gr88 yaar!!! 👏 👏 👏
esp loved the last dialogue of gauri n the hug!
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😆 I got confused in the begining, I gathered that it's a song, but I was thinking it's about spending so I imagined it's in shoppping mall or somewhere, anyhow I was close atleast 😉 u were so close....dis part was abt shoppin datz y me gave dat song😆
nice writting style himu, like novels 😳 and I see that you have this flare for western music,😃 which is good 👏 thnx so much kim😳😃i luvvv hip hop and R&B😳
Pratham is getting bored of shopping 😆 he must be looking very cute, getting irritated, bust still sticking by, how sweet of him 😍 cuteee....u temme....😉....Pratham can neva b uncute wen im writin abt him....can he😉😆😆
but he'll never understand the excitement of shopping... yea!! u knw boyz....dey neva understand😕😆
hehehe and he is trying to understand gauri, he shouldn't waste his chota saa brain 😆 , girl's are always mystry 😳 chota sa brain😆i lyk da sound of it....galz r a mystery buh dis 1 gal gona giv Pratham a run😉😆😆
awww that is so sweet he can't live without her, and he knows that 😳 dey r best pals after all😳
awww she loves him, but she doesn't know, I think he doesn't know either he is sooo cute (guari's words are so beatiful 😳 ) luv!! mayb or maybe NOT😉😉
haa that perfect hug 😍 😭 yesh PERFECT iz da word! y u cryin tho😕😕
I love it 👏 👏 👏 thank you Himu 😳
Awesome Job Himu 👏 Your fanfic is greatt 😃
KN 😭
Hey I just watched the video of the song, so it's from 80s yeah, 80s music was really good, nowadays it's very hard to find good music, once in few years a song comes that touches your heart (here I'm talking about american/western music only)
it was really good, I also have few favourite songs from 80s...
thanks for sharing himu😃 (appreciated😳)
Originally posted by: stylishgal
hiya himu. i love the song u put at the beginning. its one of ma favz. love the story so far. keep going on the same way. the story is shaping up very well
Originally posted by: sanober88
thnk dear by the way u r rocking kutumb forum .. so plz continue!!! i agve a good idea foor ff right?😆
yeah her fan fic is really adicted and very different from other fan fic, well, I've hardly read any other but I tried reading but nothing got me adicted like this😆
great story line, (PM looks so cute) and very well written👏👏👏
Originally posted by: hiten_fan
awesome!!!! 👏
gr88 yaar!!! 👏 👏 👏
esp loved the last dialogue of gauri n the hug!
Originally posted by: gaurihiten fan
awww himu,the part was so cute 😳 ,it ended so soon 😭 soon! i thot i wrote so much dat i wud bore u ppl😆😆
the hugs,peck on cheek is just perfect 😳 😳 😳 ,Pratham hai hi itna kissable 😆 😆 kissable!! aah....hu wud knw betta dan me😆
both love each other so much,awww 😳 😳 😳 dnt be so sure abt it already😉
Pratham hates shopping bt he is still with Gauri on her shopping,with her,aww that's called dosti 😳 ,the true love 👏 yea.....Pratham iz jus a sweetheart😳yea!! tru friendship😃no comments on da luv tho😆
n Gauri,that gurl is surely vry moody,stubborn 😳 bt loves Pratham dearly 😃 ,she even dn't knw that she is in madly love with her best frnd 😳 😳 😳 yea!! dis Gauri iz gona outdo Pratham Mittal in being a brat! dat i can assure u of😆😆take it a lil easy on da luv part....lots to go thru😆
himu,u rock mannn,u totally n completely rockk dost 👏 thnx so much sujata😳😃
last bt not the least post the 3rd part jaldi himu 😳 ,u can see the craziness of ur fanfic among us 😳 i ll try postin it quick enuf!!😃
kim *faint* i luv ur comments
jus lyk a review of da whole part
thnxxx so much🤗
hehehe😆 I'm glad you like my comments
ya Pratham always looks cute and you make him look cuter😃
hehehe are you trying to give us heart atack by saying "maybe not"😆
I was crying because I litterly got tears in my eyes while reading, (seeing them hug each other), 😳it was so touchy😍
ya I got addicted😃 I love this story😃 cool you wrote,
PM is so young and happening, which we don't get to see in serials nowadays😭😭😭
and I love your teen style writing😳
[quote=Himu]nah kim ur mistaken here a bit
da song came out in 2005!!
itz one ma fav dance numbers😃u can really move it to da beats init😆😆
glad u lykd it😃 [/quote]
😆 it's not 80's
see, my awareness of western music😆😆😆 I'm total zero there😆
but it sounds so much like 80's good music😃
it's very cool, I thought nowadays they don't make such songs...
but it's really good and yeah a perfect match for shopping scene it helps you picture all the shopping atmosphere and mall and everything😃
👏👏👏
too good,
egarly waiting for your next part😃