RishTa FF: The Storm that never came

RishabhXPreeta thumbnail
6th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
#1

This fan-fiction engages in a time-line where Rishabh and Preeta are both married to Sherlyn and Karan respectively, and Rishabh is already aware of Sherlyn's infidelity, but NOT the entire truth. No one single individual has even the faintest idea of the entire truth. However, Karan in a ploy to take further revenge on Preeta for arranging Kritika's marriage with Prithvi is (seen) to be caught in a rather compromising position with Mahira. (However, nothing in ACTUALITY has happened between Mahira and Karan). This one shot deals with a fantasy that has been etched in the authors heart for quite a long time.

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Ek taraf Sherlyn Rishabh ko dhoka de rahi hai aur dusri side Karan bhi (dikha raha hai) Preeta ko dhoka de raha tha.

During that weak moment of vulnerability, Rishabh and Preeta cry their hearts out to each other.

It was a rather stormy night. It almost felt as thou the whether was conspiring with them, it was making them think things, do things, that Rishabh and Preeta would normally NOT do. When the electricity decides to give in flowing along with the roaring sky, these two petrified, beautiful souls simply give in to latent sexual tension building up within them for the past three/four years.

Preeta kisses Rishabh almost by accident,

Rishabh resist at first, lekin phir wo Preeta ke ankhon mei aansu dekhta hai, aise aansu usne apne Preeta ji ke aankho kabhi bhi nahi dekhe. Preeta ke aankho mei aansu tab bhi the jis din Kareena bua ne uske upar Ruby chori ka ilzaam lagaya tha, Preeta ke aankho mei aansun uss din bhi the jis din Preeta uske liye jail mei khaana leykar aayi thi. Preeta ke aankhon mei aansu uss din bhi the, jis din Mehul ne Rishabh ke bachelors party mei Preeta ke saath badtameezi ki thi aur Preeta ke aankhon mei tab bhi aansun the jab Rishabh uske shaadi wale din apni dosti todke aaraha tha. Lekin aise aansu Rishabh ne Preeta ke aankho mei pehli baar dekhe the. Yeh, ashke thi Preeta ke insecurity ki, uski vulnerability ki, aur Rishabh ye bhi mehsus kar paa raha tha ke Preeta kitni unattractive feel kar rahi thi.

But most importantly Rishabh could see it in her eyes that Preeta felt almost unwanted. Rishabh couldn't see all the emotions that he could see in her eyes and feel all her vulnerabilities in equal measures and not gives in to the moment.

Rishabh returns the kiss, with all the love in his heart, with all the affection that he has harboured inside himself for only GOD knows how long. Rishabh and Preeta both give in to their natural almost feral interior emotions and continue to sway in each others arms relishing the depth of ecstasy and passion. They were making out in a rather gentle, yet authoritative manner, a rather sweet, yet almost visceral in their state of being.

LEKIN

SUDDENLY

Preeta ka mangalsutra Rishabh ke shirt ke button se atak jaata hai and both of them come out of there trance. Rishabh sweetly almost carefully kisses Preeta in the forehead, just so that he is careful not to hurt her feelings, and says:

'Aaj nahi'-

Preeta becomes angry, sad, emotional and almost about to erupt in her rage and sadness right then right there Rishabh says-

'Preeta ji aapko nahi pata aapko aapne baho mei utaarne ki khwahish iss dil ne kab se paal ke rakkhi hai, lekin ye Rishabh apne Preeta ji DIL mei apne aap ko pehle rakhna chahta hai, hamaara RishTa mere liye bohot maine rakhta hai aapke aankho mei jo mere liye izzat hai jo parwah hai wo mere liye bohot maine rakhti hai.'

Rishabh takes a deep breath and then a long sigh, followed by a short pause. He takes his time to gather his thoughts to gather his words-

'Mere liye ye matter nahi karta ke aap iswaqt kisi aur ki patni hai ya phir mai kisi aur ka pati, kyunke aap ko bhi pata hai aur mujhko bhi ke wo rishtey ab sirf naam ke hai, lekin mai aapki yaadon mei dil mei sharm banke nahi rehna chahta, aap ke jism ko paane ki arzoo se maine kabhi bhi apne mohabbat ko nahi tola. Lekin hamesha aapke dil mei aapne liye jagah banane ki aarzo rakhi hai, Aur jis din aapke dil ne iss Rishabh ko apnaliya uss din se mai bhi aapka, mera jism bhi aapka aur meri rooh bhi aapki.'

And after saying that, he gets up picks up her dupatta wraps her up in her dupatta and leaves with her to their respective rooms.

Created

Last reply

Replies

7

Views

2.9k

Users

6

Likes

20

Frequent Posters

jaanulovejaanam thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
#2

Its so beautifully written...👍🏼❤️ after reading it...by ur style... I got it who r u ...!❤️

each and every emotion is portrayed welll... pls continue it ...❤️

TheM5393 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Fascinator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
#3

Originally posted by: jaanulovejaanam

Its so beautifully written...👍🏼❤️ after reading it...by ur style... I got it who r u ...!❤️

each and every emotion is portrayed welll... pls continue it ...❤️

Thank You!!!!

This is a one shot...... btw my friend has a twitter handle @onRishTa... do follow!!! 😃

Edited by TheM5393 - 5 years ago
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
#4

preeta accidentally kissing rishab n rishab kissing her back was passionate n emotional. but the best part was rishab's dialogues.he doesn't care about their marital status as their marriage is for name sake. but loved the fact that for him preeta's respect for him in her heart is very important n he made it clear that his love is not to conquer her body...he will claim her only if she expresses her feelings.too good.but I wish for preeta's pov also

jaanulovejaanam thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: TheM5393

Thank You!!!!

This is a one shot...... btw my friend has a twitter handle @onRishTa... do follow!!! 😃

I know her well alreadyand following her too there because she is my bestie too.. we call her anamika..😆❤❤(the one whose name is unknown to us..)

anyways.. its beautiful one shot..just love ittt,...❤❤❤❤

Edited by jaanulovejaanam - 5 years ago
millyvega1997 thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
#6

Amazing continue soon

an_am thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
#7

this FF is amazing. i actually want something along these lines to happen in the show. mostly because i want karan to be taught a lesson.

Edited by an_am - 5 years ago
RishabhXPreeta thumbnail
6th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 5 years ago
#8

Thank You everyone for the kind words. This was my first attempt at writing something like this. Half the time my imagination runs wild, and I imagine and think absolutely futuristic plot scenarios for Kundali Bhagya. Although, we all are aware how far the show really is from any sort of possible progress in any track for that matter.

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".