Punar Vivah ..Remarriage...Season2 PreeRan FF Last Part 24 pg16 - Page 7

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Posted: 5 years ago
#61

Hi

The character sketch is really amazing

The story is really well

So the family is wanting KAran to remarry as his wife left him and their daughter but the way is behaving with all will it be okay for Preetha to marry him

i am doubtful

Anyway let's see what holds next

As they both are travelling in the same boat of pain

Do pm me

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hi

The part is good

So KAran's past is finally revealed

It was really bad what had happened with him

Indira did very bad with him

She married him for fulfilling her own goal and then felt him devastated

Poor Karan lost his faith on love

Let's see how Preetha can change his life if this alliance take place

Pm me

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Posted: 5 years ago
#63

Lovely Update


I'm glad that Preeta now understands Karan

and that is just great

they are married now

but Indira too wants Karan , she is crazy

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Posted: 5 years ago
#64

Thanks for 2nd PM


Have just read earlier and commented

thank you very much

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Thanks a lot 4 lovely comments n likes



Punar Vivah ..Remarriage...Season2 Part 12

Karan was snoring during his sleep.

Preeta was getting irritated.She looked at him angrily.

Preeta:I wish I could put a plaster over his mouth.But ...

Preeta covered her head with the bed sheet angrily.

Indira was not able to sleep.

Indira:Is Karan having suhaag raat with Preeta now?No..I can't imagine it.On our suhaag raat the whole night he slept on my lap.

It was so romantic.

Will he do the same thing with Preeta also?

Nooooooooooooo....

She screamed.

In the morning...

Karan woke up yawning.He saw Preeta staring at him angrily.

Karan:Why are you staring at me?

Preeta:How horrible you are during your sleep!The whole night you were snoring.It was unbearable.y sleep got disturbed.

Karan was embarrassed.

But he put attitude and said:If you find it a disturbance put a cotton in your ears or go sleep outside.

He smirked.

Preeta smirked:I can sleep outside.But your family will be angry with you for throwing me out of the room.

Karan:My family is always angry with me.I don't care.But Papa and Maa's long lectures are what I can't tolerate.

Preeta went out of the room smirking.

Preeta was bathing Anjali and Sanjana.Both were enjoying the bath.Simar was watching it with a smile.Anjali and Sanjana poured water on Preeta and laughed.

Preeta:Naughty girls drenched me.



Simar went to the bedroom with a smile.

Prem:You look very happy today.

Simar:Ya.I am happy that I took the right decision of bringing Preeta here.Preeta is so caring and loving towards Anjali.For her,both Anjali and Sanjana are equal.

Prem:Simar...in that aspect your decision was correct.But Preeta is also a wife.

If she does'nt get love from her husband your decision to bring her here will be wrong.

Simar became dull.

All were seated to have break fast.

Simar:Why are you looking so tired Preeta?Are you alright?

Preeta:I am alright Mummiji.Actually I could not sleep properly.The whole night Karan did not allow me to sleep.That's why.

Krithika:The whole night Karan bhai did'nt allow bhabhi to sleep?

Vivan,Sameer,Krithika and Simar were smiling.

Sameer smirked:Karan bhai...it's too bad that the whole night you did'nt let Preeta bhabhi sleep.

Karan was embarrassed.

He stared at Sameer:Sameer!

Sameer tried to suppress his laughter.

Prem:Why did'nt you allow Preeta to sleep Karan?When you can sleep,why can't Preeta sleep?So cruel.

All were chuckling except Karan.

Simar whispered:Premji...sometimes you are innocent like a kid.You did'nt understand anything?

Prem who was clueless asked:What?

Simar winked at Prem.

Then she whispered in his ear:Now did you understand?

Prem got embarrassed.

Preeta was busy feeding Anjali and Sanjana.

Karan-Preeta's room....

Karan shouted at Preeta:Why the hell did you tell my family members that I did'nt allow you to sleep at night?

Preeta:I said the truth.Due to continuous snoring I could'nt sleep.

I think you snored purposefully to disturb my sleep.By the way I really enjoyed when Prem papa scolded you for not allowing me to sleep.

Karan:Stop it.They all misunderstood me.They think that I did'nt allow you to sleep because I was trying to get intimate with you.

Preeta:What?

Karan:Dumbo...you did'nt understand that also.

Preeta burst into laughter.

Karan:Why are you laughing?

Preeta:It's so funny that they all thought that the unromantic Karan was busy in romance.

Karan:Stop it.You really embarrassed me in front of my family.You are horrible.

