocated in this house. That tulsi dadi was thought to be lucky, but look as soon she entered the house his family was breaking down, he thought. Even she did not say anything about this injustice…where as in everything else she always preaches about truth…. His mind was swimming through all the thoughts of the relationships he has or now rather had in his life till now… They will all be broken or have already been with no hope of ever mending… The divorce of his parents came across as a slap… He was alone with no one to talk about it… he was crying😭…yes for the first or may be the first time he could remember in his life .. He did not realize when sleep took over him, with thoughts still running in all directions and his legs still dangling out of bed. The voice of his mother woke him. One look at her face and he knew that she had not slept the whole night. He hated her too now, for loving such a man but no matter what he loved her. A flashback ' manthan running after a ball and he falls down, his leg was bleeding….His mother had rushed in from the side even though it was a game and was against the rules… When the dettol was applied to his wounds … he had clutched her hand tightly, as she assured him that she was there…she will always be for him.. always' 😊Flashback ends. The incident brought the 'damn' tears again to his eyes, as he thought never to leave her too. Tanya was surprised at her son's behavior. She thought that manthan would be unhappy as she was one to file the divorce, because no matter how many fights the dad-son had…deep down manthan loved his father… She felt ashamed as she could not say the same for karan too, because he had always preferred bhoomi…Despite her treating both the children equally…

Ok guys tell me how is it, any criticisms or areas that need improvement are welcome to comment on.😃

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I loved it!!! It was great... and very realistic with what is going on right now.