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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
will post soon...creating some siggies now..will do soon s... u guys can request for siggy s wel
thnks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys.bit sad news...im going to some families place and well the network there is not good so i wont b able to update for sometime...please bear with me..though i will have plenty time to type the ff..i will update as many as soon as i can.

chap 3

Just then she heard the door bell...she got up and put her dishes sin the kitchen ..wiped her tears and opened the door..

Her Mum and dadi and kaki had returned.She always pretended to be strong and unhurt by situations in front of her mum and others..If she broke down ..her mum would fall weak as well...she had agreed to her mum's request...She had said yes to her mum for something she wasnt ready yet..she doubted she will ever be ready for any such thing in her lifetime..

Mona's mum and rest went to their rooms.

Mona still had sleepless nights..her past was haunting her ...
there she was just lying on her bed...
tears in her eyes
mona-"Aisa mere sath q ho raha hai..mai ab bhi tumse hi pyaar karti hu ..par q ..q mai tumare sath nai hu"

She was talking out loud...sometimes she couldnt take in all the sadness...

She was confused which hurt worst..her childhood pain or her love...

she couldnt even talk to Pammi...Pammi wouldnt understand her...Pammi was now married and had drifted abit apart...Her life was all smiles..she deserved it though...

Mona thinking to herself ki"maine aisa kya kiya tha jo muje itni badi saaja mil rai hai...maine toh sirf pyaar kia tha...tumse ...sirf tumse ...fir q..."


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Posted: 13 years ago
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precap

Just as she is falling to sleep..her cellphone vibrates...who could it be..she thought
she sees that its a text message,,

reads
"Hi Janu...kya kar rahi ho...maine suna hai ki tum mujse milne aane wali ho..
i cant wait to see you...mere tan badan mei to aag lag rahi hai..6"

mona ...crying...tears were her only friend lately...
He was back ..she knew it was him...how had he gotten my number she thought.and he remembered things that she didnt...the number 6.
it had always haunted her..she hated that number...she hated him...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
Promo is really intresting..cant wait for next chapter..when will you update?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
U r building up the story very well; do continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
The story is shaping up nicely.
Thank you for sharing :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnks guys...well i wont b recharging my internet and its due tomorw ..as i said im going to small town where netwrk is poor ..i will try try try to make an update tonight
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18

please dont mind the spelling error..wrote it in rush,,,,,

chap 4

she tells her mum that she is tired sitting home..and that she is not getting any calls for job interveiw
Mum-"beta,itni jaldi b kya hai,...companies ke b process hote hai..Nani ka call aya tha...kal hum nani ke town chalenge ok.
.tumara mann wha lagega mama ,mami hai...sab cousins b rahenge...

Mona liked nani's place but what if ...he will attempt something


She goes to her bed..looks out the window...where has my life gone..what has it turned to.
Just as she is falling to sleep..her cellphone vibrates...who could it be..she thought
she sees that its a text message,,

reads
"Hi Janu...kya kar rahi ho...maine suna hai ki tum mujse milne aane wali ho..
i cant wait to see you...mere tan badan mei to aag lag rahi hai..6"

mona ...crying...tears were her only friend lately...
He was back ..she knew it was him...how had he gotten my number she thought.and he remembered things that she didnt...the number6.
it had always haunted her..she hated that number...she hated him...

she dozes off to sleep...
...
MOna wakes up the next morning...

she has her shower and joins everyone for breakfast..
MUm-"chalo beta packing karlo ...nani ka town 5 hr dur hai...we will leave in an hour ok..

Mona nodded...she was excited just as she was freaked out...

they left for Nani's town in their car...
she loved travelling...the scenes ...she loved it...
As the hours passed by ...her fear increased..

He knows im coming...what will happen..what will he do...mai q daru..maine koi paap nai kia...

BY the time they reach nani's town..it was around 2pm...

She looked around as she got out off the car,,,WAs he around...
SHe saw her mUms kaka and family and nani mama mami to greet them...
Mona hugged her mama mami ..
Her cousins were all girls n young... eldest Anushka was still in college..2nd (taani) and youngest (nivideta)were in high school .
they were due home late in the afternoon.

everyone had late lunch..Mona's mum was buzy talking or gossiping with mami and nani..while mama went back to work.

Mona settled in her cousins room...anushka...she would be home around 4pm..

Mona lay in her bed..she was relievd ..he was not here..but he knew she was here..he would do something ...

just then she recieves a text messgae

she reads out
" bahut sundar lag rai ho baby...dil kar raha hai.HAHAHA...mai janta hu tum sharma rahi ho..muje dundh rahi thi na ...milunga ..zaroor miunga

...





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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
Dying to know who is messaging Mona and your story is intriguing.

Good work 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
hey guys.,,,guess what i have no clue my internets working.i havent even rechrged,,,,anyways heres a sneak peak at chap 5..well here goes..hope u like it..i know everyone likes such scenes

precap


she switches of her cell...

she is lying on her bed...someone opens the door slowly...she is in deep sleep she cant hear it open..

a man sneaks in...he is wearing jeans and a t shirt..he slowly slides beside her...he touches her face..her lips...
he kisses her forehead her cheeks and slowly touches her arms...moves even closer to her

Edited by sweetsang - 13 years ago

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