Preeta:At least they think that we both are leading a normal married life.Let your family be happy with this misunderstanding.At least they deserve that much of happiness.

Karan was silent.

Simar went near Karan-Preeta.

Simar:Preeta beta...kitchen ceremony is there.

Preeta:I know mummiji.I will cook.

Simar:Our kitchen ceremony is different.Here the husband and the wife should cook together.

Preeta was surprised:Really?It will be cool.

Karan was shocked:How come you introduce such horrible rituals Maa?

Simar said in her mind:I will try my best to make Karan spend time with Preeta and make them closer.

Simar:Don't question me and do what I say.Go help Preeta in the kitchen.

Preeta felt like laughing seeing Karan's state.

Simar:By the way Preeta...today you look very pretty.

Preeta:Thank you mummiji.

Karan:Maa....how many times did I tell you to do your eye check up.As days pass your eye sight is becoming worse and worse.I will fix an appointment and take you to an eye specialist.

Simar:What are you saying Karan?Who said that my eye sight is poor now?

Karan:Your sight is poor,that's why you find Preeta pretty.

Simar and Preeta stared at Karan angrily.

Preeta murmured:He can't even tolerate anyone giving me good compliments.So jealous and insecure.

Simar:I think you need to do your eye test properly.Then only you will see how beautiful Preeta is.

Simar left the room while Karan was embarrassed.Preeta laughed irritating him more.

Karan-Preeta were in the kitchen.

Preeta tried to take wheat flour from the top.Though she managed to take it ,it slipped off her hand and most of the flour fell on Karan's head.A little bit fell over her also.

Karan:What the hell!

Preeta:I don't know how it slipped off my hand.

Karan:You are so irritating.

Preeta:I am sorry Karan.

Karan:I don't need your fake apology.I know that you purposefully did it to me.

Preeta:What?

Karan:Ya..you took revenge on me as your sleep got disturbed.

Preeta lost her control:You know what?You are sick.

Karan:I am sick?You are sick.

They kept arguing.


The coincidence was that almost the same time Anshuman and Pakhi were preparing food together in the kitchen.

Anshuman noticed All purpose sour on Pakhi’s face.He started wiping her face with his hand.

They looked at each other romantically.

Then they looked at the food.

Pakhi:It’s ready.

Pakhi tasted it:Wow Anshuman..our new recipe worked.It’s successful.

Anshuman:Cool..give me also.

Pakhi:Not cool,it’s real hot.

They both giggled.

Pakhi fed him food with her hand.He smiled.

They finished the food by feeding each other sweetly.

After some hours...

Preeta served lunch to everyone.

Prem:The food is really nice.

Everyone appreciated the food.

Preeta smiled while Karan was not bothered.

Simar:It shows that when Karan and Preeta are together they can create magic.

Prem and others smiled.

Karan-Preeta stared at each other.

Kabir and Ruchika were playing Carroms in the garden.

Ruchika:See...I am winning.

Kabir:You are a genius Roo.

Ruchika said proudly:Ya...it's not easy to defeat Ruchika Luthra.

Kabir giggled:Ok ok..I agree.

He pulled her closer cupping her face:

And I am proud of you my clever wife.

She smiled.


Aaaa.. aaa…aaaa

Labon ko Labon pe sajao
Kya ho tum mujhe ab batao

Aaaa.. aaa…aaaa

Labon ko Labon pe sajao
Kya ho tum mujhe ab batao

He came closer to her rubbing his forehead with hers.She blushed.


Todh do khud ko tum

Banhon mein meri
Banhon mein meri

They embraced each other romantically.

Banhon mein meri
Banhon mein meri
Banhon mein meri
Banhon mein –2

Aaaaa.. aaa..(Bhool bhulaiyya).

Sameer saw Shrishti walking on the street.He became happy.He stopped the car and walked towards her.Seeing Sameer,she walked towards him happily.Her foot slipped and she fell over Sameer.They both embraced each other for balance.They were lost in each other.

Maine puchha ye dil se
Main kyun hoon jahaan mein
Ek dhadkan boli tere liye..

Coming back to senses they broke their embrace.

Still they were very close to each other.

They shared a romantic eye lock.


Maine yaadein taraashi
Aur khwaab bana di


Nayi duniya basa di, tere liye..
Tere liye.. tere liye..
Tere liye.. tere liye..(Fitoor).

They came back to senses.

Shrishti:I am sorry...

Sameer:Why are you saying sorry?Falling is something which happens with anyone.

She smiled.

They sat on the corner.

Sameer:Where is your vehicle?

