Ehsaas - a fanfic - Page 17

awesome aahana...
plzz post the next part soooon...
poor karan is depressed...
great dialogues between S and k

Originally posted by: cool_time

gr88 aahana.luvly part.thiz seemed 2 me a bit like kkhh where da princi insists srk & kajol 2 perform in da absence of da real artists.poor karan!!!he has 2 learn shakespearean dialogues.when will u start da play???i mean how many more parts 2 go

thx akansha 😊
well i didnt realise abt the kkhh until u pointed it out
well dont worry karan is a hero he will learn everything 😆
ah the play will be started soon in about 1-2 more parts😃

Originally posted by: stylishgal

awesome aahana...
plzz post the next part soooon...
poor karan is depressed...
great dialogues between S and k

thx simi😊
sure hon i'll post the next part asap
well he is gonna be depressed n tht part requires a lot of emotional stuff so m being very choosy abt what shd i write
act it will be the most emotional part ever (atleast till now) n it's a challenge 4 me 😳
n m glad u liked the dialouges hope u love the ones when i get the depressive part 😳

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

great update! 😃

thx dear 😃

Originally posted by: aahana86

thx simi😊
sure hon i'll post the next part asap
well he is gonna be depressed n tht part requires a lot of emotional stuff so m being very choosy abt what shd i write
act it will be the most emotional part ever (atleast till now) n it's a challenge 4 me 😳
n m glad u liked the dialouges hope u love the ones when i get the depressive part 😳

now im waiting for that part even more.. take ur time.. im sure u'll do ur best😃

gr8 part aahanaaaaaaaaa
totally luvd it
poor karan.....hez sad!!
cant wait 4 moreeeeee 😆
update ASAP now

i was readin da part in btwn da breaks of nach baliye 😆 cudnt concentrate preperly buh den now read it agn 😆

Originally posted by: Himu

gr8 part aahanaaaaaaaaa
totally luvd it
poor karan.....hez sad!!
cant wait 4 moreeeeee 😆
update ASAP now

i was readin da part in btwn da breaks of nach baliye 😆 cudnt concentrate preperly buh den now read it agn 😆

thx himuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
i m so grateful for ur sweet comments 😳
well will update asap

abt NB3 m so glad AS won

u no wat i have noticed in every NB season jodi no 7 seems to be the most popular n is always my favourite

god it was so pathetic 2 see rakhi cry all day but 🤢

Originally posted by: stylishgal

now im waiting for that part even more.. take ur time.. im sure u'll do ur best😃

hey sim hon it's friends/fans like u ho keep me goin 😊

thx

Part 23:

The morning had ruined shweta' mood completely n she was venting it all out on karan.

S: tum mujhe batao koi zaroorat nahi tumhe Romeo banker mujhe help karne ki, main zyada se zyada har jaoongi na, fine it doesn't matter.

K: but it matters to me, main tujhe haarta nahi dekh sakta kabhi bhi, n I know tunne kitni mehnat ki hai is play aur competition ke liye.
Plus this is the last year so this chance would never come again, shwet how can I see u lose?

S: oh common karan please let go of me (she began to try to make karan release her arm, but the more she tried the stronger he held her) chhodo mujhe chhodo karan, I said leave me.

K(releasing her arm angrily): fine here u go, shweta mujhe laga that being best friends we will always be there for each other but I guess u r right y should I do anything, I'll give a damn to this whole thing now, do what u wish.

He begun moving just as angrily n speedily, shweta cooled down a bit n called out to him: wait karan, wait.

But being just as angry he too avoided her calls.

She too ran up to him similarly n then finally standing before him said: I'm sorry.

But he began looking the other way purposely n started walking again, she to followed: karan , karan please listen to me (held his hand, he stopped n so did she) tum toh jaante ho na aaj subah kya hua I was in a bad mood because of that please, aur main ab tumpe gussa nahi karoongi toh kispe karoongi.

Karan made a face, S: please I' m sorry maan jao tumhe pata hai Na I can't take it when u don't talk to me.

Finally he looked at her n said: I know shwet, its ok I forgive u.

S: jhoot mat bolo if u forgive me smile n say that

K (finally smiling): fine ok baba I forgive u.

S: that's like my best friend, n the two hugged.

Later they went to a quiet spot on the campus & sat there, s put her head on karan's shoulders, she put 1 of her arms under his n held his hand by her other hand. He simply pampered her by putting his hand over her head.

S: actually karan main tumpe dad ka gussa nikal rahi thi, mujhe pasand nahi ki woh aise baatein karein.

K: I know shwet but woh tere dad hain don't behave like that with him

S: aur woh jo karte hai karan meri samajh main nahi aata ki tum kabhi unki baton ka jawab kyun nahi dete

K: kyunki woh bade hai

S: par woh galat hai karan.

K: ha par woh tere dad hai, aur aunty ke husband how can I insult him?

S: magar woh tumhe insult kar sakte hai karan kyun karte ho aisa? Jawab do unhe aur nahi dena toh mujhe mat rook kissi ko unhe batana hi chahiye ki woh galat hai, toh woh main hi sahi.

K: nahi shwet, tu uncle se aise baat nahi karegi kam se kam mere liye to bilkul nahi.

S (lifting her head from his shoulder): par kyun, kyun na karoo woh aadmi kabhi nahi samjhega phir, tum kyun darte ho unse?

K: main unse darta nahi I just respect him.

S: that man isn't worth any respect karan n u know it.

K: shwet

S: I m telling the truth. Aakhir kyun karan, kyun?

K: kyunki chahe jaise bhi ho woh, tere aur teri mom ke saath hai shwet, tum dono ke saath hai, mere dad ki ………….. (He stopped mid way)

Saying this he left while shweta just looked at him leave.

aahanaaaaa 😆
omigosh.......poor karan i feel so sad 4 him
mihir shud b hanged 😡 LOSER guy!! 😡
aahana bring mihir bak to em 😳 😆 not dat um tryin to intrude in ur writing 😆 jus cant c my karan all unhappy 😛

it was a fab part 😳

post next part soon 😃