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Prabz

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Posted: 16 years ago

I was really bored so i thought i would start a ff i will put part one on very sooni hope ... i know that it might be boring and not as good as other peoples ff's.

Kakoon aged 19: she is has come from America but was born in india and is every smart she like to dress in great style. she has got a really bad temper problem. She is very religious. and lookes after her familyBut her parents decide that it's time to go back to India (their home) but she's not too happy as she leaves her friends and her College.

rahul aged 19: rahul is very popular at his College and he is really popular with the girls he has near enough dated all of the girls in his year. he loves looking after his family(who are really rich) and cant stand anyone bovvering his sisterand it no really that smart at collage so he has to have extra lessons after College.

Edited by prabzz123 - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey that sounds interesting cant wait to read ur FF

dont worri it will be great to read

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Posted: 16 years ago

aww yh sounds gd.......pls continue

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Prabz

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Posted: 16 years ago

im going to start writing part one today

hope i finish it 😛

lol im really slow at typing soo it might take forever 😳

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Prabz

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Posted: 16 years ago

im goin to upload it now its very short i didnt realy get enought time on it as i have a english essay to do other wise my teacher will kill me.lol

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Prabz

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Posted: 16 years ago

Not really good with Hindi so I am going to write it all in English.

I am just going to skip the first part as you know that kakoon and her family are moving to India i am going to start writing from where she starts college it's her first day and things start to go bad.

part 1

Kakoon was fed up she didn't want to leave the place where all of her friends were she didn't want to come to this collage apparently it was where her older sister Anita (age - 27) got all of her good grades from. As she was walking to her new college she was in deep thought and was just about to cross the road when suddenly a rapid car comes by and knocks her off her feet luckily she's not hurt. The driver steps out of the car and goes over to her and asks her if she's alright. He helps her up to her feet.

Kakoon: leave me alone! God first you run me over and...

Driver:oye Madame Ji Couldn't you go and get run over by someone else's car

Kakoon: what! More like you were not watching where you were not going stupid idiot.

Driver - (Really quite) god I hate these people who ruin your early morning then whole day gets ruined.

Kakoon- (heard what he said) just shut up ok!, and leave me alone.

Driver - whatever! (he walks towards his car and drives off)

its boring right!

Edited by prabzz123 - 16 years ago