Shrishti:Something is wrong with it.So I gave it to the workshop.

Sameer:Come,I will drop you.

She nodded holding his hand.

Both were in the car.

Shrishti:Sammy...Gauri was engaged to Vivek.Then how did she get married to Rishab?

Edited by jasminerahul - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#66

thanks for the pm!

incredible update! well written.

Hate Indira!

Gosh Karan snores! feeling for Preeta!

great seeing Preeta taking care of the Anjali and Sanjana!

Ha ha Preeta's comment gives a different meaning!

of cos Karan is peeved!

interesting ritual.

as expected they argue!

finally Shristi asks about Rishabh!

update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#67

Fabulous Update



I totally enjoyed when Preeta tells

Karan's family he didn't allow her to sleep

at night

and they all probably thinking he was romantic

Preeta tells Karan about his snoring at night and

keeping her awake

Preeta taking care of Anjali and Sanjana is great

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Posted: 5 years ago
#68

Part 10

Indira realized her mistake of leaving Karan but it is too late. Indira is so cheap that she wants to stop the Preeran wedding. She left Anjali and is claiming that she is Anjali's mother. Glad that Simar told her that giving birth to the child does not make her a mother. Loved Preeta staying strong. Good that Karan supported Preeta against Indira despite the ill-feelings he has towards her. Sad that Karan is pretending to be happy in front of Indira.

Part 10 page 2

Karan telling Preeta that just because he supported her against Indira does not mean that he accepted her wholeheartedly was blunt. It is obvious that anyone in Preeta's place will get hurt.

I loved the dance scenes of all the couples.


Part 10 page 3

Preeta's hope of Karan's acceptance is understandable. Karan holding Preeta's hand looks romantic. The Preeran haldi scene was also romantic.


Part 11

Sad that Sid agreed to support Indira though it was reluctant. Preeran wedding took place. All other couple scenes are romantic. Preeta making Karan smile through a challenge was funny. The songs are romantic. Nice pics


Part 12

The preeran snoring scene was funny. The Shrishmeer scenes are romantic. Preeta bathing Sanjana & Anjali is cute. Simar's idea of making Karan & Preeta cook together is to get them closer. I loved those tactics.

Edited by vatika_r - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#69

It was just an amazing update..

Eagerly waiting for next chapter...

Plz update soon...😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
#70

Thank u very much friends

Punar Vivah ..Remarriage...Season2 Part 13

Sameer:Gauri's fiance Vivek was a pilot.He was assumed to be dead in a plane crash.So Gauri agreed to marry Rishab bhai when this alliance came.Maa knew how much Rishab bhai loves Gauri.So it was Maa who decided to get them hitched.Thus they got married.

Shrishti:Gauri loved Vivek very much.Then how did she agree to marry Rishab so easily?

Rishab:Even Rishab bhai was confused whether Gauri was forced to marry him.So before marriage itself Rishab bhai met Gauri to talk about it.

Flash back...

Rishab:Gauri..you can tell me openly.Are you fine with our alliance?

Gauri:Yes Rishab.I am willing to marry you.

Rishab:I know how much you loved Vivek.So did anyone force you to marry me?

Gauri:No Rishab.No one forced me.It is my wish.

Rishab:Are you sure?

Gauri:Because I don't want to waste my life over a cheater.

Rishab was shocked:What?

Gauri:Yes.I went for my school friend Vishaka's engagement function.I was shocked to see Vivek and Vishaka attending guests together.

Seeing me Vishaka came towards me with Vivek.

Past...

Vishaka:Hi Gauri...

so happy that you came here.

This is my fiance Vivek.

Gauri was shocked.

Vivek:Hi Gauri...Vish had told me about you.Nice to meet you.

Gauri was numb due to shock.

Vivek-Vishaka was called by the photographer for photographs.

During the photo session before even seeing the ring exchange Gauri left.

Continuation of flash back...

Rishab was shocked.

Gauri's tears were shining in her eyes.She wiped them.

Gauri:Vivek behaved as if he does'nt remember me.I saw his parents there while leaving from there.But shockingly they gave me helpless expressions.They did not care about my feelings while supporting their son's betrayal.Seeing Vishaka's happiness I did not want to hurt her.After all i met her after a long time.So I did'nt tell her the truth.Tell me Rishab..should'nt I forget a cheater like Vivek?

Rishab:Yes.You are right Gauri.He does'nt deserve you..

Present...

Shrishti:Then why did their marriage did'nt work?Why did Rishab and Gauri get separated?I can't ask this to Rishab as it will remind him of his failed marriage and he will be hurt.

Sameer stopped the car before her house.

Sameer:I will tell you that another day Shrishti.

Shrishti:Ok..bye.

Sameer:Bye.

Anshuman-Pakhi were walking holding each other's hands in the sand on the beach .

Pakhi:Walking on the beach in the sand is so refreshing.

Anshuman:Yes.This place never loses it's charm.It's evergreen like our love.


Haaaaaa............
haaaaaa............
Bairi jiya tumpe piya
machle...

Pakhi:I just love the everlasting waves here.It reminds me of our love.I really love you Anshuman.

Sambhalu na isse
Ek paheli, latt si uljhi
Kaise.....
sanwaarun na tumhe

Anshuman:I know.Even after my death you will continue loving me.I know that.

Pakhi became upset.

Maan ja meri jaan
Jaanejaan maanja
Hai bandhe dor se
na tu haath chuda

Pakhi:You are talking about your death.Are you thinking of leaving me alone and going?

I don't want to talk to you.

Pakhi tried to walk away.Anshuman held her hand:Pakhi.

She turned back and looked at him.

Bol dil se bol dil se
Jhooth na tu yun bol dil se
Bol dil se bol dil se
Jhooth na tu yun bol dil se...

Anshuman:Why are you so angry?

Pakhi:Then should I laugh?

Anshuman held her hand:I am sorry.I promise you that I will never leave you and go anywhere.

Pakhi smiled.

Tumse kuche.. baat karke
Meethi meethi.. yun hi ladke
Utrungi main dil ke, main dil ke angane
Utrungi main dil ke, main dil ke angane

Pakhi:Our love is immortal and we will leave this world together only.

Chanda reee...
teri chandani banke

They shared an emotional eye lock.

Khol dil ke khol dil ke
Darwaje tu khol na dil ke

Pakhi:Anyways you need to be punished for talking like this.

Anshuman:What?

Pakhi:Yes.So I am going to punish you now.

Anshuman:Oh no..

Pakhi moved closer to Anshuman.


Bol dil se bol dil se
Jhooth na tu yun bol dil se

Then he pecked his cheek softly.


Bol dil se bol dil se
Jhooth na tu yun bol dil se

He looked at her in surprise.

Pakhi:If you repeat this I will bite your cheek instead of kissing it.It's my last warning.

He smiled:Ok.

They embraced each other.

Haaaaaa............
haaaaaa............
Bairi jiya tumpe piya
machle.....
Sambhalu na isse
Ek paheli, latt si uljhi
Kaise.....
sanwaarun na tumhe(Tumhari Pakhi).

Simar gave saree and jewellery to Preeta.

Simar:There is a puja in our family temple.It's a couple puja.It's believed that the couples who go there get blessed by God.Wear this and go to the temple with Karan.

Preeta:Sure mummiji.

Karan came:What rubbish!I cannot do any couple puja with Preeta.

Simar:You have to go Karan.Panditji is waiting there.Why do you want to insult that innocent person?

Karan:Oh no...what all rituals married couples have in India.No peace of mind.

Karan walked to his room.

Simar:Don't mind it beta.

Preeta:It's ok mummiji.

Preeta got ready in the traditional saree and jewellery to go to the temple.

Karan and Preeta sat in the car.

Karan:You look like a 60's heroine in this primitive attire.

Preeta smiled:No problem.I take it as a compliment as 60's heroines are gorgeous.

Karan was embarrassed.Preeta smirked.

They reached the temple.There were many stair steps to climb.When they were about to climb them

2 old ladies stopped them.

One lady:Here the husband has to carry the wife in his arms and climb upstairs.

Preeta blushed while Karan got angry.

Karan:What rubbish!I cannot carry you Preeta.

Those ladies were shocked.

Karan:How can you disrespect such customs if you love your wife?

Preeta became upset.

Preeta:Actually he finds me fat.That's why he is hesitant to carry me in his arms.

Karan:Good that you admitted that you are fat.

Lady:She is not fat.Something is wrong with your eyes.Without any fuss carry her inside.

Preeta whispered in his ear:What if Indira is stalking us and these women are sent by her to spy us?

Karan:What?

Preeta smiled artificially:So carry me in your arms Karan.

Suppressing his irritation Karan lifted her up in his arms and climbed the stair steps.

Preeta smiled thinking:Hearing indira's name itself he carried me in his arms.Very funny.But it's so nice to be in Karan's arms.

Karan:I can't carry you anymore.I am putting you down.

Preeta:But Karan...

Suddenly Karan's eyes fell on someone.It was Indira.

Karan:You are right Preeta.Indira has come here also.

Preeta was shocked.She looked the other side and saw Indira.

Preeta:Indira!

Karan:Ya..Her eyes are always on us.

She thought:My lie turned true.

Karan:Let her think that I am enjoying my honeymoon period.

He continued walking carrying her.Preeta smiled happily while Indira was getting irritated.

After reaching upstairs they looked at Indira.She was fuming in anger.

Karan:It's so fun to watch her expression seeing me with you.

Preeta:You are right.It's fun to watch her like this.

As per the instructions of the Punditji Karan-Preeta did the puja together.

Punditji:Now hold your wife's hand and walk around the Murti thrice.

Karan held Preeta's hand

and walked around the Murti.Preeta felt blessed.

Punditji:Fill your wife's hair partition with vermilion.

Karan took a pinch of vermilion and put it on her hair partition.Preeta felt heavenly.

Punditji:The puja is complete.God bless you both.You both will have a long married life.

Preeta smiled

while Karan was least bothered.

Karan-Preeta came out of the temple.

Karan:I don't value about this couple puja, sindoor ceremony and the punditji's blessings for us.

Preeta became upset.

They reached home.

Preeta:Anju..Sanju...we have brought sweet prasad for both of you.

Anjali and Sanjana came running towards them.

Sanjana opened her mouth before Karan:Feed me papa.

Anjali also opened her mouth.

Karan walked off silently.Everyone felt bad.

Preeta:I will feed you both.

Sanjana:Why papa is not feeding us mumma?

Anjali:Papa is always like this Sanju.

Preeta became upset.

Preeta fed them prasad.

Preeta went inside the room.

Preeta:What is this Karan?Anju and Sanju love you a lot.Why are you so cold towards them?

Karan:Because I am not a mahan.I cannot stand those kids who are produced by those devils.

Preeta:But Anjali is produced by you also.

Karan:Don't waste time by arguing.I am not going to change.

Preeta became upset.

Simar was in tears:See Premji..how Karan is treating the poor innocent children.

Prem:I now.I also feel upset.You know how he is.Why do you keep hopes about him?

Simar was crying a lot.

Prem cupped her face in his hands:Simar..

Simar:As a mother I always wanted my son to reform.But...

Prem:Karan is not going to melt seeing your tears.Please understand that and don't cry too much and ruin your health.

Simar:You may be right.Karan may never change.

They both embraced each other weeping.

Preeta came:Don't worry.I promise you all that I will change Karan.He himself will prefer to spend more time with his kids.

Prem-Simar smiled slightly.

Indira was going crazy thinking of Karan carrying Preeta in his arms.

Indira:I will not allow Karan to recreate the romance he did with me.I will destroy their romance.

Pakhi and Anshuman arranged a dinner for Karan-Preeta in a restaurant.

Karan-Preeta went to the restaurant.

Karan:I did'nt want to disrespect your parents as unlike you they are very nice.Otherwise i would not have come here with you.

Preeta said sarcastically:Anyways you accompanied me here.That's a great thing.

Karan ignored her.

Preeta thought:Let me try to melt this rock heart.Since there is no other option let me try the trick which we see in movies.In movies heroes touch the heroine's feet with their feet under the dining table.Here since Karan is unromantic and boring let me try it.

Preeta kicked Karan's foot with hers softly in a seductive manner.

Karan started laughing as he felt ticklish.

Preeta thought:I tried to seduce him.But instead of getting seduced he is laughing.Which clay did God use to create him?

Karan was laughing like hell.

Preeta took back her leg from his.

Preeta:Why are you laughing like a donkey?

Karan:I think some creature was licking my foot.I felt ticklish.

Preeta:Licking?You are impossible.

Karan looked down to see if there is any creature.

He did not find any creature.

Karan:I don't find any creature there.I wonder which creature tickled me.

Preeta thought:Did God take back his brain also along with his heart?

Anshuman and Pakhi rang up Preeta and Karan on video call.

Anshuman:How was the dinner date?

Karan faked a smile:It was cool Daddyji.

Anshuman:I knew that my dinner date arrangement will be loved by my son in law.

Karan thought:My father in law is simply misunderstanding me.

Pakhi:Was the food good?

Preeta:Yes Maa.Everything was too good.Thank you very much.

Shrishti came in between:Was the first dinner date romantic?

Preeta chuckled:Oh yes.After all your jeeju is very romantic.Right Karan?

Karan-Preeta smiled at each other artificially.

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